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Oreskes Material Contents Oreskes FRANKEN-PAPER .....................................................................................2 ORESKES – Combined Charting ..............................................................................5 SCHEDULE .............................................................................................................10 CLAIMS & STRATEGIES .....................................................................................10 Strategies to look for in Oreskes’ “Climate Change: How do we know we’re not wrong?” ....................................................................................................................13 Oreskes FRANKEN-PAPER INTRODUCTION ■ 1. The rhetoric of arguments both for and against climate change makes it hard for the general public to determine credible sources on the topic. Attempting to discern a scientific consensus amid a contentious political atmosphere only increases the challenge of dividing fact from fiction. In an excerpt titled, “The Scientific Consensus on Climate Change: How Do We Know We’re Not Wrong,” professor and environmental author Naomi Oreskes argues that, indeed, there is a scientific consensus on human-induced climate change which threatens natural environments. Oreskes dispels the misconception of a lack of a scientific consensus on climate change by illustrating the public’s confusion concerning scientific research, compiling evidence from scientific journals to prove contrarians have misled the public about climate change’s validity, and pointing out that even though future predictions about climate change always involve uncertainty, a consensus about its existence still permeates the scientific community. Oreskes develops her argument in a logical and well organized method, attempting to warn the public to heed to a scientific consensus that humans are negatively impacting the climate. ■ 2. The topic of global climate change, as evidenced by its growing popularity in both academic journals and mainstream media, is an important one, and as students and rhetoricians alike, it should pique our interest. UCSD professor Naomi Oreskes ably manages this task by asserting her argument; she compels us to consider if the scientific consensus surrounding global climate change is wrong. Ultimately, Oreskes comes to the conclusion that the consensus is in fact not wrong, and arrives at this stance by examining several scientific methods and essentially, putting scientific consensus to the test in each scenario. She does this in order to demonstrate the reality of this accordance among scientists, and further, implores us to examine the implications of this notion. By examining and analyzing Oreskes’ claims, evidence, and rhetorical strategies, we can begin to understand how this poignant argument is crafted, both consciously and unconsciously, to influence its readership of incipient college students and seasoned scholars alike. BODY PARAGRAPHS – Claims & Evidence ■ 3. After establishing that a consensus exists on human-induced climate change, Oreskes attempts to explain why the public is misinformed on the topic by claiming that “contrarians” distort the issue even though “most of them are not climate scientists and therefore have little (or no) basis to claim to be experts on the subjects on which they boldly pronounce” (74). She supports this claim by giving examples of contrarians like Frederick Seitz, a physicist, and Michael Crichton, a novelist, who are outspoken, but far from authorities. Oreskes also calls attention to the evidence used by such contrarians, saying that “they are simply attacking the work of others and mostly doing so in the court of public opinion and in the mass media rather than in the halls of science” (75). She then elaborates on this point by saying that the contrarians’ arguments are not published in scientific journals and therefore unreliable. Finally, Oreskes picks apart the “disingenuous” arguments that contrarians sometimes make by pointing out that an article often cited as an argument against human-induced climate change actually states explicitly that they do no such thing. These examples help explain the root of the average American’s confusion about the consensus while discrediting Oreskes’s opposition. ■4 One of Oreskes’ most persuasive and well-supported claims is that there is no longer any legitimate debate within the scientific community regarding whether or not human-induced climate change is occurring. To bolster this claim, she provides a study she herself conducted of articles published in a database of respected and peer-reviewed science journals, namely the Institute for Scientific Information. The conclusion she draws from her study is, as she acknowledges, “remarkable” (71) in that there is not a single article which refutes or even challenges the idea that human-induced climate change is occurring. She acknowledges, however, that this may be difficult for her audience to believe, and so clarifies by detailing precisely how she analyzed and categorized her data. She acknowledges that many of the papers did not explicitly support the idea of humaninduced climate change, but counters that this is, in many ways, further proof that she is correct. Scientists, she argues, “generally focus their discussions on questions that are still disputed or unanswered rather than on matters about which everyone agrees” (10). That they do not feel it is necessary to openly argue that humaninduced climate change is occurring, then, merely indicates that it has become an underlying warrant within the scientific community. Oreskes likewise points out that, despite the fact that some of the scientists who penned these articles may not have been in agreement with the consensus, none argued against it because “a skeptical motivation does not constitute scientific evidence” (72-3). Despite their skepticism, they were unable to uncover any evidence to refute the consensus position. 5 ■ One of the claims Oreskes makes is that climate science rests on a strong inductive base (81). She provides context and examples for what the inductive model is, using David Hume and the idea of comparing numbers of swans to make her point clear to a lay reader. She then goes on to provide relevant evidence from a number of studies that chart climate change, and shares the statistics that show how temperatures have been making dramatic shifts since the advent of the Industrial Revolution. 6 ■ If a scientific consensus on climate change exists, how come the general public is not aware of this consensus? One reason Oresekes presents as an explanation for this discrepancy is that scientists are not effective at presenting their findings to the public. In the past this lack of publicizing scientific findings may not have presented a problem for the average educated individual, as the “total number of scientists in the world was very small” and because “many scientists used language that was accessible to scientists in other disciplines as well as to serious amateurs,” meaning that educated individuals had a reasonable opportunity to learn about and understand current scientific research without the scientists having to make a deliberate effort to circulate and explain the findings (70). However, the same is not true today. Because the scientific community has grown in both size and complexity, the average educated person is unable to independently keep apprized of current scientific research. Yet Oreskes brings out that “most scientists consider their “real” work to be the production of knowledge, not its dissemination.” She even alludes to the existence of professional peer pressure in the scientific community that discourages scientists from publicizing their findings to a broader audience for fear of ““politicizing” the science and compromising their objectivity” (77). As a result, scientists have not adjusted their role as researchers to include disseminators of information and have left themselves open for misrepresentation by contrarians and “politically motivated think-tanks” who have economic interests in creating the impression of scientific uncertainty. BODY PARAGRAPHS – Strategies 7 ■ One of the most powerful strategies that Oreskes employs is control over the definition of the terms that frame the argument on Global Climate Change (GCC). At each step in the text, Oreskes is careful to be clear and to establish a foundation of support for her arguments. For instance, Oreskes begins the body of the chapter with a section completely dedicated to the idea of consensus. Oreskes bases her claim that a scientific consensus exists on GCC by defining the very idea of a consensus in terms that can (and will) be more easily supported by the kinds of evidence that Oreskes is able to provide. Oreskes claims that consensus is achieved in scientific literature, conference papers, and “in the hallways of ...university departments, research institutes, and government agencies” (pp. 67). She establishes control over the term consensus by framing it in a context with which she is familiar and assumes her lay audience is not. She is open about the difficulty of scientific “outsiders” in accessing these contexts, a point that supports another major claim that lay people are misinformed on climate science because of the lack of public access, accidental or intentional, to the context in which she argues consensus is formed. One of Oreskes major pieces of evidence in supporting the existence of a consensus on GCC is her study of major scientific papers on the subject (pp. 70). This evidence is lent credibility and power because it so neatly and clearly conforms to Oreskes own definition of scientific consensus. It is a definition that keeps the important idea of consensus under her influence, and out of reach for her opposition, who would likely include scientific papers and hallway conversations between colleagues as only a part of a more broadly located consensus. 8 ■ Oreskes provides powerful evidence showing there is scientific consensus on human-induced climate change, but notes that Americans “believe that scientists are still divided about the issue” (4). Oreskes attributes our confusion to a few things. First, she points out the attention the media pays to “a handful of dissenters” (12), climate scientists who disagree with the consensus. Next, she discusses the “significant number of contrarians” who are “not climate scientists and there have little (or no) basis to claim to be experts” (12-13). The use of the word “contrarian” suggests that these people are obstinate, that they disagree for the sake of disagreeing. By casting them in this light, she contrasts them with the scientists who “are finely honed specialists trained to create new knowledge” (15). In other words, the scientists work to create new knowledge to benefit humankind, and contrarians work against that knowledge. Oreskes casts these contrarians in a negative light by comparing them to contrarians in other fields, such as those who promote “the reality of UFOs or the claim that Lee Harvey Oswald was an agent of the Soviet Union” (13). By using this analogy and comparing their views to views her audience is likely to find ridiculous, she pushes them to the fringe. Yet, these contrarians are not just silly. Oreskes also portrays them as “determined and wellfinanced” (15) representatives, willing to misrepresent scientific information for financially motivated corporations such as ExxonMobil, which in 2004 ran a misleading advertising campaign in the New York Times. These advertisements were “carefully worded . . . written and formatted to look like newspaper columns and so-called op-ed pieces” (16) and argued that “climate science was far too uncertain to warrant action on it” (16). She notes that this information clearly contradicted the views climate scientists, who “have concluded that existing research warrants that decisions and policies be made today” (16). By contrasting the scientifically based conclusions of scientists “trained to create new knowledge” (15) against corporations and individuals who misrepresent that knowledge for questionable motives, she strengthens the credibility of the scientists and the scientific information they provide. CONCLUSION 9 ■ In conclusion…Oreskes’s chapter, “The Scientific Consensus on Climate Change: How Do We Know We’re Not Wrong,” is an important text and an effective argument. It is an important text because it addresses a popular and seemingly controversial topic in an effort to inform, clarify and validate scientific positions on climate change. But global warming is not only popular or controversial, it is a subject of considerable importance to our nation (and the world) due to the implications of ignoring it, if, as Oreskes argues, human activities are a significant contributing factor. The text is an effective argument because Oreskes’s primary appeal is reasonable and logical, which may stand in contrast to the ubiquitous emotional appeals (for and against) swirling in public discourse. Oreskes builds her personal ethos with this reasoned approach and, by avoiding a sky-is-falling message, plus her impressive academic credentials, she creates credibility; even those who disagree with her are likely to listen. Oreskes invites readers to think through the issue with her and, by so doing, she gives respect to the reader and to the issue at hand. 10 ■ In conclusion, the chapter by Oreskes is one very important given that its importance and topic of global warming. The author teaches the readers about the scientists’ believes on the climate change and shows much evidence to proof their points. The global warming is very important to the people, too, because we are causing it by our activities and if we do not stop, it cause many problems at the world. The author argues very strong, and very convinced the reader because she is logical thinking and has much ethos as a professor. Anyone who read this article will think on the serious global warming and the many problems. 11 ■ Indeed, the only conclusion one can reach after reading her essay is that we are responsible for climate change, and that “There is no reason to think otherwise” (93). We, as readers, are left with wordless agreement or a sense that we are irrational. She ends with the idea that all of the objections have been swept away, leaving only her final rallying cry. This final paragraph is but the last demonstration of how effective Oreskes’s article, “The Scientific Consensus on Climate Change: How Do We Know We’re Not Wrong?” truly is. Through continuous appeals to logos, an effective use of definitions and explanations framed in terms any layperson can understand, a convincing argument against the qualifications of the only people who refute the existence of anthropogenic climate change, and the carefully placed use of rhetorical questions, Oreskes illuminates and clarifies the true position of the scientific community on climate change today: there is a consensus. The only debate remaining is what we will do with that information. ORESKES – Combined Charting Pages 65 – 66 Chris Paragraphs 1 -2 Major move is introductory - presenting the topic to be discussed, establishing key background information (the emergence of consensus). Micro-level moves: there’s also a muted “centrality move” (establishing this is an issue that matters), presentation of evidence (quote from reports) and a claim (all but a few climate scientists agree…) Paragraph 3 Establishes key problem/describes the exigency (or “felt difficulty,” to use Dewey’s phrase.) Does this via contrast (scientific consensus vs. polls showing most Americans think scientists are divided on the issue) and explanation of why this is a problem (popular doubt has been used to justify refusal to join world in addressing the problem.) Paragraph 4 Uses metadiscourse to establish the context for her chapter – describes the work of the book her chapter is part of. Orients readers of the book by describing how her chapter will fit into the larger framework of the book. Paragraph 5 Contrasts what her chapter will focus on with issues addressed in other chapters of the book (“establishes niche”). Introduces the central question addressed in her article (might the consensus be wrong), a question that is also at the heart of the argument she will advance. Establishes that the question is worth asking by presenting examples from the past where expert opinion turned out to be wrong. Pages 69-70 in Oreskes (Michelle) MACRO This is the section where she sets the stage for mention of her abstract study. She identifies a potential rebuttal to her argument on climate change and indirectly explains how she will disprove it. MICRO 1. Finishes providing examples of various scientific groups that have publicly confirmed that climate change is occurring. It also includes a prolepsis—natural influences cannot explain the increase in temperatures. 2. She explains why the reports by these groups are credible. Then includes a prolepsis—setting up her next section. She will disprove why it could be the case that scientists are downplaying dissenting opinions. 3. She explains why published scholarly work is credible and that she will turn tot his source for her support. 4. Oreskes discusses how science used to be before the 20 th century. People could more easily consume it. She provides to publications as examples. 5. Then she contrasts the old ways with contemporary science—much harder to penetrate. Also uses a citation, which adds credibility. 6. She then describes how technology allows researchers an easy way to analyze the modern-day loads of scientific information. pg. 71-72 Daniela Pg. 71 EVIDENCE (LOGOS): Oreskes displays charted data that gives a visual breakdown of scientific categories of analysis in climate change studies. She appears to be fair here (ETHOS) by presenting results of those both supporting the consensus as well as refuting it, etc. However, the fact that no one can or has been able to refute the statement that “global climate change is occurring and human activities are part of the reason why” gives a good hint that Oreskes may be positioned on the side of the consensus supporters. Pg. 72 1st PARAGRAPH(ADDRESSES 100% CONCENSUS, BUT RESEARCH IS STILL ACTIVE): The PURPOSE of the first paragraph is to clarify to the reader the mental process of the scientific community, as a whole, as a movement. Scientists look for truth in unsettled issues rather than remain on one issue, which answer everyone already agrees on. 2nd PARAGRAPH(EXPLAINS THAT EVIDENCE PROVES CLIMATE CHANGE IS HUMAN-INDUCED, NOT A NATURAL OCCURRENCE): This paragraph, now nicely set up by the first, is used to make a point—that “authors evidently accept the premise that climate change is real and want to track, evaluate, and understand its impacts.” This leads into Oreskes’ argument that because none of the papers deal with the possibility of natural variance as a cause to climate change, that it isn’t a possibility at all. Clearly, climate change is human-induced. 3rd PARAGRAPH(ASSERTS AGAIN THAT EVIDENCE PROVES THAT NO ONE IS REFUTING THE FACT THERE IS A CONCENSUS): She gives percentage data (LOGOS) on the papers focused on aspects of climate change(at the beginning and at the very end of the paragraph). She notes that concerns of climate change have increased, since more and more papers are being done on it. She sets up her point that even those papers who may be perceived to be “neutral” (those only investigating better methods for effects of climate change) do not openly share an opinion about the consensus. Therefore, because no one argues against it, even those neutral, then it must exist. Some ETHOS is definitely portrayed here because Oreskes is trying to be fair and represent all sides of the consensus argument—those for it, against it, and neutral as well. p.73-4 Matt Macro: This is where Oreskes recognizes her opposition, those who believe there is debate on climate change and would thus question the validity of her study that finds a unanimous consensus. Micro: 1. Oreskes begins by addressing what she assumes is her readers’ skepticism and writes in an informal, slightly sarcastic tone. It is somewhat of a prolepsis – readers are not arguing against her position so much as they are questioning hers, and Oreskes anticipates that and addresses it in the following paragraphs. 2. She explains why her study is credible, citing three outside sources. 3. She identifies where in her study the consensus lies – in the recognition of the existence of climate change – and where there is debate – on the rate at which it is changing. She uses the analogy to evolution to elucidate her claim. 4. She explains how her study was conducted and the directions she gave to participants. This provides readers with the statistics of her study and provides them the opportunity to evaluate the validity of her study. 5. She finally returns to a point she made elsewhere in the text about the small dissenting, contrarian population who her study did not find but she still acknowledges exists, although she claims the media gives this minority too great an emphasis. 81-82, Nick Begins mid paragraph on induction Paragraph one concludes examples of induction “Other things being equal, the more we know about a subject, and the longer we have studied it, the more likely out conclusions about it are to me true.” (pp. 81) Rhetorical Question: “Does climate science stand up to the inductive model? Yes.” Cites temperature change over 150 years of records lists 8 citations Prolepsis of reliability of early records rebuttal with more recent data sets 4 citations Corroboration with tree rings Intro deduction “Deduction is drawing logical inferences from a set of premises.” Outlines the theory behind using deductions in science hyothetico-deductive model Sherlock Holmes Testing of a hypothesis by determining if deductions based on the hypothesis are correct Begins intro of Semmelweis example 82 – 84 (Fran) Par 51 (bottom of 82): Oreskes provides an example of deduction by telling the story of Ignaz Semmelweis. She generates reader interest by creating the mystery of the dying mothers. Par 52 (middle 83): The story continues and concludes, giving the reader a concrete illustration of deduction in action while implying an analogy between the importance of hand washing and climate change to make climate change seem just as relatable and universally recognized. Par 53 (bottom 83): Oreskes claims that climate change stands up to the standards of deduction. She supports this claim with the research of early and mid-twentieth century scientists whose predictions of global warming and rising seas have come true. She quotes Roger Revelle on potential changes and shows that his predictions came true with a long list of sources. The sheer number of names mentioned in this paragraph creates the impression of a consensus and builds ethos. Par 54 (mid 84): Oreskes provides a second example, of the prediction that polar amplification would melt the poles faster than other climate changes are felt. She defines “albedo” and “polar amplification.” She provides studies that support the polar amplification prediction. Page 85-86 Kristen Para 1 and 2: Revisits Semmelweis in order to illustrate the fallacy of the hypothetico deductive model; corroborates with appeal to authority by mentioning James Lister, Robert Koch, and Louis Paster; definition of falsificationism Para 3: Rhetorical questions; by arguing by definition, demonstrates shortcomings of falsificationism Page 86 Para 1: Definition of model calibration; claims that models are heuristic in nature Para 2: Reason: that models cannot be proved right or wrong; definition of ensembles, and example Para 3: Presents data, from credible source (enhancing ethos) with chart found on following page Pages 87 – 88 Stephanie • Focuses on presenting various climate models, run by both the general public and trained climate scientists, as evidence of the inescapability of climate change. • But differentiates between this and tempo and mode, which is where she contends the debate within the scientific community resides. • Describes in detail the conclusions which can be drawn from the model runs. • Qualifies argument by admitting the limitations of climate models - that it is nearly impossible to know for certain how soon the atmosphere will double in CO2 levels. • Admits the possibility that every one of these climate models is wrong. p. 91-93: "Inference to the Best Explanation," Maggie Paragraph 67 on pg 91: Oreskes provides a warrant: that the best explanation is the one consistent with the evidence. Examples: The supernatural cannot be explained with evidence, so is not the best explanation. & The theory of expanding earth fits some but not all of the evidence of continental drift. Authority's definition of best: from Peter Lipton. Paragraph 68 on pg. 91: Strategy-- audience inclusion: "our problem" "gets us thinking". Paragraph 68 (cont) on pg 92: Philosophers' definition of "best explanation." Explains that this definition from philosophers fits with--supports--the scientific models Oreskes has already given us-- applies inductive reasoning. Paragraph 69 on pg 92: Prolepsis: contrarians provide an explanation, but it is not the "best" explanation. Paragraph 70 on pg 92: Rhetorical questions used as transition, leading to an accusation... Paragraph 70 (cont) pg 93: "Indeed, the only reason we might think otherwise is to avoid committing to action." [CODA: CALL TO ACTION] Paragraph 71 on pg 93: (FINAL Paragraph): Shift from logos to pathos/rhetoric/poetry (if you will). Short sentence with syntactical repetition ("sea level to change, ice to melt, and climate to change"). Refers to history, a warrant now proven invalid (that we could not change earth processes), moves to present day. Pathos: uses us/we. Ethos: We have caused it, we must fix it (also known as the Uncle Ben from Spiderman-- "With great power comes great responsibility.") TA/ITC Notes on Prereading, Surveys, Jig Saw work, etc. Pre-reading – find source, author, genre, date, audience, skim/scan title, headings, etc. Book Title= Climate Change: What it Means for us, our children, and our grandchildren Publisher = MIT press series Series = American and Comparative Environmental Policies Look at the book – what do you make of the picture on the cover? What does the table of contents tell you? Section headings: 1. The scientific consensus on climate change 2. How do we know we’re not wrong? 3. The inductive and deductive models of science 4. Falsificationism 5. Consilience of evidence 6. Inference to the best explanation 7. Conclusion Looks at the works cited page – who/what kind of texts are cited? Pre-discussion/Questionnaire 1. What is a consensus? Is there a scientific consensus on climate change (analysis of title)? Why would the author phrase the subtitle “How do we know we're not wrong?” vs. How we know we're right? What might this indicate about the methodology she uses to achieve her findings? (inductive vs. deductive) 2. How might the author establish the reality of a consensus? (evidence) 3. Have you heard of these terms and what do they mean? How do they differ, if at all? Climate change? Global warming? Human-induced climate change? (definition) 4. Do the general public and the scientific community share the same view of climate change? How do you know? Why or why not? (audience) What might account for any discrepancy between these groups? 5. What do you think motivated Oreskes’ argument/chapter? Is Oreskes agreeing/disagreeing with something? What? 6. How do those who believe in climate change feel it affects the earth? (background info from student) How much certainty is there about Global warming; Rise in greenhouse gases; Causes of global warming; Long term consequences of global warming; Solution to the problem; Prospects of implementing a solution Do you think most scientists agree that the world is warming due to increase in greenhouse gases? About MMCC? What % do you think agree? Is there “a lot of disagreement among scientists” on global warming. How “personally concerned” are you about global warming? (Pew Research Center – US = 19% vs Japan 66%) Should GW be a top priority for president and congress? How certain is the science of climate change? Who disputes climate change – what people, groups, etc. What reasons do people give who dispute climate change? What do you think of media coverage of the issue? JIG SAW: Assign students to research key words, or research key concepts and references. Vocabulary for Oresekes. E.g., induction/deduction; conflate; fallacy of affirming the consequent (if p, q; q, thus p) consilience; hypothetico-deductive model; tempo and mode; model calibration (86) American Enterprise Institute; Popper and falsificationism; George Marshall Institute, Michael Crichton, Ads by PR firms made to look like editorials; Assign students to research Oresekes, her work, the book, controversy surrounding her, connections to Gore, etc. SCHEDULE Tues 09/21: the identifying argument and claims, drafting the introduction; templates and rhetorical précis; managing quotations, working on the body section. Thur. 09/23 drafting the body section and conclusion; identifying strategies, and analyzing how they work and why they were chosen. MLA formatting and more on quotations (bring They Say/I Say, and Keys for Writers) Tue 09/28 Drafting continued. Peer workshops. Bring 4 copies of draft, plus collection of homework and in-class writing (“journal”). Sign up for conference time. Thur. 09/30 Individual conferences with instructor –. & Fri. 10/01 Tues. 10/05 Final draft due CLAIMS & STRATEGIES Identifying claims – a good rule of thumb is to look for the following cues: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. question/answer or problem/solution pattern self-identification (“my point here is that…”) emphasis/repetition (“it must be stressed that…”) approval (“Olson makes some important and long overdue amendments to work on …”) metalanguage that explicitly uses the language of argument (“My argument consists of three main claims. First, that…” Examples – what cues can you find? 1. “What is the scientific consensus on climate change, and how do we know it exists?” 66 2. “This latter point is crucial and merits underscoring…” 74 3. “It is important to distinguish among what is happening now…” 77 4. “Year after year, the evidence that global warming is real and serious has only strengthened. Perhaps that is the strongest argument of all. Contrarians have repeatedly tried to falsify the consensus, and they have repeatedly failed.” (89) 5. “This book deals with…this chapter addresses a different question: might the scientific consensus be wrong?” (66) 6. “First, let’s make clear what the scientific consensus is…Second, to say that global warming is real and happening is no the same as agreeing about what will happen in the future…” (73) 7. “This suggests something discussed elsewhere in this book…” (74) 8. “Is there disagreement over the details of climate change? Yes. Does this… 76 9. “So why does the public have the impression of disagreement among scientists? (76) OVERALL argument: A valid and overwhelming scientific consensus exists for HIGCC, a consensus based on research that passes all relevant tests for reliability, and provides us with the best “basis for reasoned action.” OVERALL evidence: all leading scientific organizations agree; study of abstracts from 10 year sample of peer reviewed journals shows not one denying reality of HIGCC; review of criteria for evaluating scientific knowledge (induction, deduction, etc.) shows the science is reliable. Some Claims & Sub-Claims – How Would You Rank These in Importance? ■ The public falsely believes that there is disagreement due to conceptual “conflations” made by contrarians (scientific and political uncertainty; mode and tempo; current science versus predicting future), misleading arguments put forward by interest groups, and the failure of scientists to communicate with public, which is in part due to the “double bind” scientists find themselves in. (76 - 78) ■ While just about all climate scientists agree on the reality of HIGCC, debate continues on tempo and mode (74) ■ Politically motivated groups have tried to manufacture uncertainty and mislead the public through a variety of strategies (75, 78) ■ In any scientific debate some “intellectual outliers” will always exist, but that does not mean we should reject the consensus view. (79) ■ No scientific conclusion can ever be proven, uncertainty is unavoidable, and new evidence may lead us to change our views, but GCC is not a mere “belief,” and is instead our best current understanding, and “best basis for reasoned action.” (79) ■ The common /traditional view of the scientific method is wrong; there is no one single scientific method that will guarantee validity. Instead, there is a collection of standards and methods for evaluating scientific reliability, and HIGCC passes all of these, while the theories advanced by contrarians do not (80 - 93) ■ HIGCC stands up to the inductive model – it can be shown to rest on a strong inductive base. (81) ■ HIGCC stands up to the deductive model, supporting predictions and hypotheses that have been shown to be valid (83-84). ■ HIGCC stands up to falsificationism (85, 89.) ■ Theories of HIGCC are supported by consilience of evidence, with many different, independent lines of evidence pointing in the same direction (90, 91). ■ HIGCC supports “inference to the best explanation,” i.e. it can be shown to be the best of competing explanations, where “best” is judged in terms the various criterion previously invoked (91, 92). The alternative theories presented by contrarians, e.g. natural variation, are not good explanations as they are inconsistent with so much of what we know. ■ Contrarian arguments are based not on good reasons, but on the desire to avoid having to act. (93) ■ Scientists reason in ways that are comparable to the way lawyers reason – they look for independent lines of evidence that hold together (90). What is she doing, and why is she doing it? P. 69 These kinds of reports [by all the main scientific organizations specializing in climate change research] and statements are drafted through a careful process involving many opportunities for comment, criticism and revision, so it is unlikely that they would diverge greatly from the opinions of the societies’ memberships. Nevertheless, it could be the case that they downplay dissenting opinions. One way to test that hypothesis…” P. 75: This latter point is crucial and merits underscoring: the vast majority of materials denying the reality of global warming do not pass the most basic test for what it takes to be counted as scientific—namely, being published in a peer-reviewed journal. Contrarian views have been published in books and pamphlets issued by politically motivated think-tanks and widely spread across the Internet, but so have views promoting the reality of UFOs or the claim that Lee Harvey Oswald was an agent of the Soviet Union. 76. Is there disagreement over the details of climate change? Yes. Are all the aspects of climate past and present well understood? No, but who has ever claimed that they were? Does climate science tell us what policy to pursue? Definitely not, but it does identify the problem, explain why it matters, and give society insights that can help to frame an efficacious policy response (e.g., Smith 2002). 79. In any scientific debate, past or present, one can always find intellectual outliers who diverge from the consensus view. Even after plate tectonics was resoundingly accepted by earth scientists in the late 1960s, a handful of persistent resisters clung to the older views, and some idiosyncratics held to alternative theoretical positions…Does that mean that scientists should reject plate tectonics, that disaster-preparedness campaigns should not use plate-tectonics theory to estimate regional earthquake risk, or that schoolteachers should give equal time in science classrooms to the theory of earth expansion? Of course not. That would be silly and a waste of time. Strategies to look for in Oreskes’ “Climate Change: How do we know we’re not wrong?” Metadiscourse – Language about language. Metadiscourse announces what the writer is doing, helping you to recognize the author’s plan. (Example: In my paper . . .) Metadiscourse can be used both to announce the overall project or purpose of the paper and to announce its argument. Metadiscourse also provides signposts along the way, guiding the reader to what will come next and showing how that is connected to what has come before. What is Oreskes’ role in this paper? How does she enter in and guide the reader, through the text? What role does she adopt? What voice does she use? Prolepsis – Anticipating the opposition’s best argument and addressing it in advance. Oreskes uses this strategy throughout her piece. How does this help construct ethos? How does this lead her audience to conclude that consensus can be trusted? Questions – Rhetorical question – A question designed to have one correct answer. The author leads you into a position rather than stating it explicitly. Transitional questions – Leads the reader into a new subject area or area of argument. Oreskes fills this piece with questions. What role do these questions play? How do these questions lead the direction of her argument? Arrangement – Refers to the way that a speaker or author organizes or arranges an argument. How does the speaker or author arrange the argument? Why does the speaker or author choose this arrangement? How does Oreskes’ organization of this chapter further her argument? Authorities or “big names” – Refers to a speaker or author’s use of “big names” or wellknown authorities on the topic being discussed. Closely related to ethos because speakers and author’s often try to build their own credibility or ethos by referring to big names or authorities on their topic. Oreskes cites many scientific organizations in this piece and includes excerpts from their publications. How does this appeal to authority build trust in her argument that the consensus can be trusted? How does this appeal tap into assumptions about scientific method Commonplaces – Also known as hidden assumptions, hidden beliefs, and ideologies. Refers to the assumptions, many of them unconscious, that groups of people hold in common. What hidden assumptions or beliefs does the speaker have about the topic? How is the speaker or author appealing to the hidden assumptions of the audience? Who is the intended audience of this piece? What are some assumptions of this intended audience. Definition – How is the speaker or author defining certain terms? How has the speaker or author chosen to define these terms for the audience? Oreskes defines several terms in this piece, including scientific method, induction, deduction, consilience, and falsification. How do her definitions help build her argument? Difference – Examples of difference might include gender, race, class, ethnicity, or any other factor that people use to separate themselves into groups. How is the speaker or author portraying men, women, certain ethnic groups, certain social and economic classes of people, and so on? Why is the speaker or author portraying these people or groups in these ways? Oreskes works to build credibility for climate scientists at the same time she works to question the credibility of “contrarians,” who are well funded. How is she isolating these contrarians to show they different than reasonable people who rely on scientific consensus? She uses the term “contrarian” to refer to those who question consensus. What does this term do? Ethos – Refers to the credibility, character or personality of the speaker or author or someone else connected to the argument. Ethos brings up questions of ethics and trust between the speaker or author and the audience. How is the speaker or author building credibility for the argument? How and why is the speaker or author trying to get the audience to trust her or him? How does Oreskes construct her ethos? How does this make her a reliable source of information? How does she build credibility for her sources? How does she construct credibility for her argument? Examples – What examples is the speaker or author using to build the argument? Why? Oreskes uses examples to illustrate each defined term. How do these examples clarify her claims? How do they build her argument? History, context, background –What historical background is the speaker or author providing on the topic being discussed? Why? How and why is the speaker or author building a context for analyzing the topic? In the first paragraph, Oreskes references 2004, the year that “global warming ‘got respect.’” How does this build significance and create context? Oreskes refers to past scientific discoveries in order to create historic precedence and to illustrate claims. How do these references to history strengthen her claims and build her argument? Identification – This is Kenneth Burke’s term for the act of “identifying” with another person who shares your values or beliefs. Many speakers or authors try to identify with an audience or convince an audience to identify with them and their argument. Related to Burke’s term scapegoat (defined later). How does Oreskes build a connection between herself and the audience? Logos – Loosely defined, logos refers to the use of logic, reason, facts, statistics, data, and numbers. Very often, logos seems tangible and touchable, so much more real and “true” than other rhetorical strategies that it does not seem like a persuasive strategy at all. How and why is the author or speaker using logos? Oreskes builds a very reasonable response to scientific consensus, so that it is real and “true.” How does she do this? Metaphors, analogies, similes – Comparisons, usually between an idea or thing that is unknown and an idea or thing that is already familiar to the audience (e.g., “A strand of DNA is like a ladder.”) How and why is the speaker or author using these comparisons? What analogies or metaphors Oreskes does Oreskes use? How do these help build her argument? How do they appeal to her audience? Motive – Why we should or shouldn’t trust someone’s argument –(ex. if the CEO of Krispy Kreme doughnuts argues against nutritional information on product packaging) Oreskes refers to “well-funded” contrarians. In what ways does she question motive? Distribution – The author appears to clarify a position by dividing it into two or more categories. Look for alternative categories. How does this further the argument? How does Oreskes use this strategy to lead the reader into coming to the conclusion that the scientific consensus regarding climate change is reasonable and can be trusted?