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SAT 语法句子改错题练习七
SAT 考试(Scholastic Assessment Test)是美国高中生进入美国大学的标准入学考试，它对录取与否
及奖学金多少的影响非常大。下面是 SAT 语法练习句子改错题，含有详细答案，请参看。
61. The Gorton-Dodd bill requires that a bank disclose to their customers how long they will
delay access to funds from deposited checks.
(A) that a bank disclose to their customers how long they will delay access to funds from
deposited checks
(B) a bank to disclose to their customers how long they will delay access to funds from a
deposited check
(C) that a bank disclose to its customers how long it will delay access to funds from deposited
checks
(D) a bank that it should disclose to its customers how long it will delay access to funds
from a deposited check
(E) that banks disclose to customers how long access to funds from their deposited check is
to be delayed
62. Geologists believe that the warning signs for a major earthquake may include sudden
fluctuations in local seismic activity, tilting and other deformations of the Earth's crust,
changing the measured strain across a fault zone, and varying the electrical properties of
underground rocks.
(A) changing the measured strain across a fault zone and varying
(B) changing measurements of the strain across a fault zone, and varying
(C) changing the strain as measured across a fault zone, and variations of
(D) changes in the measured strain across a fault zone, and variations in
(E) changes in measurements of the strain across a fault zone, and variations among
63. Health officials estimate that 35 million Africans are in danger of contracting
trypanosomiasis, or "African sleeping sickness," a parasitic disease spread by the bites of tsetse
flies.
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(A) are in danger of contracting
(B) are in danger to contract
(C) have a danger of contracting
(D) are endangered by contraction
(E) have a danger that they will contract
64. Unlike a funded pension system, in Which contributions are invested to pay future
beneficiaries, a pay-as-you-go approach is the foundation of Social Security.
(A) a pay-as-you-go approach is the foundation of Social Security
(B) the foundation of Social Security is a pay-as-you-go approach
(C) the approach of Social Security is pay-as-you-go
(D) Social Security's approach is pay-as-you-go
(E) Social Security is founded on a pay-as-you-go approach
65. Critics of the trend toward privately operated prisons consider corrections facilities
to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if profits should be made from
incarceration.
(A) to be an integral part of the criminal justice system and question if
(B) as an integral part of the criminal justice system and they question if
(C) as being an integral part of the criminal justice system and question whether
(D) an integral part of the criminal justice system and question Whether
(E) are an integral part of the criminal justice system, and they question whether
66. The Federal Reserve Board's reduction of interest rates on loans to financial institutions
is both an acknowledgment of past economic trends and an effort to influence their future
direction.
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(A) reduction of interest rates on loans to financial institutions is both an acknowledgment
of past economic trends and an effort
(B) reduction of interest rates on loans to financial institutions is an acknowledgment both
of past economic trends as well as an effort
(C) reduction of interest rates on loans to financial institutions both acknowledge past
economic trends and attempt
(D) reducing interest rates on loans to financial institutions is an acknowledgment both of
past economic trends and an effort
(E) reducing interest rates on loans to financial institutions both acknowledge past economic
trends as well as attempt
67. Congress is debating a bill requiring certain employers provide workers with unpaid leave
so as to care for sick or newbom children.
(A) provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(B) to provide workers with unpaid leave so as to
(C) provide workers with unpaid leave in order that they
(D) to provide workers with unpaid leave so that they can
(E) provide workers with unpaid leave and
68. Often visible as smog, ozone is formed in the atmosphere from hydrocarbons and nitrogen
oxides, two major pollutants emitted by automobiles, react with sunlight.
(A) ozone is formed in the atmosphere from
(B) ozone is formed in the atmosphere when
(C) ozone is formed in the atmosphere, and when
(D) ozone, formed in the atmosphere when
(E) ozone, formed in the atmosphere from
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69. Although she had signed a pledge of abstinence while being an adolescent. Frances Willard
was 35 years old before she chose to become a temperance activist.
(A) while being an adolescent
(B) while in adolescence
(C) at the time of her being adolescent
(D) as being in adolescence
(E) as an adolescent
70. A President entering the final two years of a second term is likely to be at a severe
disadvantage and is often unable to carry out a legislative program.
(A) likely to be at a severe disadvantage and is often unable to
(B) likely severely disadvantaged and often unable to
(C) liable to be severely disadvantaged and cannot often
(D) liable that he or she is at a severe disadvantage and cannot often
(E) at a severe disadvantage, often likely to be unable that he or she can
参考答案及解析
Answer to Question 61
Choice C is best. In A and B, the plural pronouns their and they do not agree with the singular
noun bank. B, like D and E, illogically shifts from the plural customers and funds to the singular
check, as if the customers were jointly depositing only one check. In D, requires a bank that
it should is ungrammatical; requires that a bank is the appropriate idiom. In E, the use of the
passive construction is to be delayed is less informative than the active voice because the passive
does not explicitly identify the bank as the agent responsible for the delay.
Answer to Question 62
D, the best choice, describes the warning signs in parallel phrases. Despite surface
appearances, the nouns changes and variations are parallel with tilting, but the verbal forms
changing and varying in A, B, and C are not: tilting, one of the deformations of the Earth's crust,
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is used here as a noun that is parallel to fluctuations, whereas changing and varying are used
as verbs indicating some action undertaken. Moreover, these verbs are used incorrectly because
the sentence mentions no subject that is performing these actions. B and E illogically state that
it is not the strain but the measurements that portend danger, and among in E wrongly suggests
a comparison of different electrical properties rather than of different behaviors of the same
properties.
Answer to Question 63
Choice A, which is both idiomatic and concise, is best. In choice B, to contract is wrong
because the phrase are in danger must be followed by of, not by an infinitive. The phrase have
a danger is unidiomatic in C. In D, the phrase by contraction trypanosomiasis requires of after
contraction; even if this correction were made, though, the passive construction in D would be
unnecessarily wordy and also imprecise, because it is the disease more than the act of contracting
it that poses the danger. In E, have a danger is again unidiomatic, and the to that clause following
the phrase is, within the structure of the sentence, ungrammatical and awkward.
Answer to Question 64
In this sentence, the first noun of the main clause grammatically identifies what is being
compared with a funded pens ion system; to be logical, the comparison must be made between
comparable things. Only E, the best choice, compares one kind of system of providing for retirees,
the funded pension system, with another such system. Social Security. Choices A, C, and D all
illogically compare the pension system with the approach taken by Social Security itself. In B,
the comparison of pension system with foundation is similarly flawed.
Answer to Question 65
When consider means "regard as," as it does in this sentence, its object should be followed
immediately by the phrase that identifies or describes that object. Thus, to be in A, as in B,
and as being in C produce unidiomatic constructions in the context of the sentence. Also, although
(/and whether can be used interchangeably after some verbs, question if, which appears in A and
B, is unidiomatic, and they in B is unnecessary. E also contains the unnecessary they, and it
uses the ungrammatical construction consider... facilities are. Grammatically and idiomatically,
sound D is the best choice.
Answer to Question 66
Choice A is best. In B, both must come before acknowledgment if it is to link acknowledgment
and effort; as misplaced here, it creates the unfulfilled expectation that the reduction of
interest rates will be an acknowledgment of two different things. Moreover, both... as well as ...
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is redundant: the correct idiom is both x and y. In C, the plural verbs acknowledge and attempt
do not agree with their singular subject, reduction; also, it is imprecise to characterize a
reduction as performing actions such as acknowledging or attempting. In both D and E, the use
of the participle reducing rather than the noun reduction is awkward. Like B, D misplaces both,
while E repeats both the redundancy of B and the agreement error of C.
Answer to Question 67
Choices A, C, and E are ungrammatical because, in this context, requiring ... employers must
be followed by an infinitive. These options display additional faults: in A, so as to fails to
specify that the workers receiving the leave will be the people caring for the infants and children;
in order that they, as used in C, is imprecise and unidiomatic; and E says that the bill being
debated would require the employers themselves to care for the children. Choice B offers the
correct infinitive, to provide, but contains the faulty so as to. Choice D is best.
Answer to Question 68
In choice A, the construction from hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxides ... react is ungrammatical.
In B, the best choice, the conjunction when replaces the preposition/row, producing a grammatical
and logical statement. In choice C, the use of the conjunction and results in the illogical
assertion that the formation of ozone in the atmosphere happens in addition to, rather than as
a result of, its formation when hydrocarbons and nitrogen oxide react with sunlight. Choice D
omits the main verb, is, leaving a sentence fragment. E compounds the error of D with that of
A.
Answer to Question 69
Choices A, B, and D are unidiomatic. Choice C is awkward and wordy; furthermore, the phrase
at the time of her being adolescent suggests that Willard's adolescence lasted only for a brief,
finite moment rather than for an extended period of time. Choice E, idiomatic and precise, is
the best answer.
Answer to Question 70
Choice A is best. Choice B lacks the necessary infinitive after likely. In B and C,
disadvantaged, which often means "hampered by substandard economic and social conditions," is
less precise than at a disadvantage. In C and D, cannot often carry out suggests that a President
with limited time suffers only from an inability to achieve legislative goals frequently, not
from a frequent inability to achieve them at all. In C, liable, followed by an infinitive, can
legitimately be used to express probability with a bad outcome, but C is otherwise flawed as noted.
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D's liable and E's unable should be followed by an infinitive rather than by a relative clause
beginning with that.
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