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Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources 5`O[[O`/QbWdWbWSa That Really <gVWÇ:b Grades 6–8 SARAH GLASSCOCK SARAH GLASSCOCK New York • Toronto • London • Auckland • Sydney Mexico City • New Delhi • Hong Kong • Buenos Aires Editor: Sarah Longhi Copy editor: Jeannie Hutchins Cover design: Maria Lilja Interior design: Melinda Belter Illustrations: Mike Moran ISBN-13: 978-0-545-11264-2 ISBN-10: 0-545-11264-8 Copyright © 2010 by Sarah Glasscock. All rights reserved. Published by Scholastic. Printed in the U.S.A. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 40 16 15 14 13 12 11 10 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Scholastic Inc. grants teachers permission to photocopy the reproducible pages from this book for classroom use. No other part of this publication may be reproduced in whole or in part, or stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without written permission of the publisher. For information regarding permission, write to Scholastic Inc., 557 Broadway, New York, NY 10012. Contents Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 All About Nouns . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources All About Pronouns and Antecedents . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11 All About Verbs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 17 All About Adjectives and Adverbs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 23 All About Prepositions . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 29 All About Subject-Predicate Agreement . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 35 All About Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 41 All About Phrases and Clauses . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 All About Specificity . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 53 All About Sentences . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 59 Introduction It may be hard to convince students that grammar is a living, breathing thing that reflects not only the history of our language but also how language and its rules change in our contemporary lives. For example, today we try to use language more precisely to reflect the changes in our society by replacing policeman or fireman with police officer or firefighter. (We’re still grappling with the wordiness of pairing everyone with the possessive pronouns his and her.) Grammar is simply a set of rules that help us write and speak clearly so people can understand what we mean. The aim of this book is to present an overview of major topics that will give your students tools become better writers and speakers. The book contains a mini-lesson for each of the following ten major grammar topics: • Nouns • Subject-Predicate Agreement • Pronouns and Antecedents • Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives • Verbs • Phrases and Clauses • Adjectives and Adverbs • Specificity • Prepositions • Sentences Each mini-lesson contains the following elements to support your teaching: 4 A teaching page focuses on introducing and defining the topic, teaching it in conjunction with a model passage, and applying it. A quote related to the topic begins each lesson. In some lessons, the quote is used as a springboard for introducing, discussing, or applying the grammar topic. 4 A short model passage shows important aspects of the grammar topic in action. Important points about the grammar topic are identified in the passage and briefly discussed. You may want to display the passage onscreen to introduce or review the featured grammar points. Students can also keep this page in their notebooks or writing portfolios to guide them in their own writing. 4 Two writing prompts encourage students to write and share their work. You can photocopy the prompts on card stock and then cut them apart for students, write the prompts on the board, or display them onscreen. With the Rest of the Class tips help students extend their thinking by sharing their work with their peers. 4 Three activities for the whole class, small group, pairs, or individuals give students handson practice with the grammar topic. These activities require minimal preparation and appeal to a variety of learning styles; for example, students may play games, chant, or write ads and plays. Use the discussion tip, With the Class, to invite students to discuss the topic further. 4 A reproducible activity sheet goes with the activity featured in the Apply section of each teaching page. You’ll find that there is some overlapping of topics. It’s impossible to talk about subjects and predicates without talking about nouns, pronouns, and verbs, and it’s impossible to talk about sentences without talking about all the other grammar topics in the book. Immerse your students in an overview of each grammar topic or dive more deeply into one aspect of it. I hope this book encourages your students to see the powerful effect that grammar has on our words—and the effect we all have on our language. 4 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources How to Use This Book All About Nouns ] All nouns are abbreviations. Instead of saying cold, sharp, burning, unbreakable, shining, pointy, we utter “dagger”; for the receding sun and oncoming darkness, we say “twilight.” —Jorge Luis Borges • • • • nouns and noun phrases subject-verb agreement possessive nouns descriptive nouns Introduction -/$%, 0!33 !'% Cdj ch Begin a mini-lesson on nouns by writing a short definition of this part of speech on the board. Here’s an example: “A noun names a person, place, animal, thing, or idea: After experiencing freedom from gravity when he somersaulted over the moon, James landed in his front yard again, which surprised his Dalmatian.” Just exactly Grammar Activities That Really Grab ‘Em!, Teach Grades 6–8 © 2010 by rces ing Resou astic Teach cock, Schol Distribute copies of the model passage “The Cathedral of Junk” on page 7 to students. Allow time for them to read it on their own, or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Then use the teaching guide on page 6 to discuss general notes on nouns and how the writer used them in the passage. (Also see the lessons on pronouns and antecedents on pages 11–16, subject-verb agreement on pages 35–40, gerunds, participles, and infinitives on page 41–46, and phrases and clauses, pages 47–52.) Sarah Glass what is junk 5IF$BUIFE SBMPG+VOL —trash, should you garbage, do with it— litter, deb ris, useless recycle it, Texas, has toss it, sell things, rub created a it, or turn 1 bish—and Cathedral it into a wor what of Junk in been wiri k of art? ng and wel his backya A man in 2 rd. Since ding and Austin, 1988, Vin stringing growing!— ce Hannem and stacking structure. ann, has junk into Like man an immens y other cath has towers, e, 60-ton edrals, this vaulted ceil —a nd still one ings, and these arch trusses. 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Then hand out the Abbreviate! reproducible on page 10 and go over the directions. Encourage students to let their minds roam widely as they think about the noun they have chosen. You may want to begin by assigning the same noun to students. Encourage pairs of students to share their abbreviations with each other and try to identify the original noun or noun phrase. Record students’ responses to get a comprehensive definition of the noun. Activities Apply rces PSH Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Nouns ground a sentence. Without nouns, there is nobody or nothing to spark the action. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of nouns: Nouns and Noun Phrases A noun phrase is a group of words that begins with a noun or a pronoun and functions as a noun. KEY POINTS • Remind students that nouns name people, animals, places, things, and ideas. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The noun junk names a thing. The nouns between the dashes are synonyms for junk. • A noun phrase contains a noun and the words that modify the noun. 2 In the noun phrase work of art, the prepositional phrase of art modifies the noun work. It tells what kind of work it is. • The closest noun to the verb may not be the subject but a part of a noun phrase. Subject-Verb Agreement KEY POINTS • A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb. The subject and verb may be singular or plural, but they must always agree with each other. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 The subject in the noun phrase A wind chime made of CDs, is chime. The verb must agree with the singular noun chime, not the plural noun CDs. 6 This compound subject, neighbors and the City of Austin takes the plural verb, aren’t. • A subject may be a single noun or a noun phrase. Possessive Nouns Possessive nouns indicate who or what possesses or owns something. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 4 Because the original noun artists is plural, you form the plural possessive by adding an apostrophe. KEY POINTS • An apostrophe indicates possession. • In the case of a regular singular noun, an –s is added after the apostrophe: gravity’s. 7 The singular possessive of city is city’s. • In the case of a regular plural noun, the apostrophe is added after the final –s: horses’. • There are different schools of thought on how to form the possessive of a noun ending in –s: Borges’ or Borges’s. The most important thing is to be consistent. Choose one of the styles and stick to it. Descriptive Nouns One descriptive noun can help you understand and visualize a writer’s message. One descriptive noun can be worth a thousand words. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 5 The nouns yard and artist have been combined to form a new noun that exactly describes what Hannemann is—a yardist. KEY POINTS • As the Borges quotation at the top of page 5 indicates, one descriptive noun can take the place of a string of words—including adjectives and noun phrases—and be more effective. 8 In Hannemann’s view, he had carefully stacked the TVs in a pyramid. In the city engineer’s eyes, there was nothing carefully done—or shapely— about the stack. In the inspector’s view, it was a pile. 6 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Subjects and verbs must always agree. MODEL PASSAGE Nouns The Cathedral of Junk Just exactly what is junk—trash, garbage, litter, debris, useless things, rubbish—and what 1 should you do with it—recycle it, toss it, sell it, or turn it into a work of art? A man in Austin, 2 Texas, has created a Cathedral of Junk in his backyard. Since 1988, Vince Hannemann, has Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources been wiring and welding and stringing and stacking junk into an immense, 60-ton—and still growing!—structure. Like many other cathedrals, this one has towers, vaulted ceilings, and trusses. Instead of stone, these architectural details are made out of discarded bicycle wheels, dolls, and other things nobody wants anymore. A wind chime made of CDs provides 3 music in the cathedral. The local artists’ nickname 4 for Vince Hannemann is “yardist.” 5 Some of Hannemann’s neighbors and the City of 6 Austin aren’t so happy about the Cathedral of Junk. 6 They think it’s ugly and unsafe. But over the years, the city has inspected the structure and declared that it’s sturdy. Once, Vince did have to take down a pyramid made of cast-off TVs. The city’s engineer declared that the pyramid was really 7 only a pile. “Well, what kind of pile expert are you?” Vince asked. 8 The Cathedral of Junk is a popular spot to visit in Austin. Couples have been married there, and musicians have thrown CD release parties inside it, too. Sometimes, groups of school kids wander through the Cathedral of Junk on field trips. Vince says that some visitors even recognize things they used to own but threw away. They probably never imagined where their trash would end up. In this passage, you’ll see examples of the following: • nouns and noun phrases • subject-verb agreement • possessive nouns • descriptive nouns 7 WRITING PROMPTS Nouns $ Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Write! Who should be responsible for keeping your classroom neat— not clean or organized, but neat? Should it be the responsibility of the teacher, the students, or the entire classroom? Explain your reasons. Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. Be sure to use possessive nouns in your response. Before you hand in your assignment, take another look at the possessive nouns you used. Did you use the correct form for each singular and possessive noun? If you’re not sure whether you used the correct possessive form, circle the noun. Try rephrasing the possessive noun like this: the city’s engineer/the engineer of the city, Hannemann’s neighbors/the neighbors of Hannemann, the local artists’ nickname/ nickname of the local artists. If you can rephrase it, the noun should be possessive. With the Rest of the Class: After sharing your ideas about who should be responsible for keeping your classroom neat, talk about any possessive pronouns you used. $ - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Alone and With Others Write! What are your favorite things to do when you’re by yourself? What do you like to do when you’re with family or friends? Describe each set of activities in a few sentences. Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. Exchange work with a partner. As you read the work, think about how the writer used nouns. Do all the subjects and verbs agree? Are the nouns as precise as they could be? With the Rest of the Class: If you’d like to, share your work with the rest of the class. Even if you don’t read your work aloud, talk about how your partner helped you strengthen your use of nouns. 8 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Who’s Responsible? Activities: Nouns Turning a Picture Into Words Materials: computer with Internet access Help students locate images of the Cathedral of Junk that was described in the passage. You can find videos on YouTube and/or visit the Web site www. roadsideamerica.com for photos (search for “Cathedral of Junk”). After students closely examine the details in the images, challenge them to write their own descriptions of the Cathedral of Junk. Tell them to stretch their descriptive powers by using nouns as precisely as they can. Encourage students to use nouns the way Hannemann uses junk to create something unexpected and beautiful. Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources With the Class: Discuss the descriptions. Ask: What did you notice about how other writers used descriptive nouns in their work? One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six Materials: number cube Have pairs work together to write a short, short story about one of the following: • a spaceship landing in your school yard • a lifeboat floating in the sea • the world’s longest skateboard (hint: It’s 30 feet, 1 inch long!) They should begin by rolling a number cube to find out how many characters will be in the spaceship or lifeboat or on the skateboard. With the Class: Let students take turns reading aloud their stories, or have one partner read it while the other pantomimes the action. Ask the other students if all the subjects and verbs in the story agree. Let Me Rephrase That Materials: examples of fine art (from posters, CD covers, postcards, and so on) that show one key subject; drawings supplies—colored pencils, markers, paints, drawing paper Write the following sentences on the board and explain that noun phrases can take different forms: • Six sneakers dangled from the limbs of the tree. • I spotted her red sneakers. • The sneakers that girl is wearing are too tight. • The sneakers sold in that store are too expensive. • Selena wants the red sneakers in the store window. Then display the art you selected and have groups choose one piece. Tell them to use noun phrases to describe the person, place, thing, or idea their piece of art shows. Then challenge groups to think of their own noun phrase to illustrate. With the Class: Display the illustrations. Can the other students guess the noun phrase each group has drawn? Write down their guesses, and ask the group to discuss how similar to and different from the original noun phrase the guesses are. 9 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Nouns Abbreviate! All nouns are abbreviations. Instead of saying cold, sharp, burning, oncoming darkness, we say “‘twilight.” __ Jorge Luis Borges Read the above quote. Then write a noun in the center of the web. Complete the web with words and phrases that your noun stands as an abbreviation for. 10 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources unbreakable, shining, pointy, we utter “dagger”; for the receding sun and All About Pronouns and Antecedents ] When a young man complains that a young lady has no heart, it’s pretty certain that she has his. —George Dennison Prentice • personal pronouns and antecedents • possessive pronouns • reflexive pronouns • indefinite pronouns Introduction After briefly reviewing the definition of a pronoun, write the Prentice quote on the board and discuss the pronouns in it. Ask: What noun does the pronoun she refer to? What noun does the pronoun his refer to? Guide students to see that his is a possessive pronoun and that Prentice means “his [the young man’s] heart.” Point out that the contraction it’s is the combination of the subject and verb, not a possessive pronoun. 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Start a call-and-response activity that uses different indefinite pronouns with the same verb. h FTJEFOU Activities Apply iZXZYZci %FBS.S1S Grammar 3F¿FYJWF1S SINGULA 11 Grades 6–8 \b_`RYcR f\b_`RYS UVZ`RYSUR _`RYSVa` ` f\b_`RYcR` aURZ`RYc R` Grab ‘Em!, RYS That Really Record the responses on the board. After every student has had a chance to respond, go over the pronouns and verb forms in each response. Point out that not every indefinite pronoun has a possessive form. Ask: Which indefinite pronouns are singular? Which are plural? PLURAL Zf`RYS &+ Activities © 2010 by POPVOT R Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources A pronoun is a word that takes the place of a noun or a noun phrase in a sentence. That noun is called an antecedent. This mini-lesson focuses on the following types of pronouns: Personal Pronouns and Antecedents A pronoun takes the place of a noun. It must agree with its noun antecedent. KEY POINTS • In replacing a noun with a pronoun, a writer has to think about person, number, case, and gender: Should I use the first person, second person, or third person? Is the noun singular or plural? Is the noun a subject, an object, or possessive? Does the noun refer to a male or a female, or is it neutral? TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 5 In this sentence, he or she is used because a child really means any child. It doesn’t matter whether the child is a boy or a girl. Another way to write the sentence is by making the nouns and pronouns plural: “Children read what you said, and they might start to use reflexive pronouns in their own writing.” Possessive Pronouns Like a possessive noun, a possessive pronoun indicates who or what possesses something. KEY POINTS • Possessive pronouns have two forms: my/mine, your/yours, his/his, her/hers, its/its, our/ours, your/yours, their/theirs. • The decision about which form to use depends on the noun’s role in the sentence: TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 The words your and you’re are homophones. Although they sound the same, they mean different things. You’re is a contraction, combining the pronoun you and the verb are. Your is a possessive pronoun. 6 To avoid the clumsy phrasing his or her, we might say, “A child might read what you said and start to use reflexive pronouns in their own writing,” which is incorrect. When writing formally, try using plural nouns and/pronouns instead of singular nouns and pronouns. Tessa’s cap is covered by bees! Her cap is covered by bees! The hat covered by bees is Tessa’s! The hat covered by bees is hers! Reflexive Pronouns A reflexive pronoun ends in –self and refers back to the subject of the sentence. KEY POINTS • The reflexive pronouns—myself, yourself, himself, herself, itself, themselves—never appear as subjects. • A reflexive pronoun is used only when the subject and the object of a sentence are the same. • A reflexive pronoun appears immediately after a verb or a preposition: He spoke softly to himself, so no one else could hear his words. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 4 The letter writer explains the rules about using a reflexive pronoun: (a) A reflexive pronoun is never the subject of a sentence. (b) Use a reflexive pronoun when the subject and object of the sentence are the same. In this sentence, the subject you and the object myself don’t refer to the same person. Indefinite Pronouns An indefinite pronoun refers to one or more, or all, of an unspecified group or class of people, animals, things, or ideas. KEY POINTS • Some indefinite pronouns have possessive forms, which are formed by adding apostrophe –s: another’s, everyone’s, nobody’s. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The subject Everyone is a singular indefinite pronoun, so it takes the singular verb is reading. 2 The subject All is a plural indefinite pronoun, so it takes the plural verb agree. • An indefinite pronoun that ends in –one or –body is singular. 12 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources • The discussion about how we should refer to males and females shows how changes in ideas and beliefs affect grammar. MODEL PASSAGE Pronouns and Antecedents Dear Mr. President Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Dear President Obama, Everyone in my book club is reading your book, Dreams From My Father. All of us agree 1 1 2 2 that you’re a wonderful writer! We also agree that you deliver speeches that inspire us, so, I was very dismayed to read your words in the newspaper: 3 “You helped shape Michelle and myself. Many of you have been part of our children’s lives. 4 Many of you have helped to support us, through thick and through thin. And so I’m just very grateful to all of you.” Surely you know, Mr. President, that the reflexive pronoun myself can only be used with the subject I. In fact, a reflexive pronoun can only be used when the subject and the object of a sentence are the same. For example, a person would say (or write), “She voted for herself” instead of “She voted for her.” To make your thank-you address grammatically correct, what you should have said is, “You helped shape Michelle and me.” A child might read what you said and he or she might start to use reflexive pronouns 5 incorrectly in his or her writing. 6 Please remember, Mr. President, we’re listening to every word you say! Sincerely yours, A Concerned Citizen In this passage, you’ll see the following types of pronouns: • p ersonal pronouns and their antecedents • reflexive pronouns • possessive pronouns • indefinite pronouns 13 WRITING PROMPTS Pronouns Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ He, She, or It? gender—whether a noun is masculine, feminine, or neutral. For example, the Spanish word for school, escuela, ends in an –a so it’s a feminine noun. English uses pronouns to indicate the gender of a noun—he, she, it; him, her, it. Explain whether you think places, such Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. as schools, or ideas, such as liberty, should be identified as masculine, feminine, or neutral. Give specific examples. With the Rest of the Class: Discuss your examples. If you speak another language, share how that language uses gender. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ My Best Friend Write! Who’s your best friend? Do you have more than one best friend? What do you like to do together? What qualifies this friend or these friends to be the best? Write a short description. With the Rest of the Class: Talk about any problems you encountered in deciding whether to use the personal pronouns him, her, or them or the possessive pronouns his, her/hers, or their/theirs. 14 Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Write! In some languages, such as Spanish, endings often indicate Activities: Pronouns and Antecedents Who Said That? A New Spin on an Old Tale Have students refashion a favorite fairy tale or folktale. Give the following directions: Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources • Read the story several times and then write your own version of the story—but don’t use any nouns to name the main characters. Use only pronouns. • Exchange stories with your writing partner. Do you recognize your partner’s story—even though the main characters aren’t identified by name? • Then revise your partner’s story by adding proper nouns. As you revise, think about how to balance the use of nouns and pronouns. Also make sure that each pronoun clearly represents a specific noun. With the Class: Ask students to reveal the technique they used to write their stories: Did you write a draft that included nouns and then substitute pronouns for them? Did you plunge right in and tell the story using only pronouns? If so, how did you keep the characters clear in your mind as you wrote? Respect Yourself! Materials: examples of hip-hop or rap lyrics from a source such as Kids Rap Radio Explain that hip-hop, or rap, lyrics rhyme and have a rhythmic, 4/4 beat. After students listen to some examples of hip-hop or rap lyrics, ask them to work in groups to write their own. There’s a catch: Each group has to use reflexive pronouns in its lyrics. Once a group is satisfied with the song, students can present it to the rest of the class. With the Class: Talk about the different ways in which groups used reflexive pronouns. Explain why we use the reflexive pronoun yourself in an imperative sentence such as Respect yourself. Building a Story, Pronoun by Pronoun Materials: (for each group) number cube, list of pronouns (page 16), spinner divided into four equal sections and labeled Personal Pronouns, Possessive Pronouns, Indefinite Pronouns, and Reflexive Pronouns, scissors, pencil, paper clip Share the following directions for building a story with groups: • You and your group are going to build a story, pronoun by pronoun, sentence by sentence. • To decide the order of storytellers, each member tosses the number cube. The storytellers go in order from least number to greatest number. • The first storyteller spins. He or she must use that type of pronoun in the beginning sentence of your story. (Use the list of pronouns to give you ideas.) • The next storyteller spins and must use that type of pronoun to build the next sentence. • Continue spinning and building your story until you decide that it’s finished. With the Class: Encourage groups to read aloud their stories and discuss the challenges they faced in building their stories. 15 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ PRONOUNS: Types of Pronouns Personal Pronouns Possessive Pronouns SINGULAR PLURAL Subjective Objective Subjective Objective SINGULAR PLURAL I me we us my/mine our/ours you you you you your/yours your/yours he him they them his/his their/theirs she her they them her/hers their/theirs it it they them its/its their/theirs Indefinite Pronouns and Their Possessive Forms all anything everybody/ everybody’s most none several everyone/ everyone’s much nothing some any each everything neither/ neither’s one/ one’s somebody/ somebody’s anybody/ anybody’s no one/ no one’s other/ other’s something anyone/ anyone’s nobody/ nobody’s others/ others’ such another/ both another’s each one/ few each one’s either/ many either’s Reflexive Pronouns SINGULAR PLURAL myself ourselves yourself yourselves himself, herself, itself themselves 16 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources All About Verbs ] Acting is doing, because everything you say or do is some kind of an action, some kind of a verb. You’re always connected to the other person through some kind of action. —Mira Sorvino verb tenses, including the perfect tense subject-verb agreement irregular verbs descriptive verbs Introduction -/$%, 0!33 !'% Begin a mini-lesson on verbs by writing a short definition of this part of speech on the board. Here’s an example: “A verb shows action: The dog howls. A verb also can show a state of being: The dog is wet.” KZgWh Paige pul ls a handw Teach Activities y Grab ‘Em!, That Reall Grades 6–8 © 2010 by rces ing Resou astic Teach cock, Schol Sarah Glass Give each student a copy of the passage “Volunteer!” on page 19. Allow time for students to read the passage on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Then use the teaching guide on page 18 discuss how the writer used nouns in the passage. 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Use the b sniglets format sho . wn _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ __ Activities h Grammar What? You lbgTgX (YO H-tayte) v. to allo its own: w a yo-yo a combin to unwind ation of on the words TENSES: yo-yo and Present— rotate. yotate , Pas will yotate t—yotate d, Future . EXAMP — LES: Rau l yotates the same four yo-yos time! Wo at w—Raul yotated fou at the sam r yo-yos e time! Nex t, Raul will at the sam yotate fou e time! r yo-yos h h Distribute the Create a New Word reproducible on page 22 and share the information about sniglets. Ask: Can you see how the words yo-yo and rotate were combined to create the sniglet yotate? Before students attempt to create their own sniglets, remind them to follow the same format as the entry for yotate. Write the dictionary entry for a verb such as swim on the board or on chart paper and display it so students can see the proper format. FX8PSE h • • • • Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Verbs are the energy sources of sentences. They set their subjects into motion—whether a subject is walking or simply being. This minilesson focuses on the following aspects of verbs: Verb Tenses We use verb tenses to show time. Action can occur in the past, present, or future. KEY POINTS • The perfect tense refers to actions completed by a certain time. • The perfect tense is formed by combining a present, past, or future auxiliary with the past participle: have walked, had walked, will have walked. To form the past participle, you usually add –ed to the verb. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 The verb phrase will have finished is in the future perfect tense. Paige and Antonio’s shopping will have been completed by a certain time in the future. 4 I’ve shopped is in the present perfect tense. Point out that the auxiliary verb have has been shortened to help form the contraction I’ve. Subject-Verb Agreement KEY POINTS • The subject and verb may be singular or plural but they must always agree with each other. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 5 Although the noun dry cleaners is closest to the verb sighs, it isn’t the subject—door, a singular noun, is, so the verb has to be singular, too. • Remind students that they should look carefully at compound subjects and subjects that are separated from the verb by noun phrases to make sure they match the subject and verb correctly. 7 The subject my parents and my brother is a compound subject. A compound subject joined by the conjunction and takes a plural verb, even if the last subject is singular. Irregular Verbs Regular past-tense verbs are formed by adding –ed to the present tense of the verb: construct, constructed. Irregular verbs don’t follow this rule. KEY POINTS • Review the differences between regular and irregular verb forms. • Share the fact that many of the irregular verbs in English are very old words. While the rules for forming verb tenses have changed over the years, irregular verbs are still formed using old rules. For instance, the verb drink comes from the Old English word drincan. Its past tense was dranc, and our modern past tense is drank. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 The verb reply is an irregular verb. The singular present tense is formed by changing the y to an i and adding –es. 8 The verb buy is an irregular verb. Its past participle is bought, not buyed. The singular present perfect of buy is has bought. Descriptive Verbs Verbs with a lot of muscle make writing more descriptive. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The verb groans shows that Paige is being overly dramatic to get Antonio’s attention and sympathy. KEY POINTS • Emphasize that using different synonyms for a common action verb such as move makes someone’s speech or writing more accurate and interesting—and that each synonym affects the action described in the sentence. What is the difference in motion between saunter and scurry? 6 The verbs in this sentence show that the movement of the person, invisible except for his or her arm, is abrupt and surprises Antonio but Paige seems to be used to the person’s behavior. 18 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources A complete sentence needs both a subject and a verb. MODEL PASSAGE Verbs Volunteer! Paige pulls a handwritten list out of her jeans pocket and groans. When Antonio doesn’t ask 1 what’s wrong, she groans again. Antonio slides the list out of Paige’s hand. “It’s okay. There aren’t that many things to Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources pick up at the grocery store. I can’t read what they are, but there aren’t too many of them. We will have finished the shopping by five, in plenty of time for our rehearsal.” 2 “I can read it,” Paige replies as she retrieves the list. “I’ve shopped for Mr. Gantry for five 3 4 years. That’s not it. What am I going to do for my volunteer project? I can’t think of anything!” The door of the dry cleaners magically sighs open—so magically, that it almost hits Antonio 5 in the nose. When an arm thrusts a plastic-wrapped dress through the open door, Paige 6 automatically hooks the hanger on her index finger. Antonio points 6 his own finger at the dress. “Whose dress is that?” he asks. “I promised Mrs. Li I’d pick up her dress. Her great-niece is getting married on Saturday,” Paige explains. “Help me, Antonio! What am I going to do for my project? My parents and my brother haven’t given me any good suggestions at all.” 7 Antonio eyes the flowers that Paige has bought to cheer up Abner, 8 her sick neighbor; the plastic-wrapped dress; and the grocery list. “Have you ever thought about volunteering to do things for the older people in your neighborhood?” he asks. “Don’t be silly.” Paige juggles the flowers and dress as she tries to read the grocery list. “That’s not volunteering—that’s just helping out.” In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • verb tenses • irregular verbs • subject-verb agreement • descriptive verbs 19 WRITING PROMPTS Verbs Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow Write! Choose one of the prompts below to write about. Pay attention to the verb tense! being a first grader? Use only the past and past perfect tenses to describe that memory. • W hat is the most interesting thing you’re learning right now in school? Why is it so interesting to you? Use only the present and present perfect tenses. • W hat do you think high school will be like? What are you most looking forward to learning when you’re in high school? Use only the future and future perfect tenses to predict what will happen. Wr ite yo ur ful l respo ns e on a sepa rat e sh eet of pa per. Look at the verbs you used. Did you use the proper tense for each verb—and did you use it throughout your response? If you’re not sure whether you used the correct tense for a verb, circle it. With the Rest of the Class: Talk about why you chose the prompt. Was writing in that tense easier or more difficult than you thought it might be? $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Then I Told Abe Lincoln . . . Write! What if you could step into a time machine? What place would you visit? Would you travel to the past or to the future? What would you experience? What would you see, hear, smell, taste, and feel? Write a story about your adventures. Exchange stories with a partner. Read the story and then think about how the writer used verbs. Did the choice of verbs really help you “see” the story? Talk about what you liked about the story and ask any questions you have. Wr ite yo ur ful l respo ns e on a sepa rat e sh eet of pa per. With the Rest of the Class: Read aloud your story to the class. Share how your partner helped you revise your work. 20 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources • T hink back to when you were in first grade. What is the best thing you remember about Activities: Verbs Who’s Being Disagreeable? Materials: index cards, markers, timer Four people can play this subject-verb agreement game: a host, a contestant, and two panel members. On an index card or the whiteboard, the host writes the complete subject or complete predicate of a sentence, such as one of the following: Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources The leader of the wild dogs . . . (complete subject) . . . were skating across the thin ice on the river. (complete predicate) Each panelist writes a complete subject or a complete predicate on an index card or whiteboard to complete the sentence. The complete subject or complete predicate may or may not agree with the host’s incomplete sentence. It’s up to the contestant to identify which panelist is in agreement. (Both panelists may agree; both panelists may disagree; one may agree, and one may disagree.) Play continues for 10 minutes. The group with the most correct completions is the winner. With the Class: Talk about why nouns such as family and group take singular verbs. Who Are You Calling Irregular? Materials: number cube, dictionary, timer Challenge pairs to see how many regular and irregular verbs they can name. Give the following directions: • Take turns tossing the number cube. • If you toss an even number, call out a regular verb. If you toss an odd number, call out an irregular verb. (You can have up to 30 seconds to scan the dictionary.) • Write down the present- and past-tense forms of each verb in a T-chart. If you have any questions about an answer, look up the verb in the dictionary. With the Class: Discuss how students decided whether a verb was regular or irregular. Pose the following questions: Did any of the verbs fool you? What can you do to remember which verbs are irregular? People on the Move Materials: thesaurus Tell students to take a few minutes to look around and observe the people they see: Who do you see? What are they doing? Then have them write a paragraph describing the actions of one person—without using common verbs such as walking, running, driving, playing, dancing, and so on. Encourage students to stretch their verb vocabulary. They may consult a thesaurus for synonyms that will make pictures pop into their reader’s mind. Urge them to take chances and think of creative and original ways to use language. With the Class: As students share their descriptions, brainstorm even more verbs. Record them in a Verb Volume, a book that everyone can refer to during writing activities. 21 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Verbs its own: a combination of the words yo-yo and rotate. TENSES: Present—yotate , Past—yotated, Future— will yotate. EXAMPLES: Raul yotates four yo-yos at the same time! Wow—Raul yotated four yo-yos at the same time! Next, Raul will yotate four yo-yos at the same time! { { yotate (YOH-tayte) v. to allow a yo-yo to unwind on What? You’ve never heard of the word yotate? You can’t find it in the dictionary? That’s because the word yotate is a sniglet—a word that doesn’t appear in a dictionary, but should. Work with one or two partners to create at least two verb sniglets. Use the format shown above for yotate to present your own verb sniglets. _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 22 { { { { _________________________________________________________________ Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Create a New Word All About Adjectives and Adverbs ] When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don’t mean utterly, but kill most of them—then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. —Mark Twain • • • • adjectives: modifying nouns and pronouns adverbs: modifying verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs p ositive, comparative, and superlative forms descriptive adjectives and adverbs Introduction Begin a mini-lesson on adjectives and adverbs by writing a short definition of these parts of speech such as the following on the board: “An adjective modifies a noun or a pronoun. It can answer these questions: Which one? (smelly socks) What kind of? (yellow plaid socks), How many? (three pairs of socks). An adverb modifies a verb, an adjective, or another adverb. It can answer questions including How? (skipped fast) When? or How often? (never growled) Where? (skipped downstairs). -/$%, 0!33 !'% 6Y_ZXi^ kZhVcY 8IFZ Activities y Grab ‘Em!, That Reall Grades 6–8 © 2010 by ing Resou rces Distribute copies of the model passage “Curds and Whey” on page 25 to students. 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Go over the directions to make sure students understand the task. Encourage them to overload their paragraph with adjectives and adverbs. Crowding so many into their work may help them find just the right adjectives and adverbs to use as they weed them out. Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Adjectives modify nouns and pronouns. Adverbs modify verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of adjectives and adverbs: Adjectives KEY POINTS • The word modify means “to change or alter.” When we modify a noun, pronoun, verb, adjective, or adverb, we give it more specific qualities and characteristics. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 Adjectives such as a, an, the, that, and some go at the beginning of a series of adjectives. Adjectives that describe size and shape, age, and color follow in that order. • Adjectives usually appear before the noun or pronoun they follow—but they can follow verbs such as be, feel, smell, sound, taste, look, appear, and seem. 4 The adjective vile appears after the verb tastes, but it modifies the noun whey. When you ask this question, “What kind of whey is it?” the answer is “It’s vile.” It doesn’t answer the question, “How does it taste?” because whey can’t taste, only people and animals can. Adverbs An adverb modifies verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The adverb contentedly describes how Little Miss Muffet is eating her curds and whey. You could also write, eating her curds and whey contentedly. KEY POINTS • An adverb can appear almost anywhere in a sentence; it depends upon which part of speech the adverb is modifying and the emphasis the writer wants to use. • An adverb may go before or after a simple verb. For emphasis, it can be placed at the beginning of a sentence. 3 Pretty is an adverb because it modifies the adjective vile. To test this, reword the sentence to read, Some people think whey tastes pretty. This confirms that pretty is not an adjective in this case. • It’s okay to separate parts of a verb with an adverb: We will probably go to the game. 9 The prepositional phrase into a container acts as an adverb because it tells where to put the cheese. Positive, Comparative, and Superlative Forms Adjectives and adverbs can describe one thing or compare two or more things. KEY POINTS • An adjective or adverb in a positive state describes one thing. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 5 Since cottage cheese is being compared to all the other kinds of cheeses, the superlative form of easy is used. • The comparative form compares two things. (Add –er to the end of positive adjectives or adverbs or add more or less in front of them.) 6 Because the adverb rapidly ends in –ly, the word more is added to form the comparative form. For more rules on forming comparatives and superlatives, see the activity on page 27. • The superlative form compares more than two things. (Add –est to the end of positive adjectives or adverbs or add most or least in front of them.) Descriptive Adjectives and Adverbs A well-chosen adjective or adverb can turn up the volume of a writer’s voice, open the reader’s eyes, and make meaning much clearer. KEY POINTS • Descriptive adjectives and adverbs are as important to use in nonfiction writing as they are in fiction. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 7 Describing the cheesecloth as porous helps the reader see that the cloth’s loose weave allows the whey to drain through easily. • Discuss the Mark Twain quote at the top of page 23 with students. Do they think the quote applies to adverbs, too? 8 Deep, satisfying squeezes shows that a little bit of muscle is required to squeeze the cottage cheese. 24 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources An adjective modifies nouns and pronouns. MODEL PASSAGE Adjectives and Adverbs Curds and Whey Remember the rhyme about Little Miss Muffet, contentedly eating her curds and whey until that disruptive 2 1 spider dropped in on her? In the 1800s, when the rhyme Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources was written, curds and whey referred to cottage cheese. Today, you can find cottage cheese—soft and creamy pearls of cheese—in salad bars. Now, cottage cheese contains mostly curds and a scant amount of liquid whey. (Some people think whey tastes pretty vile.) 3 4 Cottage cheese is one of the easiest cheeses to make. 5 In fact, you can make it at home. Pour one gallon of fat-free milk into a pan. Heat the milk to a temperature of 120 degrees Fahrenheit. (Sometimes, this heating process happens more rapidly 6 than other times.) Turn off the heat and add three-fourths cup of white vinegar. Let the mixture sit for half an hour and watch what happens! As the hot mixture cools, it will become thicker and thicker, coagulating into solids and liquid. The solids are the soft curds, and the liquid is that nasty whey. Line a colander with cheesecloth. Dump the contents of the pan into the colander and let the whey drain through the porous cheesecloth for about 3 minutes. When that’s done, 7 wrap the cottage cheese in the cheesecloth, run it under cool water for about 3 more minutes and give it some deep, satisfying squeezes with your fingers. Put the finished cottage cheese 8 into a container. Add fruit or honey and nuts, and spoon it up—but watch out for curious spiders! 9 In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • • • • adjectives modifying nouns and pronouns adverbs modifying verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs positive, comparative, and superlative forms of adjectives and adverbs descriptive adjectives and adverbs 25 WRITING PROMPTS Adjectives and Adverbs Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Write! Some adjectives—such as unique, final, and fatal—don’t have comparative and superlative forms. Explain why you think this is so. Why can’t one object be more unique than another? Why can’t an event be the most fatal event? Wr ite yo ur full resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. With the Rest of the Class: Brainstorm other adjectives that you think don’t have comparative and superlative forms. Consult a dictionary to check your ideas. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ What Color? How Fast? Materials: ball, yo-yo, or other moving toy Write! Your teacher will demonstrate a toy that moves. After watching several demonstrations, write about what you saw. Focus on answering the following questions: Which one? What kind? How many? How? When? Where? Why? Wr ite yo ur full resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. With the Rest of the Class: Which adjectives and adverbs did you use to describe the teacher showing the toy’s motion? Did anyone use an adjective or adverb that really surprised you and helped you see the demonstration in a new way? 26 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources One and Only Activities: Adjectives and Adverbs Move That Adverb! Have students work together to write a sentence about something a classmate is doing. If their sentence doesn’t already have an adverb, they should include one. Then members take turns moving the adverb to different places in the sentence. With the Class: Ask groups to talk about what conclusion they can draw about the position of the adverbs in their sentences. How Many Words Is One Picture Worth? Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Materials: photographs of New York City by Helen Levitt Search on the Internet for photographs of New York City by Helen Levitt and display several onscreen. Explain that Helen Levitt photographed street scenes in New York both in black and white and in color. Then give the following directions: •C hoose a photograph that makes you curious. Study it for one minute, jotting down the important details you see. Without looking at the photo, write what’s happening in it. • Read your work aloud to a partner while he or she looks at the photo. Does your partner think you left out any important details? Are your adjectives and adverbs strong rather than weak? • Listen as your partner reads his or her work, look at the photo, and discuss the work. With the Class: Discuss how many words students think their pictures are worth. Is Less More? Material: coin, dictionary Display these rules for forming the comparative and superlative forms of regular adjectives and adverbs. • If an adjective has one syllable, you usually add –er and –est: red, redder, reddest. • If an adverb has one syllable, you add –er and –est: soon, sooner, soonest. • If an adverb ends in –ly, add more and most: quickly, more quickly, most quickly. • I f you’re not sure, look up the adjective or adverb in the dictionary. If you don’t see the comparative or superlative right after adj. or adv., then you add more and most. Have two groups compete to form comparatives and superlatives, following these directions: Toss a coin to see which team goes first. That team will think of and chant the comparative or superlative form of an adjective or adverb three times. The other team must respond with the same form of a different adjective or adverb. Example: TEAM 1: “Redder, redder, redder!” TEAM 2: “Better, better, better!” The first team goes three times or until they stump the second team. Then the second team chooses an adjective or adverb and a form. With the Class: Discuss which adjectives and adverbs gave students the most trouble in forming their comparative or superlative forms. 27 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Adjectives and Adverbs When you catch an adjective, kill it. No, I don’t mean utterly, but kill most of them__then the rest will be valuable. They weaken when they are close together. They give strength when they are wide apart. __ Mark Twain Write a short paragraph describing yourself. Be generous—extremely generous—with your adjectives and adverbs. Then give your paragraph to a partner to read. Discuss which adjectives and adverbs you could get rid of to strengthen your writing. On a separate sheet of paper, revise your paragraph. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 28 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Get Rid of ‘Em! All About Prepositions ] Ending a sentence with a preposition is something up with which I will not put. —Winston Churchill • simple and compound prepositions • p repositions with nouns and pronouns in the objective case • prepositional phrases • ending a sentence with a preposition Introduction -/$%, 0!33 !'% EgZedh^i^ Begin a mini-lesson on prepositions by writing a short definition of this part of speech such as the following on the board: “A preposition connects a noun or pronoun to the rest of the sentence: Bandit hid A softwar e program piranhas U5FYUFSJO sent the following UIF8FTU" of the gene text mes sage in just ra Serrasal mus and 16 seconds: the world.1 Pygo cent In reality The razo rus are the they seld r-toothed most fero om attack That was cious fresh a human. a world reco water fish rd until Tess in was tied a Flurry tack behind her led the text back, Tess . In spite a beat that in less than of the fact record. 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May can text in the wor be Tessa in right now ld will have Flurry is ! tapping mes received a text from sages to you and me on her 6 keypads 6[aUV`] N``NTRf\ b±YYRe]Y\_R `VZ]Y aURS\YY\dV RN[QP\ [T' Z]\b[Q ]_R]\ ]_R]\`VaV\[ `VaV\[NY ` ]U_N`R` ]_R]\`VaV\ [`N[Q] _\[\b[` R[QV[TN `R[aR[P ]_R]\`Va RdVaUN V\[ $ZCFS5BMM5 BMF ________ ________ ________ EgZedh^i^ dch it has a lot about behind into on is only of power one word—a nd some simple prep in a sent ence. ositions Fb`X6b` `baF above beside of _____ Date ____ ____ ________ after between are short words, too— but \`c_XCeXc against beyond bf\g\baf at before Distribute a copy of the reproducible A Preposition Puzzle on page 34 to each student. Before students work on their own, tackle the revision of the first sentences with them. Ask students to identify the preposition (in), which noun it connects to the rest of the sentence (tank), and what kind of relationship it shows (space). Point out that the prepositional phrase in the fish tank acts as an adverb because it tells where the key is. Since the phrase acts as an adverb, students might suggest a sentence such as the following: Michael hid the key where the fish live. Compare the clarity and sound of the original and revised sentences. 29 Grammar for off toward in on under onto up to upon To understa with nd how muc without h power sentence a prepositi s—witho on has in ut using a sentence a prepositi adjective , try rewr on. You can s, adverbs, iting one add any and so on. of these other part original sent Your revis s of spee ed sentence ence. ch—nou should have ns, verbs, Michael the same hid his lock meaning er key in as the the fish tank ________ . ________ ________ ________ ________ ____ ____ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ Don’t leav ________ ____ ________ e without ________ ________ me! ________ __ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ____ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ Beyond the ________ ________ ________ trees, the ________ ________ sun is setti ____ _ ________ ng. ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _____ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ Stella quic ________ ________ ________ kly slide ________ s between ________ ________ _ Jason and ________ ________ me. ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _ ________ ________ ________ _ () Apply _ O1V[[MF ng Resour ces prepositi stic Teachi A simple "1SFQPTJUJP ock, Schola ng Resour ces stic Teachi ock, Schola Sarah Glassc ________ Sarah Glassc © 2010 by !#4)6 )49 ________ © 2010 by Grades 6–8 ________ Grades 6–8 Grab ‘Em!, Name ____ ____ Grab ‘Em!, That Really (& That Really Activities Teach Activities under the table.” Distribute copies of the passage “The Fastest Texter in the West: A Cyber Tall Tale” on page 31 to students. Allow time for them to read the passage on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Then use the teaching chart on page 30 to discuss how the writer used prepositions in the passage. (Also see the lesson on phrases and clauses, pages 47–52 and sentences on pages 59–64.) dch 5IF'BTUFT Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources A preposition shows the relationship between a noun or pronoun and the rest of the sentence. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of prepositions: Simple and Compound Prepositions Most prepositions show the relationship of time or space between a noun or pronoun and the rest of the sentence. • It’s usually better to replace compound prepositions with simple prepositions or other parts of speech, for example, at that point in time could be rewritten as then. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The simple preposition of shows the relationship between the noun, genera Serrasalmus and Pygo centrus, and piranhas. It helps shows what kind of piranha are the most ferocious. 2 In spite of is a compound preposition. It could be replaced with a simple preposition: With one hand tied behind her back, Tessa Flurry beat that record. Prepositions and Pronouns in the Objective Case Only pronouns in the objective case—me, you, him, her, it, us, you, them—go with prepositions. KEY POINTS • People often have trouble when they use a preposition followed by a noun and a pronoun or two pronouns: Mr. Luna spoke to Link and I about talking in class. We wouldn’t say or write the following: Mr. Luna spoke to I about talking in class, so I is incorrect. Testing one pronoun at a time with the preposition will help students use the correct case. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 6 Students might be tempted to write this prepositional phrase as to you and I, but have them try using each pronoun independently. They wouldn’t say or write Maybe Tessa Flurry is tapping messages to I on her keypads right now! Prepositional Phrases A prepositional phrase begins with a preposition and ends with a noun or pronoun (the object of the preposition). KEY POINTS • A prepositional phrase can function as an adjective or an adverb. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 Both of these prepositional phrases are adverbs; they both modify the verb sent. • A sentences can have more than one prepositional phrase. 4 Try moving the prepositional phrase to different places. Here’s one example: • Varying the position of prepositional phrases in your sentences can help writing flow more smoothly. Tessa could walk and talk and text different messages from three cell phones—all at the same time—by the time she was two years old! Ending a Sentence With a Preposition A preposition can go at the end of the sentence if it is necessary in the sentence. KEY POINTS • The Churchill quote at the top of page 29 shows how contorted writing can become if we try to avoid ending a sentence with a preposition. If a preposition is necessary to the sentence, it’s okay to end the sentence with it: The bicycle wheel came off. If the preposition isn’t necessary, get rid of it. Write the Churchill quote on the board and ask students how they would rephrase it. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 5 Some people might write this sentence as follows: Tessa Flurry, the Fastest Texter in the West, is the name with which she’s stuck. The revised sentence doesn’t fit the tone of the rest of the tall tale. 30 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources KEY POINTS • The English language contains about 70 simple prepositions, including about, between, on, through, and with. Then there are compound prepositions, such as with respect to and at that point in time. MODEL PASSAGE Prepositions The Fastest Texter in the West: A Cyber Tall Tale A software program sent the following text message in just 16 seconds: The razor-toothed piranhas of the genera Serrasalmus and Pygo centrus are the most ferocious freshwater fish in 1 the world. In reality they seldom attack a human. Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources That was a world record until Tessa Flurry tackled the text. In spite of the fact that one hand 2 was tied behind her back, Tessa beat that record. She sent the message into cyberspace 3 in less than 10 seconds. Tessa Flurry is the fastest texter in the West. She can send 104 messages 3 before most people’s thumbs or fingers even touch their keypads. Just thinking about sending so many messages into cyberspace gives my fingers the cramps! Some say that baby Tessa was found crawling on one hand in the desert, carrying a cell phone in her other hand, searching for a signal. By the time she was two years old, Tessa could 4 walk and talk and text different messages from three different cell phones—at the same time! Nobody knows Tessa’s real last name. They call her Tessa Flurry because she texts so rapidly that the flurry of her fingers on the key pad makes people dizzy. Tessa Flurry, the Fastest Texter in the West, is the name she’s stuck with. 5 At last count, there were about 6,700 different languages in the world. Tessa can text in 3,765 of them! Some people say that soon everyone in the world will have received a text from Tessa. Who knows? Maybe Tessa Flurry is tapping messages to you and me on her keypads 6 right now! In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • simple and compound prepositions • prepositional phrases 31 • prepositions and pronouns • ending a sentence with a preposition WRITING PROMPTS Prepositions $ Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ A Classroom Makeover Take a look around your classroom and think about how you would make it over. Consider questions such as these: Would the classroom have a theme? What colors would you paint it? What kind of coverings Wr ite yo ur ful l respo ns e on a sepa rat e sh eet of pa per. would you put on the windows and the floor? How would you rearrange the furniture? Write a plan describing your makeover. With the Rest of the Class: Which makeover ideas of other students’ did you like? Then talk about how important prepositions were in your plan. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ My Place in the Class Write! Where do you sit in the classroom? Write a short chant describing your position in relation to at least two other students who are nearest to you. For example, who sits in front of you? Behind you? Next to you? To the left of you? Across from you? Here’s an example: Wr ite yo ur ful l respo ns e on a sepa rat e sh eet of pa per. Sitka sits behind me. I sit behind Jason. With the Rest of the Class: Share your chant with the class. Talk about whether you had to think about using objective pronouns in the prepositional phrases you created, or if they seemed to come naturally. 32 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Write! Have you seen home makeover programs on television? Activities: Prepositions Preposition Poetry Ask pairs to collaborate to write a preposition poem. Each line of the poem should begin with a different prepositional phrase. Remind students that a prepositional phrase begins with a preposition and ends with a noun or a pronoun in the objective case: between you and me/from him and me. Encourage pairs to practice doing a choral reading of their poem, in which partners take turns reciting the lines. With the Class: Have pairs perform a choral reading of their poem for the other students. Let Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources them share their creative processes and then ask: How did the prepositional phrases drive the construction of your poem? Is It Under the Clock? Choose a classroom object but don’t reveal what it is. Then give the following directions to the class: •Y our job is to locate an object I’ve picked out in the classroom. Each of you must ask me a question containing a prepositional phrase to try to narrow down the location of the object. For example, you might ask, “Is it under the clock?” • I f the answer is “Yes,” then you get to try to guess what the object is. If the answer is “No,” or you guess incorrectly, then another student takes a turn. Remember to use the answers to help you refine your own question when it’s your turn. The first student to locate the object and identify it gets to choose another object for the class to attempt to identify. With the Class: Call on students to describe how they used prepositions in their questions to help them figure out where the object was and what it was. Move That Phrase! Materials: books and magazines Tell individuals to look through books and magazines to find examples of sentences that use prepositions and prepositional phrases especially well. Have them share some with the group, noting the different positions in which prepositions and prepositional phrases occur in the sentences. Then challenge the group members to take turns adding different prepositional phrases to the following sentence: The bird sat. One group member should write down each new version of the sentence. After everyone has had a chance to contribute a prepositional phrase, the entire group should discuss whether they’d like to revise the sentence and move any of the phrases. Use examples from the groups to discuss what students learned about the placement of prepositional phrases. With the Class: Suggest that groups share and discuss their sentences. Talk about how they decided where to place each prepositional phrase. Ask: What did you learn about the placement of prepositional phrases? Which can be moved easily within a sentence, and which can’t? Why do you think this is so? 33 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Prepositions A Preposition Puzzle A simple preposition is only one word—and some simple prepositions are short words, too—but Some Common Simple Prepositions about above after against at before behind beside between beyond for in into of off on onto to toward under up upon with without To understand how much power a preposition has in a sentence, try rewriting one of these sentences—without using a preposition. You can add any other parts of speech—nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and so on. Your revised sentence should have the same meaning as the original sentence. Michael hid his locker key in the fish tank. _________________________________________________________________________________ _ ________________________________________________________________________________ Don’t leave without me! _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Beyond the trees, the sun is setting. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Stella quickly slides between Jason and me. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 34 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources it has a lot of power in a sentence. 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I’ll go fish much to ing, probab do ly.” The bad news is that the voters incorporatio of Crabb, n, so it didn Texas, vote ’t need a d against Zimmerman mayor or a city gov remained ernment. the mayor. The Paris, Fran Inst good new ead of goin ce, and app s is that Bria g fishing, eared on n 8 he attende the “Today called The d a mayor’s Lone Star ” show. conference There was Kid. in even a mov ie made about his life, Teach Distribute copies of the passage “The Youngest Mayor” on page 37 to students. Allow time for the students to read it on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Then use the teaching guide on page 36 to discuss the agreement of subjects and predicates in the passage. (Also see the lessons on nouns, pages 5–10; verbs, pages 17–22; and sentences, pages 59–64.) Zci FTU.BZPS mayors. Sarah Glassc Activities Begin a mini-lesson on subject-verb agreement by writing a short definition of this essential part of a sentence on the board, such as: “The subject is what or whom the sentence is about. The predicate tells who or what the subject is or does. The subject determines whether the verb in the predicate should be singular or plural: The students in the band practice twice a week.” ted young mayors of Harper Lee was nearly thirteen, my brother his arm bad ly broken at the elbo w.” Subject Predicate 2010 by Introduction ns have elec 1 n elected Z6\gZZb 5IF:PVOH s and tow Agree? Grades 6–8 © • subjects • predicates Grammar )% 35 Activities Give a copy of the Those Are Some Sentences! reproducible on page 40 to each student. It shows sentence structures from different works of literature. Go over the first one with students and work with them to identify the simple subject and predicate and then the complete subject and predicate. Talk about differences in structure between the first and last sentences of each work and among the different authors. You can also use this reproducible with the lesson on sentences, pages 59–64. That Really Grab ‘Em!, ld be ther e all nigh would be t, and he there whe n Jem wak in the mor ed up ning.” Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources —Carolyn Chute Subjects The most important part of the subject is its noun, or simple subject. KEY POINTS • Other nouns may be closer to the simple predicate than the simple subject is, so it’s important to identify the correct noun as the subject. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 The noun United States is part of a prepositional phrase that separates the simple subject mayor from the simple predicate was. 8 Since news is a singular noun, the predicate must contain a singular verb. • The words there and here are never the subjects of a sentence. Remind students to rewrite sentences such as There are sixteen people in the class, to make the subject and predicate clear: Sixteen people are in the class. The main verb, or simple predicate, helps us identify the subject. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 6 The subject in this sentence is catch. You can see that it’s singular when you rewrite it: A catch is there, though. KEY POINTS • Remind students to watch out for using plural subjects with the contraction there’s: There’s no rules about doing homework. (incorrect agreement) 7 The simple predicate is replied. Who replied? Zimmerman replied. You could also rewrite this sentence: Zimmerman replied, when he was asked what he would do if he lost his job as mayor, “I don’t know.” There are no rules about doing homework. (correct agreement) • If students are unsure what the subject is, they can find the verb and then ask, “Who or what did that?” Compound Subjects A compound subject is two or more subjects joined by a conjunction—and, or. KEY POINTS • If and joins the subjects, the subjects are plural and take a plural verb. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 Each of these subjects is plural, but subjects joined by and always take a plural verb. • If or joins the subjects, the subject immediately before the verb determines whether the verb is singular or plural: My father or my sisters are coming to the show. 4 Traffic—a collective noun, which is always singular—determines that the verb (was) is singular. Compound Predicates A compound predicate is two or more predicates joined by a conjunction. KEY POINTS • No matter which conjunction is used, all the verbs in the compound predicate must agree with each other—and the subject. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 The predicate, have run for and have been elected, refers to the same subject—eighteen-yearolds. It could also be written as, Eighteen-year-olds have run for and been elected. . . . 5 Ask who would be governed by Houston and who would have to pay city taxes. The people would. Again, this compound predicate shares the same subject, people. 36 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Predicates MODEL PASSAGE Subject-Predicate Agreement The Youngest Mayor Many cities and towns have elected young mayors. Eighteen-year-olds have run for and 2 1 have been elected mayors of Union, Oregon; Mount Carbon, Pennsylvania; and Roland, Iowa, but the youngest mayor in the United States was 11 years old! Voters in the small town of 3 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Crabb, Texas, selected Brian Zimmerman as their mayor in 1983. Crabb, Texas, is close to Houston. It was an unincorporated town, so it didn’t have a city government. Instead, taxes, road repairs, or traffic was handled by the county. Brian Zimmerman 4 was worried that Houston might annex Crabb. If that happened, his town would become part of Houston. The people who lived in Crabb would be governed by Houston and would have to pay 5 5 city taxes. Zimmerman thought Crabb should incorporate. Then it couldn’t be gobbled up by Houston or another large community. Crabb could govern itself. There’s a catch, though. If Crabb did incorporate, Mayor 6 Zimmerman would lose his job. According to Texas law, the mayor of an incorporated city has to be 18 years old. When he was asked what he would do if he lost his job as mayor, Zimmerman replied, “I don’t know. There isn’t that much to do 7 around here. I’ll go fishing, probably.” The bad news is that the voters of Crabb, Texas, voted against incorporation, so it didn’t need a mayor or a city government. The good news is that Brian 8 Zimmerman remained the mayor. Instead of going fishing, he attended a mayor’s conference in Paris, France, and appeared on the “Today” show. There was even a movie made about his life, called The Lone Star Kid. In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • simple and compound subjects • simple and compound predicates 37 WRITING PROMPTS Subject-Predicate Agreement $ Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Write! Most towns and cities have city councils. Explain whether you think your town or city should have a student representative on the city council—and whether you’d be interested in running for the position. Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. Read over your work to make sure that all subjects and predicates agree. With the Rest of the Class: What do most students think about this issue? Are many interested in serving as a student representative in your community? Then share any subjects and predicates whose agreement you’re unsure about. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Striped Pants, a Yellow Tank Top, and No Socks Write! Suppose you could judge a book by its cover. What would your clothing reveal about you? Write in detail about one of the following outfits, and how your clothing might affect people’s ideas about you: • the outfit you’re wearing today Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. • your favorite outfit Read over your work, paying special attention to any compound subjects and/or compound predicates you used. For compound subjects, did you follow these rules? • If the subjects are joined by and, use a plural verb. • If the subjects are joined by or, the verb in the predicate should agree with the last subject: A yellow tank top or green socks are on my list. Green socks or a yellow tank top is on my list. With the Rest of the Class: Share the details of your outfit, and explain why you chose to describe that outfit. How did you use compound subjects and/or compound predicates? 38 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Listen to Our Voices Activities: Subject-Predicate Agreement “Agreement or No Agreement?” Game Show Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Materials: 10 envelopes numbered 1–10, slips of paper, marker, paper bag, play money This game is based on the game show “Deal or No Deal.” Write five different singular verbs and five different plural verbs on slips of paper and put each slip in a numbered envelope. Then write five different singular nouns (including collective nouns) and five different plural nouns on slips of paper and put them in the paper bag. The game will need a host, a player, ten students to hold envelopes, a banker, and an audience. The player draws a noun from the bag. Then play begins. The player selects envelopes one at a time. If the simple subject and simple predicate agree, the banker gives him or her a set amount of money. If they don’t agree, then the player can earn the money by making them agree. The player can earn more money by creating a sentence containing the simple subject and predicate. With the Class: Talk about the following questions: Which subjects and predicates were the trickiest to place in agreement? How could you make the game more difficult? That’s a Fine Kettle of Hawks Materials: computer, index cards, markers Collective nouns name different groups of the same kind of animals. For instance, a group of hippos is called a bloat and a group of hawks is called a kettle. Challenge groups to find out the collective nouns for at least five different animals. A good resource on the Internet is the San Diego Zoo Web site at http://www.sandiegozoo.org/animalbytes/got_questions_groups_list.html. Students should create a fact card for each group of animals, including the group name, text with full sentences, and photos or illustrations. With the Class: Ask: Why does it make sense that a collective noun would take a singular verb? Compound Meals Materials: a variety of take-out menus, drawing paper and markers Ask groups to study the take-out menus and then design one of their own. They should decide what kind of food they want to serve and divide their menu into the following categories: appetizers, salads, main courses, and desserts. For each food item, groups should write a brief description, using complete sentences, and make the food, sound as mouth-wateringly delicious as they can. Then they trade menus with another group and look at its menu with the eyes of a restaurant critic. Each group draws up several sample meals that the members might order to review the restaurant and explain why those foods appeal to them. They should use compound subjects in their sample meals, and include the conjunctions or and and. Remind students to try to use compound predicates whenever they can. With the Class: Discuss these questions: How did the descriptions on the menu influence your choice of food to try? Which was more difficult—creating compound subjects or compound predicates? 39 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Subject-Predicate Agreement Those Are Some Sentences! Here are the first and last sentences from well-known works of literature. Can you identify the from Holes by Louis Sachar FIRST: Subject Predicate Agree? Subject Predicate Agree? Subject Predicate Agree? “There is no lake at Camp Green Lake.” LAST: “And hardly anything was green.” from The Moviegoer by Walker Percy FIRST: “This morning I got a note from my aunt asking me to come for lunch.” LAST: “I watch her walk toward St Charles, cape jasmine held against her cheek, until my brothers and sisters call out behind me.” from To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee FIRST: “When he was nearly thirteen, my brother Jem got his arm badly broken at the elbow.” LAST: “He would be there all night, and he would be there when Jem waked up in the morning.” 40 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources simple subject and predicate in each one? Do they agree? Complete each chart. All About Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives ] The words of the world want to make sentences. —Gaston Bachelard • gerunds: nouns • participles: adjectives • infinitives: nouns, adjectives, and adverbs Introduction Begin a mini-lesson by reading aloud the Bachelard quote at the top of the page. Explain that some of those “words of the world” are gerunds, participles, and infinitives. Write a short definition of each and an example, such as the following, on the board: • A gerund is formed by adding –ing to a verb. It always acts as a noun: Dancing to music makes me happy. • A participle is formed by adding –ing or –ed to a verb. It always acts as an adjective: The dancing girl turned up the volume on her overloaded iPod. • A n infinitive is formed by adding to in front of the verb. It can act as a 8SPOH4JEF noun, adjective, or adverb: PGUIF#FE To dance is my dream. (noun: subject) I have a date to dance on Saturday. (adjective modifying date) I went to the gym to dance. 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(pas <aÐa\g\iXf to + verb : to smile, to break, to be s are used as nouns, adjective s, and adve rbs. t participle ) © 2010 by Infinitive Apply of three hours ever g all your y day. (nou teeth is the n) best way genuinely to smile , a person widely. (adje must be ctive) truly happ y. (adverb) )+ Distribute a copy of the Who We Are reproducible on page 52 to each student. Use it with students to document all the gerunds, participles, and infinitives in the model passage. Encourage them to record the gerunds, participles, and infinitives they see in other print sources. You also may want to refer them back to this reproducible in the next lesson, on phrases and clauses, pages 47–52. Grab ‘Em!, e for a total Activities That Really To smile is to smil Grammar Displayin Grades 6–8 8K4@C?8F My goal 41 _ kZh SF infinitive verb + –ing Gerunds Date ____ ____ aZh!VcY 8IP8F" ciples, and g Resour ces Grab ‘Em!, Distribute copies of the passage “Wrong Side of the Bed” on page 43 to students. Allow time for them to read the passage on their own, or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Use the teaching chart on page 42 to discuss how the writer uses gerunds, participles, and infinitives in the passage. kZh tic Teachin That Really Teach >cÐc^i^ ck, Scholas Activities (Also see the lesson on phrases and clauses, pages 47–52.) aZh!VcY Waking up on the wron 1 g side of see, my bed the bed sent sits tight me swim in a corn ming in spac er of my and so does bedroom e—literal the right ly. Really! . The head2 side. I wok You of the bed through e up on the butts up my bedroom right side against a wall and of the bed, wall into an alter ounce gupp which mea nate univ y in a huge ns I wen erse. Sudd t right fish tank enly, I felt sink. Look . My arms as weightles ing down, and feet began to I realized s as a two4 move invo that I wasn Then I reali luntarily ’t treading 3 zed that as I bega water—I I was drift n to 4 was tread Saturn. 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I owe for that shut tle ride? . . . 6[aUV`]N ``NTRf\ !#4)6 b±YYRe]Y\ _RaU )49 Name ____ TR RS\YY\d _b[Q` ________ V[T' ________ ]N_aVPV ________ ________ ]YR` ________ V[SV[Va ________ ________ VcR` _ Sarah Glassco Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Gerunds, participles, and infinitives are formed from verbs, but each performs a different function in a sentence. This mini-lesson focuses on the following: Gerunds To create a gerund, add –ing to the end of a verb. KEY POINTS • A gerund is used as a noun. • Students may find it difficult to tell the difference between a gerund and a present participle. Emphasize that to identify a gerund correctly they will have to understand which part of speech the word is. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 To find the subject of this sentence, ask yourself, “What sent the writer swimming in space?” The complete subject is Waking up on the wrong side of the bed. Since Waking is used as a noun, it’s a gerund. 7 Notice that there is no punctuation setting off the gerund from the rest of the sentence. Gerunds don’t require any punctuation. To create a present participle, add –ing to the end of a verb. To create a past participle, add –ed to the end of a verb. KEY POINTS • A participle is used as an adjective. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 Swimming is a present participle because it acts as an adjective modifying me. • A present participle ends in –ing. A past participle usually ends in –ed. • Some past participles have irregular forms: the bent or broken branch. 4 Both uses of treading are verbs; they go with the verb was. Looking is a present participle. 6 Burned by the sun and bitten by the cold are adjectives describing the writer. Both are past participles, and bitten is an irregular participle. Infinitives To create an infinitive, add to before a verb. KEY POINTS • An infinitive can be used as a noun, adjective, or adverb. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 Some verbs, such as begin, decide, agree, and want, are followed by infinitives. • Students may confuse infinitives with prepositional phrases. Remind them that an infinitive consists of to plus a verb, while a prepositional phrase consists of to plus a noun or a pronoun. 5 This sentence contains a split infinitive—the adverb quickly splits the infinitive to get. • It’s really okay to split an infinitive. This myth got started because a lot of our language comes from Latin words. You can’t split infinitives in Latin because in Latin the infinitive is simply the verb without to before it. 42 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Participles MODEL PASSAGE Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives Wrong Side of the Bed Waking up on the wrong side of the bed sent me swimming in space—literally. Really! You 2 1 see, my bed sits tight in a corner of my bedroom. The head of the bed butts up against a wall and so does the right side. I woke up on the right side of the bed, which means I went right Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources through my bedroom wall and into an alternate universe. Suddenly, I felt as weightless as a twoounce guppy in a huge fish tank. My arms and feet began to move involuntarily as I began to 3 sink. Looking down, I realized that I wasn’t treading water—I was treading air! 4 4 Then I realized that I was drifting past the hazy rings of 4 Saturn. I grabbed one of the rings and held on until I could figure out how to quickly get home. A comet shot past me, 5 but I was able to reach out and grab its tail. The speeding comet dropped me off 500,000,000 miles from home. That left only 2,569,838,008 miles to go! I was too close to an undiscovered planet and got pulled into its orbit. Burned by the sun and then bitten by the cold, I spun around that hot and cold 6 6 planet for hours and hours. Fortunately, a shuttle ship from another galaxy stopped and plucked me out of the planet’s orbit. Watching Earth from the shuttle’s window was fun, but then the 7 sight made me homesick. I made a whispered wish: I wish I were home in bed. Then I was! Don’t ask me to tell you how. I wonder how much money I owe for that shuttle ride? . . . In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • gerunds • participles • infinitives 43 WRITING PROMPTS Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Write! What is your least favorite chore or job to do around the house? Explain why you dislike doing this chore so much. Make readers really feel how much you dislike it. With the Rest of the Class: Exchange your writing with a partner. Wr ite yo ur full resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. After reading each other’s work, compare and contrast the chores and your response to them. Then talk about how you used gerunds, participles, and/or infinitives in your writing. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ The Three Faces of . . . Write! Read the passage “Wrong Side of the Bed” again. Think about the elements that go into writing a fantasy. Then write your own fantasy passage. Before you begin writing, think of a verb. In your passage include three forms of that verb— Wr ite yo ur full resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. gerund, participle, and infinitive. Read over your work to make sure you’ve used all three forms of the verb, and that you’ve used each one correctly. With the Rest of the Class: Exchange passages with a partner. See if you can identify which verb he or she included and find all its forms. 44 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Don’t Make Me Do That! Activities: Gerunds, Participles, And Infinitives What Did Shakespeare Mean? Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources The title character in Hamlet, by William Shakespeare, says the following: To be or not to be, that is the question: Whether ’tis nobler in the mind to suffer The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune, Or to take arms against a sea of troubles, And by opposing end them. To die, to sleep; No more; and by a sleep to say we end The heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks That flesh is heir to—’tis a consummation Devoutly to be wish’d. To die, to sleep; To sleep, perchance to dream. . . . Write Hamlet’s soliloquy on the board or make copies for the group. Have members take turns reading it aloud. What do they think Hamlet means? Guide them in a rewrite of his speech using modern-day language. With the Class: As a class, talk about Shakespeare’s use of infinitives. How do the infinitives help the rhythm and flow of the speech? How did groups incorporate infinitives into their revision? Participle Poetry Have students think about a noun to write a poem about. It could be something as concrete as leaf or as abstract as freedom. The title of the poem is the noun selected. Challenge pairs to write the poem using only participles to describe the noun. With the Class: After pairs practice, ask them to perform a choral reading of their poem for the class and then discuss how they created their poem. Is “to” Your BFF? Does “–ing” Follow You Around? Play a grammar game featuring gerunds, participles, and infinitives. Here are the rules: Three people are contestants and the rest of the class is the audience. The teacher assigns the gerund, participle, or infinitive form of the same verb to each contestant, for example: Contestant 1—irritating (gerund), Contestant 2—irritating (present participle), Contestant 3—to irritate. Then the teacher challenges the audience to ask questions to identify one of the forms, for example: “Which contestant is a participle that means ‘annoying’”? The audience takes turns asking each contestant a question to find the answer— without asking obvious questions such as “Are you a participle?” With the Class: Discuss the following questions: Which was the easiest form to identify—gerunds, participles, or infinitives? What made it difficult to identify irregular forms of participles? Which questions helped you tell the difference between a gerund and a present participle? 45 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Gerunds, Participles, and Infinitives Who We Are Add examples of gerunds, participles, and infinitives you come across in the passage. verb + –ing: smiling, going Gerunds are used as nouns. EXAMPLES: Smiling for too long makes my face hurt. He was sent to the principal’s office for going to the gym without permission. Terrence was upset by our leaving the party early. Participles verb + –ing or –ed: grinning, grinned; tearing, torn Present participles are formed by adding –ing to the end of the verb. Past participles are formed by adding –ed to the end of the verb. However, some past participles have irregular forms: bringing, brought; seeing, saw. Participles are used as adjectives. EXAMPLES: The grinning boy made me smile, too. (present participle) A dusty lace curtain, tattered and torn, swung in the lazy breeze. (past participle) Infinitives to + verb: to smile, to break, to be Infinitives are used as nouns, adjectives, and adverbs. EXAMPLES: My goal is to smile for a total of three hours every day. (noun) Displaying all your teeth is the best way to smile widely. (adjective) To smile genuinely, a person must be truly happy. (adverb) 46 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Gerunds All About Phrases and Clauses ] [Henry] James would agonize for hours over a single sentence, refining and refining it until sometimes only his most devoted readers cared to thread their way through the innumerable clauses he found necessary for communication of his exact meaning. A phrase is a group of words without a subject or a predicate. A clause contains a subject and a predicate. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of phrases and clauses: • • • • prepositional phrases gerund, participial, and infinitive phrases independent and dependent clauses restrictive and nonrestrictive clause Introduce Share the quote at the top of the page with students. Then write the following sentence from The Golden Bowl by Henry James on the board or display it onscreen: “This situation has been occupying for months and months the very centre of the garden of her life, but it had reared itself there like some strange tall tower of ivory, or perhaps rather some wonderful beautiful but outlandish pagoda, a structure plated with hard bright porcelain, coloured and figured and adorned at the overhanging eaves with silver bells that tinkled ever so charmingly when stirred by chance airs.” Are students able to thread their way through the sentence? Do they agree with Myrick Land’s quote? Tell them that they’ll be learning about the kinds of phrases and clauses Henry James used in this long sentence. Share with students the definitions in the box. Teach -/$%, 0!33 !'% E]gVhZh VcY8aVj Give a copy of the passage “Wild Horse Annie” on page 49 to each student. Allow time for students to read the passage on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Use the teaching chart on page 48 to discuss how the writer used phrases and clauses in the passage. (Also see the lessons on prepositions, pages 29–34; gerunds, participles, and infinitives, pages 41–46; and sentences, pages 59–64.) When Velm Really Grab ‘Em!, Grades VcY8aVj Scholastic T$T Teaching Resources *' Grab ‘Em!, That Really Activities r way hom e today, look at the down som cars in the e of the bumper school park sticker slog Save spac ing lot and ans you e by usin on the road see. Now g only a . Write create you phrase or r own bum a clause for your per sticker slogan. slogan. Grades 6–8 © 2010 by Sarah Glassc an rb. Let’s go s!gerund out to the ball game phrase adverb show is always ! 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Before 1959 is a prepositional phrase because it doesn’t have a subject or a verb. 7 The phrase to factories is a prepositional phrase because there is no verb. Gerund, Participial, and Infinitive Phrases KEY POINTS • Briefly review how gerunds, present and past participles, and infinitives are formed from verbs, and which part(s) of speech each can become. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 This is an infinitive phrase because it begins with the infinitive to stop. Notice that it also contains a gerund phrase and two prepositional phrases. • You’ll often see prepositional phrases embedded in these types of phrases. 5 Riding in airplanes and on horseback is a gerund phrase because it begins with the gerund Riding and is the subject of the sentence. 6 This is a participial phrase because it begins with the past participle packed. Independent and Dependent Clauses A clause contains a subject and a verb. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 The subordinating conjunction when introduces this dependent clause. KEY POINTS • An independent clause can stand alone as a sentence or be joined to another independent clause with a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon. 8 Since the dependent clause Although she received death threats appears before an independent clause, it’s set off by a comma. • An independent clause following a dependent clause is set off with a comma. • Although a dependent clause has a subject and predicate, it can’t stand alone because it begins with a relative pronoun—who, that, which, what—or a subordinating conjunction—if, when, before, since. 9 The coordinating conjunction and joins these two independent clauses. Each clause could be a separate sentence. Restrictive and Nonrestrictive Clauses Restrictive clauses are necessary in the sentence. Nonrestrictive clauses are not. KEY POINTS • Restrictive clauses contribute to the meaning of the sentence, while nonrestrictive clauses can be cut from a sentence without affecting the meaning. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 Without the clause who nicknamed her, the sentence wouldn’t make sense. • For consistency and simplicity, advise students to use that with restrictive clauses and which with nonrestrictive clauses. 10 The fact that Wild Horse Annie had polio as a child is interesting, but it’s not essential to the meaning of the sentence. That’s why this nonrestrictive clause is set off by commas. • Nonrestrictive clauses are set off with commas. 48 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources These phrases are formed from verbs. MODEL PASSAGE Phrases and Clauses Wild Horse Annie When Velma B. Johnston got the nickname of “Wild Horse Annie,” it wasn’t a compliment. 1 Johnston was trying to stop the killing of wild horses and burros in Nevada and the rest 2 of the west. The person who nicknamed her didn’t want the wild animals to be saved. 3 Before 1959, it was legal in Nevada to hunt wild horses and burros on public land from the air. 4 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Riding in airplanes and on horseback, hunters chased and then captured the animals. The horses 5 and burros, packed into trucks, were taken to factories where they’d be sold for food. 7 6 Johnston began her campaign to protect the wild animals in 1950. She started talking about the problem to people in Storey County, Nevada, where she lived. Johnston spoke to school children, ranchers, politicians, and ranchers. Although she received death threats, she didn’t give up. Nevada enacted legislation to protect the wild 8 animals, and then the federal government did, too. 9 The federal Wild Free-Roaming Horse and Burro Act protects these wild animals on public lands. Wild Horse Annie, who had polio as a child, 10 also went on to create refuges for wild horses. Today, when the number of wild horses and burros grows too large, they are placed for adoption. People who are interested in giving them homes can contact the Bureau of Land Management at http://www.blm.gov/wo/st/en/prog/wild_horse_and_burro.html. In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • • • • prepositional phrases gerund, participial, and infinitive phrases independent and dependent clauses restrictive and nonrestrictive clauses 49 WRITING PROMPTS Phrases and Clauses Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ Taking the Lead Write! Choose one of the following phrases or clauses and include it in the lead of a scary • in the darkness at the top of the stairs Wr ite yo ur full resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. • whose hair turned white overnight • that made the dog howl • listening to the black silence • to reach the safety of my room • which hurtled through the window • burned into the wallpaper With the Rest of the Class: Discuss the following questions: How did you use the phrase and clause to help you set the mood of your story? What other phrases and clauses appear in your story? $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ We Want You! Write! Think about your class. What qualities and characteristics do students have that help the class function well? What kinds of behavior throw the class off track and make it difficult to learn? Based on your thoughts, write a Want Ad for the perfect student for your class. Spell out the following requirements, and add any others that you think of: What kind of experience should the student have? What skills should the student possess? What will the student be expected to do? Check your use of phrases and clauses to make sure your ad is clear. With the Rest of the Class: Post your ads on the bulletin board. Then find an ad that you want to respond to. Write a brief letter explaining your interest in the job and why you would be perfect for it. 50 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources short story. ACTIVITIES: Phrases and Clauses It’s Just a Phrase I’m Going Through Each member of the group chooses a favorite song and writes down the title and lyrics. Then, as a group, they point out and identify any phrases—prepositional, gerund, participial, and infinitive—that they notice, including a phrase within a phrase, such as “standing in the shadows of love.” Next, groups use their knowledge of phrases to write the lyrics to a group song. Here are the guidelines: • Start with a song title that’s a phrase. Don’t force a phrase into the song just because it’s a phrase, but make it a natural and rhythmic addition to the song. Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources • If anyone is musical or plays an instrument, set your lyrics to music. With the Class: Ask each group to share its lyrics with another group and talk about how the phrases they chose enhance the meaning of the song. I’m an Independent! I Am, Too! As a class, decide on a topic to write about. Have individual students write one independent clause about that topic. Then let everyone circulate around the room and try to join his or her independent clause with another independent clause to create a sentence that makes sense. Students have to decide whether to use a coordinating conjunction—and which one—or a semicolon to join the clauses. Keep students circulating to see how many independent clauses they can add to their original clause. With the Class: Ask: Who created the sentence with the most clauses? Does the sentence make sense? Who created the most pleasing sentence? How did using a semicolon or a certain conjunction change the flow of the sentence? Is That Really Necessary? Present the following activity to pairs: An aside is a remark that not everyone is supposed to hear. For instance, an actor may say something directly to the audience that the other characters can’t hear. Nonrestrictive clauses make great asides. Write a short skit about an argument between two characters. Include asides in the form of nonrestrictive clauses. You can use a format like the one shown below or develop your own. Lars: The piece of pie that you ate was mine. I can’t believe you ate it, Max! (to the audience) Max! Who is always doing something like this! Max: I didn’t see your name carved into the crust. (to the audience) The crust! Which was so light and flaky and tasty! Practice your skit, and be sure to place special emphasis on the asides. With the Class: Pairs should perform their skit for the class. After each performance, pose the following questions: Does everyone agree that all the asides are nonrestrictive clauses because they are unnecessary to the skit? If some of the asides are really restrictive clauses, how can you incorporate them into the body of the skit? 51 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ Phrases and Clauses Mind Your Ps & Cs A phrase is a group of words without a subject or a predicate. A clause contains a subject and a Types of Phrases Examples • A prepositional phrase can be used as an adjective or an adverb. Let’s go out to the ball game! (prepositional phrase as an adverb showing where) • A gerund phrase is always used as a noun. Driving to the ball game took over an hour. (gerund phrase as the subject) • A participial phrase is always used as an adjective. The fan, alarmed by the speeding ball, ducked before it hit him. (participial phrase as an adjective modifying fan) • An infinitive phrase can be used as a noun, an adjective, or an adverb. To see her favorite player, Jorga stood outside the team’s dressing room. (infinitive phrase as an adverb showing why) Types of Clauses Examples • An independent clause can stand alone, but it can also be joined to another independent clause by a coordinating conjunction—and, but, or, nor, neither, yet, for, so—or a semicolon. The traffic was even worse on the way home, so I closed my eyes and went to sleep. (two independent clauses joined by so) • A dependent clause begins with a relative pronoun—who, which, that, what, whoever, whichever, whatever—or a subordinating conjunction, such as when, before, after, since, or although. Although music was blaring out of the cars and drivers were honking their horns, I slept the whole way home. (dependent clause introduced by although) • A restrictive clause is necessary to a sentence. It begins with the relative pronoun that or who. The Toyota that had the busted muffler was the loudest car. (restrictive clause) • A nonrestrictive clause is not necessary to a sentence. It begins with the relative pronoun which or who and is set off by commas. The Toyota, which is the kind of car I want, was the loudest car. (nonrestrictive clause) On your way home today, look at the cars in the school parking lot and on the road. Write down some of the bumper sticker slogans you see. Now create your own bumper sticker slogan. Save space by using only a phrase or a clause for your slogan. 52 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources predicate. There are different types of phrases, including the ones shown below. All About Specificity ] Whoever writes English is involved in a struggle that never lets up even for a sentence. He is struggling against vagueness, against obscurity, against the lure of the decorative adjective, against the encroachment of Latin and Greek, and, above all, against the worn-out phrases and dead metaphors with which the language is cluttered up. Specificity is in the details—not too many and not too few. Specificity is finding the one word that will take the place of two or four or more. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of specificity: adding details to enhance clarity adding details to make writing more descriptive removing unnecessary words and phrases using technical terms Introduction -/$%, 0!33 !'% HeZX^Ð X^in Write a short definition of specificity, such as the following, on the board: “Specificity isn’t a part of speech, but it uses every part of speech. Specificity isn’t a part of a sentence—it is the sentence: The sun sparked a fire in the crispy grass.” A cumulon imbus clou d, the talle and its hea st type of d rises in cloud, form a towerin 1 s in the sky. g column. a giant mus Its base is At its very hroom in several mile top, the 2 the sky. Ligh s wide, cloud spre unravels tning flas ads out aga from the DVNVMPOJN hes insid CVT in. It look base of the e the clou s like cloud. Tou the funnel d. 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How wou rs of the ld you desc two objects? ribe the simi _________ Compare larities _________ them in the _______ Venn diag ___ ram belo _________ w. _________ ____ BU]XVg% _________ without using the _________ _________ adjective _________ _________ black. _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ __ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ _________ Repeat this _________ _________ _________ activity for _________ _________ other sen __ and a swe ses: a salt _________ et smell. y or sour _________ taste, a soft _________ sound, a __ rough surf ace, _________ _________ *- Sarah Glassc h object _________ 2010 by color of eac _________ Grades 6–8 © cribe the _________ Grab ‘Em!, Now des BU]XVg$ _________ ock, Schola stic Teach ing Resou rces 5bg[ That Really Bring in several familiar items such as a pair of dress shoes and a coffee mug that are black, and place them around the room. Distribute the reproducible Shades of Black on page 58. If possible, display a copy onscreen. Model the activity by selecting two items and beginning to describe them. Ask students for their input to add specificity and contrast. Then have them complete the reproducible on their own. _________ >8>IN What do Apply _________ HE:8>; Activities Ask students to define the word specific and to give synonyms for it such as exact, detailed, precise. Then distribute copies of the passage “Like a Tornado” on page 55 to students. Allow time for them to read the passage on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Explain that the writer has already revised the first paragraph for specificity. Then use the teaching guide on page 54 for tips for discussing specificity. Grammar • • • • Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources —George Orwell Adding Details to Enhance Clarity Don’t assume that your reader knows everything you know about a subject. KEY POINTS • It’s always surprising to realize that the ideas in our mind didn’t make it to the page. This is why it’s particularly important to have someone read our work and ask us questions. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 4 As she wrote, the writer wondered whether she needed to define the word phenomena. 5 The details in this sentence not only help explain what a gust front is, but also show how a gustnado got its name. 6 This sentence describes what a dust devil looks like and how it moves. Look for words that don’t stretch you or the reader. Replace them with words that may surprise the reader—and you. KEY POINTS • Adding sensory details involves more than describing a cat as black or a rose as sweet-smelling. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 Deleting long and inserting cone-shaped creates a more specific picture of the tornado as it’s being born. • As students refine the nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs they use in a piece of writing, urge them to take creative risks. 8 The compound predicate wrapped and trapped accurately describes what happens to the smoke or steam—and it rhymes. • Encourage students to make their own associations with certain colors, smells, tastes, sounds, and textures to add freshness to their writing. Removing Unnecessary Words and Phrases As you revise your work, look for words and phrases that are repeated unnecessarily. KEY POINTS • In our eagerness to make a point, it can be easy to oversell it. Writers have to read their work to spot repeated words or phrases that don’t help emphasize a point or intensify an experience. We also have to seek out adjectives and adverbs that smother the words they modify. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 The prepositional phrase in the sky isn’t necessary because the only place clouds form is in the sky. Using Technical Terms Define technical terms or give solid context clues so readers will understand them. KEY POINTS • In speaking or writing, it’s essential that our audience understands what we’re saying. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 In this sentence, the tallest type of cloud helps define the technical word cumulonimbus. • Remind students to define technical terms clearly in their writing and to ask for your help if the terms are confusing. 7 The writer includes “(?)” because she wasn’t sure if readers would understand that a vortex is a spinning flow of air. • Context clues may help some readers, but a simple and concise definition will reach more of the audience. 54 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Adding Details to Make Writing More Descriptive MODEL PASSAGE Specificity Like a Tornado A cumulonimbus cloud, the tallest type of cloud, forms in the sky. Its base is several miles wide, 1 2 and its head rises in a towering column. At its very top, the cloud spreads out again. It looks like cumulonimbus cone-shaped a giant mushroom in the sky. Lightning flashes inside the ^ cloud. Then a long, thin, ^ funnel 3 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources unravels from the base of the cloud. Touching the ground, the funnel spins at 100 miles per hour. It’s a tornado! Rapidly rotating winds create other kinds of weather phenomena (events?) including gustnadoes, 4 dust devils, fire whirls, and steam devils. Because these phenomena don’t descend from clouds, they aren’t classified as tornadoes. A gustnado occurs on the gust front of a thunderstorm. In a gust front, cool air rushes, or gusts, 5 down and out of the storm. The swirling funnel may look like a weak tornado, but it builds from the ground up instead of from the clouds down. A dust devil forms on hot, clear days. This swirling column of air skips along the ground, 6 turning the same color as the earth as it picks up dirt and other debris. A fire whirl is a spinning vortex (?) of hot air and gases that rises from an intense wildfire. 7 The whirl carries smoke, flames, and debris inside it. A steam devil can form at places that emit large amounts of smoke or steam, such as power plant smokestacks and desert hot springs. The smoke or steam is wrapped and trapped inside a 8 rotating column of rising air. In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • • • • adding details to enhance clarity adding details to make writing more descriptive removing unnecessary words and phrase using technical terms 55 WRITING PROMPTS Specificity Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ A Penny for Your Thoughts/Your Thoughts for a Penny details on the coin that you may have missed before. Think about how the penny feels in your hand or when you rub your finger across its surface. How does it smell? Based on the smell, how do you think the penny would taste? (Don’t put it in your mouth—use your other senses to help you describe what the taste would be like!) Jot down any ideas or images you think of. Then write a paragraph describing the penny. Be as specific as you can about the coin. With the Rest of the Class: Exchange descriptions with a partner. Read over each other’s work. Write down any questions you have and any words and phrases you thought were specific and original. How did those words and phrases help you see the penny even more clearly? $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date ______________ What?! Materials: dictionary Write! Rewrite the paragraph below to make it more specific and descriptive. Carrion flowers smell bad. (Buzzards eat carrion.) Flowers that smell sweet attract bees and hummingbirds. Flowers that smell bad attract flies and beetles and other ugly insects. Starfish flowers grow in Africa. They’re pretty, but they smell really bad. They look like starfish. With the Rest of the Class: Talk about how you tackled the rewrite. Which details did you add? Which details did you remove? How were you able to make the paragraph more descriptive, even though you probably haven’t ever seen—or smelled—a carrion flower? 56 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Materials: penny, magnifying glass Write! Take a few minutes to examine a penny. Use a magnifying glass to help you see ACTIVITIES: Specificity A Tantalizingly Tasty Menu Materials: drawing paper, colored paper, colored pencils and markers Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Tempt students with the following activity: Suppose you walk into a pizza kitchen that holds any ingredient you could wish for, and you get to create your own special pizza. You can choose the kind of crust—thick, thin, whole wheat, peanut butter—sauce, toppings, and cheese. Write and illustrate a detailed description of your pizza for a class pizza menu. Even if your favorite pizza is a cheese pizza, be specific about the kind of cheese(s) and how tantalizingly tasty it is—and why. Finally, give your pizza a name that will make everyone’s mouth water. With the Class: Call on students to share the description of their special pizza. Find out which specific details in the descriptions made the other students’ stomachs flip with hunger. Then have the class create a pizza menu that features all their special pizzas. (Maybe you can convince a local pizzeria to add them to its menu!) Just the Facts, Please Materials: large index cards, markers or pens Ask pairs who they think the five most important people in the world are and to create a list. After pairs research each person’s life and accomplishments, they should make a set of Top Five trading cards featuring their top five picks. Tell them to choose their words carefully and to be specific and concise—because they can use only 25 words, in complete sentences, on each card. With the Class: Based on everyone’s Top Five trading cards, compile a class list of the most important people in the world. Combine and refine the information from the original trading cards to create a new set of the Top Five trading cards for the class choices. Technical Translation “Hire” groups to write and produce a television commercial for one of the following businesses: • bicycle shop • iPod/MP3 player repair shop • dental clinic • fish and reptile store • sandwich shop They must use technical words and phrases in the script for their commercial—without translating them into everyday English. Then groups should write simple definitions for each technical word or phrase. After rehearsing their commercial, have groups present it to the rest of the class. Everyone in the group should have a role in the commercial. With the Class: Set aside time for groups to act out their commercials. When an audience member is confused by a technical term, he or she calls out, “Translation, please!” Everyone in the group should respond with the definition. 57 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ SPECIFICITY Shades of Black What do you think of when you hear or read the word black? Does it matter if the word’s an Do you picture the same color? Find at least two objects in the classroom that are black. How would you describe the similarities and differences between the colors of the two objects? Compare them in the Venn diagram below. _________________________ _________________________ Both Now describe the color of each object without using the adjective black. Object 1 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Object 2 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Repeat this activity for other senses: a salty or sour taste, a soft sound, a rough surface, and a sweet smell. 58 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources adjective describing a black cat or a black coat? All About Sentences ] For me, the big chore is always the same: how to begin a sentence, how to continue it, how to complete it. A sentence can be one word—Go!—or it can be constructed out of layers of phrases and clauses. At the bare minimum, every sentence must consist of a subject and a predicate. It’s up to the writer to decide what other parts of speech to hang on it. This mini-lesson focuses on the following aspects of sentences: • • • • simple, compound, and complex sentences combining sentences varying sentence patterns parallel construction Introduction To begin a mini-lesson on sentences, read aloud the Claude Simon quote at the top of the page. Engage students in a discussion of the quote and whether they can identify with this writer’s dilemma. Then ask them to define what a sentence is and to explain whether all sentences are equal. -/$%, 0!33 !'% Teach HZciZc XZh 8IBU)BQQ The city of Cahokia sits on the about 20,0 banks of 00 people the Miss issippi Rive was as large r. In 1250, empty. Now as the city its populat all that’s of London ion of left of the ’s. 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Turn it into as the first a complex line of a or compou news stor nd sentence y. and use ________ the sentence ________ ________ ____ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ____ ___ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ____ ________ ________ ________ ___ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ ________ ____ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ___ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ _______ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ________ ___ ________ ________ ________ ___ ng Resour ces How do stic Teachi ________ Grab ‘Em!, Grades 6–8 © 2010 by Sarah Glassc ock, Schola ________ +) 59 ________ H:CI:C That Really stic Teachi ng Resour ces ock, Schola Sarah Glassc Bring in an assortment of newspapers—including sensational tabloids, such as the World Weekly News—that feature stories about alien and Bigfoot sightings. You can also access front pages of newspapers on the Internet. Ask students what the purpose of a headline is. Talk about how a headline is similar to and different from a sentence (similar: usually has a subject and predicate, complete thought; different: no punctuation, capitalization, some words left out). After distributing the Read All About It! reproducible on page 64, work with students to rewrite the first headline as the first sentence in a corresponding news story. Activities Apply Grammar Distribute copies of the passage “What Happened to Cahokia?” on page 61 to students. Allow time for them to read it on their own or ask them to follow along as you read it aloud. Use the teaching guide on page 60 to discuss the variety of sentences in the passage. Grammar Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources —Claude Simon Simple, Compound, and Complex Sentences KEY POINTS • A simple sentence has a subject and a predicate and conveys a complete thought: Sami banged the drum. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 1 Although the first three sentences are simple sentences, not every one begins with a subject. Some begin with prepositional phrases. • In a compound sentence, the writer joins two or more independent clauses: Sami banged the drum, and his sister covered her ears. 4 This sentence begins with a dependent clause, set off from the independent clause with a comma, so it’s a complex sentence. • In a complex sentence, the writer joins one or more dependent clauses to an independent clause: When Sami banged the drum, his sister covered her ears because she couldn’t concentrate on her homework. 6 This complex sentence contains a dependent clause if you visited Stonehenge in England. This clause also could have begun the sentence. 8 After 1200 is a prepositional phrase and not a clause; it doesn’t contain a subject and predicate. Combining Sentences Coordinating conjunctions or semicolons are used to combine sentences. KEY POINTS • A writer can use a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon to create compound sentences. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 3 The coordinating conjunction and joins these two sentences (independent clauses). • A comma should not be used to connect independent clauses; a comma splice creates a run-on sentence. (See the exception below.) 5 The semicolon takes the place of a coordinating conjunction in this compound sentence. Ask students which coordinating conjunction they would replace it with. Varying Sentence Patterns A strong piece of writing contains a variety of sentence patterns. KEY POINTS • In sticking to a subject-verb, subject-verb, subject-verb pattern, a writer runs the risk of boring the reader. • Exception: Repeating the same sentence pattern can create a poetic rhythm or suspense or can emphasize a point. For example: The boat rocked on the waves, their white caps washed the deck, my life vest washed out to sea. TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 7 You might be tempted to begin this sentence with but to make it more dramatic: But one circle was never finished—but the sentence is dramatic enough as it is. Parallel Construction All the parts of a compound subject or a compound predicate must be parallel. KEY POINTS • Parallelism helps a reader understand the connection between the parts of a sentence. To play basketball and marching in the band wear me out. (not parallel) Playing basketball and marching in the band wear me out. (parallel) TEACHING WITH THE MODEL PASSAGE 2 80 mounds and several circles of wooden posts are both noun phrases. 9 The verbs in this sentence are parallel. You don’t need to write may have harmed or may have killed because readers understand that may have goes with each verb. 60 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources When a writer adds one or more clauses to a simple sentence, the sentence becomes compound or complex. MODEL PASSAGE Sentences What Happened to Cahokia? The city of Cahokia sits on the banks of the Mississippi River. In 1250, its population of about 20,000 people was as large as the city of London’s. By 1400, the homes of Cahokia were 1 empty. Now all that’s left of the city are 80 mounds and several circles of wooden posts. Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources 2 The largest mound is called Monk’s Mound, and it probably took about 300 years to build. 3 Although the builders had only stone tools, sticks, and their hands, they filled 15,000,000 4 baskets with earth to build the mound. A huge building once sat on top of Monk’s Mound; a 5 leader may have lived there. These people also erected several Woodhenges, circles of wooden poles that were used as calendars. A henge is a large prehistoric earthwork—a place where ancient people dug into the earth or built it up. Usually constructed in the shape of a circle, a henge could be made of stone, wood, or soil. (You’d see slabs of stone set in a circle if you visited Stonehenge in England.) 6 Certain poles in the circle marked the beginning of winter and summer and spring and fall. Each circle had a different numbers of poles, yet all the poles were made of red cedar. One circle was never finished. That gave scientists a clue about what may have happened to Cahokia. 7 7 After 1200, the climate 8 changed. This change may have 9 harmed or killed plants, animals, and other resources like red cedar trees in the area. Other theories about what happened to Cahokia include war, disease, and rebellion by the citizens. Nobody knows what our cities might look like in 1000 years. Maybe historians and scientists will be wondering what happened to the people who used to live in your city. In this passage, you’ll explore the following: • simple, compound, and complex sentences • combining sentences • varying sentence patterns • parallel construction 61 WRITING PROMPTS Sentences $ Teachers: Duplicate these prompts on sturdy paper and then cut them apart. You may also write the prompts on the board or display them onscreen. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date _______________ That Will Be History One Day Write! Some of the events that happened in your lifetime will be historical events to people Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. America that have happened since you’ve been born. When people look back at this time period, what do you think they’ll be talking about? What will they want to know about? Write a description of an event from your point of view to help future historians really understand what happened. With the Rest of the Class: Exchange work with a partner. As you read the work, look for places where sentences could be combined or rewritten as separate sentences. $- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ----------------------------------------------- - - - - - - Name _______________________________________________________________ Date ______________ A Desert Island Survival Kit Write! Imagine you were shipwrecked on a desert island with no electricity or running water. (Maybe you’re on a reality TV show, or maybe your expensive yacht hit a sandbar and sank.) What items would you absolutely, positively have to have with you? Narrow your Wr ite yo ur ful l resp on se on a sepa ra te sh eet of pa per. list to five essential items. Write a paragraph about how those items would help you survive. With the Rest of the Class: Compare your list of items and record them on the board. Trade one of your original items for an item on the board and rewrite your paragraph. As you write, look at the structure of your sentences. Do they all start the same way? If so, vary your sentence patterns. Be sure to read aloud your work to see how the new sentences fit and flow together. 62 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources 50 or 100 years from now. Think about the important events in ACTIVITIES: Sentences That’s Simple! Materials: bells, clackers, or other noisemakers Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources Prepare an overhead or whiteboard with simple, compound, and complex sentences from a variety of sources. Then have students play the following game: A group of three student contestants competes in this game to identify different types of sentences. The teacher, as game-show host, reveals one sentence at a time and asks whether it’s a simple, compound, or complex sentence. Each contestant rings a bell or uses another noisemaker to answer. Whichever contestant is first must identify the sentence and explain why it is simple, compound, or complex. The host keeps score. With the Class: The winner from each group meets and competes in a class-wide contest. The other members of the original groups help the contestants review the elements of simple, compound, and complex sentences. Spin a Conjunction Materials: spinner divided into five sections and labeled with the following coordinating conjunctions: and, or, but, for, yet; pencil, paper clip In this game, one partner thinks of a simple sentence. He or she spins the spinner. The other partner uses the coordinating conjunction the spinner lands on and thinks of a sentence to add to create a compound sentence that makes sense. Pairs take turns and build their compound sentences into a story. To create complex sentences, they can make a spinner that’s divided into at least six sections and labeled with some of the following subordinating conjunctions: when, while, before, after, since, if, although, so, where. One partner thinks of a sentence and spins. The other partner comes up with a dependent clause that begins with the subordinating conjunction and adds the clause to the sentence. With the Class: Have pairs share their stories with the class and then discuss how they created the first sentence and how it set the tone for the story. A Parallel Universe Materials: a variety of age-appropriate graphic novels, paper, colored pencils or markers Display the graphic novels and explain that a graphic novel tells a story with words and illustrations. It’s like a comic book or comic strip but longer. Ask partners to work together to create the idea for a graphic novel about a pair of siblings or friends. They are so close that they complete each other’s sentences—however, one is invisible to everyone but the other main character. (In other words, the characters are working together to create simple sentences with compound subjects or predicates, compound sentences, or complex sentences.) Then have pairs create at least two sample pages for their graphic novel, including words and illustrations. Remind pairs to make sure their compound subjects and predicates are parallel. With the Class: Post sample pages on a bulletin board. Have the writers/illustrators answer any questions about their books. If students get really inspired, encourage them to keep working together on their novel. 63 ACTIVITY Name _____________________________________________________________ Date _________________ SENTENCES Read All About It! How do these headlines grab you? Soda Machines Banned in Local Schools UFO Lands in Grand Canyon Buster Named Top Mixed Breed at Dog Show Route 49 Wiped Out After Heavy Spring Rains Blue Dogs Bite Back to Beat the Panthers in Overtime Choose one headline. Turn it into a complex or compound sentence and use the sentence as the first line of a news story. ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ 64 Grammar Activities That Really Grab 'Em © Sarah Glasscock, Scholastic Teaching Resources White House to Be Painted Sky Blue