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Year 4 English
Learning Objective: We will edit text.
Term 1
Focus Standard:
Year 4 ACELY 1695 Reread and edit for meaning by adding, deleting or moving words or word groups to
improve content and structure .
Embedded
Standard:
Year 4 ACELY 1691 Read different types of texts by combining contextual, semantic, grammatical and
phonic knowledge using text processing strategies for example monitoring meaning, cross checking and
reviewing .
Prerequisite(s):
Special
Instructions:
Year 3 Reread and edit texts for meaning appropriate structure, grammatical choices,
and punctuation.
This is a culminating lesson. It covers many subskills that the students have learned previously.
Vocabulary
Academic:
edit, usually, determine
Content:
text
Support:
migrate, hover, competition, tapered, disaster, imagination, blade, sharper, packages,
disagreement
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EDI Lesson Overview
Learning Objective
Declare the Objective
We will edit text1.
What are we going to learn?
What does text mean?
Text means __________.
Who can give me a sentence using
text?
Activate Prior Knowledge
Which word is correct? Why?
a. wetter
b. weter
c. droped
d. dropped
 Make the Connection
Which two sentences use the correct pronoun? Why?
Students you already know about
misspelled words and pronouns.
Today, you will need to know these
to edit text.
1. Lemana went to the library. She went to the library.
2. Lemana went to the library. It went to the library
Definitions
1
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
Edit text.
anything that is written or said
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Concept Development
Edit means to change written text to correct it.
• Editing is usually1 done to correct errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Edit Text
Capitalization
≡
^
Punctuation
Spelling
Verbs &
Pronouns
Checking for Understanding
Which sentence needs to be edited
for capitalization? Why?
 Titles
 The pronoun I
 Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
 Beginning of a sentence
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
End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions
 High-Frequency Words
 Regular and Irregular
Nouns
 Double Consonants
 Simple verb tense
 Subject-verb agreement
 Pronouns (singular)
The Shopping Trip
Athena
1. My mum and I went to the athena
Make
Supermarket yesterday. 2. She said, “make
Which sentence needs to be edited
for end of sentence punctuation?
Why?
Which sentence needs to be edited
for spelling? Why?
A What is the adress to the school?
sure you remind me to buy bananas and
tomatoes
tomatos”. 3. I always forget, so I made a
note
not. 4. When we came home, my sister
wanted
didn’t
want a banana. 5. We didnot have any.
B Which is your favorite book.
c “Escape from cockatoo Island” is
my favorite book.
In your own words, what does it
mean to edit text? Edit text means
to ______________.
sitting
Sentences
Types
 Compound Sentences
6. The note was still siting on my desk.
Definitions
1
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
Edit text.
most of the time
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Skill Development & Guided Practice
Edit means to change written text to correct it.
• Editing is usually done to correct errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Checking for Understanding
2
3
How did I/you determine the
error?
How did/you correct the error?
Edit text.
Application
1 Read the passage or sentence.
2 Determine1 the error or how to correct it (underline).
3 Correct the error or answer the question. (write)
Edit Text
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
Punctuation

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

End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions
Spelling



High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular Nouns
Double Consonants
Verbs &
Pronouns

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
Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
Capitalization
≡
^
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
Which sentence needs to be edited
for pronouns? Edit it.
leaves
1. Why do leafes turn color in
That’s
autumn. 2. Thats’ a very exciting
there
question. 3. Inside a leaf their are
millions
packages
milions of little package1 of color in
green, yellow and orange.
Write the correct verb. burn burns burned
Jenny ________
the toast yesterday. She
burned
often _________
the toast. I am sure she
burns
burn
will _______
the toast tomorrow.
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
Jimmy and I had a disagreement2. He wanted to play hide and seek,but
______ I wanted to
Which sentence needs to be edited
for the coordinating conjunction?
Edit it.
Which sentence needs to be edited
for contractions? Edit it.
Which sentence does not need to
be corrected? Why?
I’ll
A I’will start to learn how to play the
drums tomorrow.
B The magician pulled four scarves
out of the hat.
It
c The cat was hungry. He needed to
eat.
and
D I was tired, but I went to sleep.
Definitions
1
2
holding box
did not agree
play videogames.
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
Edit text.
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Skill Development & Guided Practice
Edit means to change written text to correct it.
• Editing is usually done to correct errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Checking for Understanding
2
3
How did I/you determine the
error?
How did/you correct the error?
Edit text.
1 Read the passage or sentence.
2 Determine1 the error or how to correct it (underline).
3 Correct the error or answer the question. (write)
Edit Text
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grinning
1. My brother was grining. 2. He won the
award
We
awad. 3. Our father said, “we are all so
begged
proud of you.” 4. I beg my brother to teach
wanted
me how to kick the ball. 5. I want to be a
great
grabbed
grate player too. 6. I grabed the ball.
wasn’t
7. I wasn’ot able to kick it very hard.
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
Punctuation
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End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions
Spelling

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High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular Nouns
Double Consonants
Write the correct verb. migrate2, migrates
Verbs &
Pronouns
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Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
winter. They are looking for food and
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
north again.
Capitalization
≡
^
migrate south for the
Some birds always _______
shelter. During the summer, they will migrate
_____
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
so we decided to read a book instead.
We were not able to play outside, ____
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Year 4 Language 1490
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Application
Which sentence needs to be edited
for capitalization? Edit it.
Which sentence needs to be edited
for subject-verb agreement? Why?
Which sentence needs to be edited
for spelling? Edit it.
Which sentence does not need to be
corrected? Edit it.
wants
A Bindi want to join our musical
group.
clipped
B My nails need to be cliped. They
are too long.
Times
c I really enjoyed reading “Five times
Dizzy”.
D My brother was rubbing his arm
after he was bitten by an ant.
Definitions
1
2
figure out
travel
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Skill Development & Guided Practice (continued)
Close Reading Strategy
1
2
3
4
Determine the purpose for reading.
Determine the ELA concept involved.
Read carefully to locate information that matches the purpose.
Ensure your response matches the purpose.
Read the passage. Amarina wants you to help her edit her paper.
Determine sentences that need to be edited and correct it.
wants
1. Kylee want to play basketball. 2. She is not as tall as all the other
players
player. 3. One day, her teacher asked her why she was sad. 4. Kylee said,
succeed
“I want to be able to succed in basketball.” 5. “You will but only if you
,
practice everyday” her teacher replied.
Sentence #
Correct
X
2
X
Application
Which sentence needs to be edited
for a contraction? Edit it.
Which sentence needs to be edited
for subject-verb agreement? Edit it.
Which sentence needs to be edited
for verb tense? Edit it.
Which sentence does not need to
be corrected? Edit it.
A My dog doesn’t want to eat. It
needs to gain weight.
B I’will go to the dentist tomorrow.
travelled
c They travel yesterday.
flap
D The birds flaps their wings.
X
4
X
5
X
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Year 4 Language 1490
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1 How did I/you determine the
purpose for reading?
2 How did I/you determine the ELA
concept involved?
3 How did I/you locate information
that matches the purpose?
4 How did I/you ensure my/your
response matched the purpose?
I’ll
1
3
Not Correct
Checking for Understanding
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Relevance
Edit means to change written text to correct it.
• Editing is usually done to correct errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling,
verbs and pronouns, and sentence types.
1
Editing text will help correct your own papers.
1. Mrs. weaver is my favorite teacher. 2. She is always telling us to read
more. 3. She teach us how to spell and how to do math.
2
Editing text will help you do well on tests.
Sample Test Question
25. Which sentence(s) need to be edited in the passage above.
A Edit sentence one. Yes
B Edit sentence two.
No
Yes No
C Edit sentence three. Yes No
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Checking for Understanding
Does anyone else have another
reason why it is relevant edit text?
(Pair-Share) Why is it relevant to edit
text? You may give one of my
reasons or one of your own. Which
reason is more relevant to you?
Why?
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Skill Closure
Remember the Concept
Edit text.
1 Read the passage or sentence.
2 Determine1 the error or how to correct it (underline).
3 Correct the error or answer the question. (write)
kidnapped
my
1. I thought that my dog had been kidnaped. 2. “You have too much imagination,” My mother exclaimed.
barked
That’s
3. In the distance, I heard a dog bark. 4. “That’is my dog,” I said jumping with joy.
Application
Edit means to change written text to
correct it.
•
Editing is usually done to
correct errors in capitalization,
punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Edit Text
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence

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

End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions



High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular
Nouns
Double Consonants
Verbs &
Pronouns



Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
Capitalization
Which sentences need to be edited for verb tense? Write the correct verb.
start
A We will started training the dog tomorrow.
started
B She start training the dog yesterday. ______________
C We started training the dog this morning.
Punctuation
Spelling
Extended Thinking
James says that the sentences do not to be edited because it is correct. Do you agree
or disagree. If disagree, edit the sentences.
reads
My dad read news from around the world. The other day he read a very interesting article about
deer
I disagree with James because both sentences
deers eating the grass in the park.
needed to be edited.
Summary Closure
What did you learn today about editing text? (Pair-Share) Use words from the
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Word Bank
edit, text, capitalization,
punctuation, spelling, verbs,
pronouns, sentence types
word bank.
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
Edit text.
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Independent Practice
Edit means to change written text to correct it.
• Editing is usually done to correct errors in capitalization, punctuation, spelling,
verbs and pronouns, and sentence types.
Checking for Understanding
2
3
How did I/you determine the
error?
How did/you correct the error?
Edit text.
1 Read the passage or sentence.
2 Determine1 the error or how to correct it (underline).
3 Correct the error or answer the question. (write)
Edit Text
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
Punctuation

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

End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions
Spelling



High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular Nouns
Double Consonants



Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)

Compound Sentences
Capitalization
≡
^
Verbs &
Pronouns
Sentences
Types
Application
Which sentence needs to be edited
for spelling? Edit it.
shelves
1. The shelfs in our classroom were
offered
dusty. 2. My friend and I ofered to help our
I’m
teacher. 3. “I’am so thankful,” exclaimed our
started
teacher. 4. So we start to clean and clean.
That’s
5. In the afternoon she said, “that’s
Which sentence needs to be edited
for the coordinating conjunction?
Edit it.
enough.” 6. She gave us a delicious cookie.
A The city of perth is very large.
Write the correct verb.
B She was too tired to play with us
today.
will need, needs, needed
needed
The grass ______
needs water. It __________
will need
water yesterday. Next week, it ______
to be watered again.
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
Which sentence needs to be edited
for capitalization? Edit it.
Which sentence does not need to
be corrected? Why?
Perth
enough
c I did not have enoug time to finish
my chores.
D The trees
are growing green
and
leaves, so the trees are also
flowering.
Definitions
1
I went to the library to borrow a book. It was hard to decide which book to read. I wanted to
but I too a book of poems instead.
read an action book, _______
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
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Periodic Review 1
Remember the Concept
Edit text if necessary.
feathers
flap
1. Hummingbirds are small birds with colorful featheres. 2. They flaps their wings so
humming
fast that they make a huming noise. 3.Hummingbirds fly right, left, up, down, backwards,
upside
flapping
They
and even upsid down. 4. they are also able to hover1 by flaping their wings.
Edit means to change written text to
correct it.
•
Editing is usually done to
correct errors in capitalization,
punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Edit Text
Write the correct verb. finish, will finish, finishes, finished
finish
finished
We ______________
first in the competition2 last year. Most years, we ____________
will finish
first. We ____________
first again tomorrow.
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
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End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions



High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular
Nouns
Double Consonants
Verbs &
Pronouns



Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
Capitalization
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
The hummingbirds eat the nectar of long flowers, so
____ they have a long, tapered3 bill.
Which sentences need the coordinating conjunction – and or but
1
and
I like apples, _____
I like bananas too.
2
but
I like apples, _____
my sister does not like them.
3
and I like to read too.
My best friend likes to read, _____
4
but
The cake was delicious, _______
the juice was too sweet.
5
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Punctuation
Spelling
Extended Thinking
and my sister doesn’t like them also.
I do not like carrots, ____
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Definitions
stay in one place
try to win something
3 slender at the tip
1
2
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Periodic Review 2
Remember the Concept
Edit text if necessary.
sunny
decided
1. It was a great suny day. 2. We decide to go to the lake. 3. We were having so much
swimming
started
Ouch
fun swiming when my friend said, “ouch, I just got bitten by a shark.” 4. I start to laugh
because there are no sharks in the lake. 5. Sharks are mainly ocean dwellers,“I explained.”
Then
6. My friend then said, “then it must have been a big whale.” 7. That’s imagination1!
Edit means to change written text to
correct it.
•
Editing is usually done to
correct errors in capitalization,
punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Edit Text
Write the correct verb. flap, flapped, will flap
flapped
I saw two hummingbirds ___________
their wings yesterday. Hummingbirds always
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
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End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions

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
High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular
Nouns
Double Consonants
Verbs &
Pronouns



Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
Capitalization
flap
will flap
_______
their wings. They __________
their wings forever.
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
Punctuation
so
My zipper broke, ________
I had to change my clothes.
Extended Thinking
Spelling
Edit the following paragraph when need it. Underline and correct the error.
couldn’t
1. I got up this morning, and I could’not find my new shoes. 2. I had
wanted
to wear my old ones. 3. I want to drink juice, but my brother had
spilled
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Make
drank it all. 4. I spill water and my mother said, “make sure you mop
Definitions
late
the floor.” 5. I went to school, and I was lat. 6. What other disaster2
1 having
2
many ideas
accident
?
would be next.
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Year 4 Language 1490
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Periodic Review 3
Edit text if necessary.
Scissors
smaller
1. Scisors and shears are used for cutting. 2. Scissors are smaler and shears are
larger. 3. Do you know how many types of scissors there are?, 4. There are children's
There
need
hair
scissors which needs a dull blade1 to ensure safety. 5. there are scissors to cut har that
shrubs
need to be sharper2. 6. Sheers which are used to cut shrub need a more sharper blade.
Remember the Concept
Edit means to change written text to
correct it.
•
Editing is usually done to
correct errors in capitalization,
punctuation, spelling, verbs and
pronouns, and sentence types.
Edit Text
Write the correct verb. used, use, will use
will use
to make paper flowers. Next week, ___________
scissors to make a paper airplane.
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End of sentence (. ? !)
Comma placement
Quotation marks
Contractions

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High-Frequency Words
Regular and Irregular
Nouns
Double Consonants
Verbs &
Pronouns



Simple verb tense
Subject-verb agreement
Pronouns (singular)
Sentences
Types

Compound Sentences
Capitalization
Write the correct coordinating conjunction. and, but, or, so
but
Using scissors is a lot of fun, __________
we need to be careful.
Extended Thinking
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Titles
The pronoun I
Proper nouns (names of
people and places)
Beginning of a sentence
use
used
At school, we ___________
scissors every day. Last week, we ____________
scissors
Punctuation
Spelling
You just learned how to edit. It is your turn to edit one of your papers.
Definitions
1 flat
2
Australian Curriculum English
Year 4 Language 1490
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cutting part of the scissors
able to cut
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Spelling
Regular Nouns (Year 3)
Rules
1. Most regular plural nouns are made by
adding an -s to the end of the word.
2. For nouns that end with an -s, -ch, -sh, or -x,
an -es is added to the end of the word.
Irregular plural nouns (Year 3)
Spelling Pattern
Singular
man
-an to -en
woman
-f to -ves
half
-fe to -ves
life
No change
fish; deer
Plural
men
women
halves
lives
Singular noun
Plural noun
club
clubs
peach
fox
peaches
foxes
Example
one man
two men
one woman three women
one half
two halves
one life
two lives
fish; deer
Double Consonants (Year 4)
Rules
Example
Double the final consonant when adding an ending, IF :
The ending begins with a vowel, AND
The word ends with a Consonant-VowelConsonant (CVC) pattern, AND
The word is one syllable or the last syllable
is stressed.
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Year 4 Language 1490
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ing
admit
Exceptions:
Words that end in
w, x, y, or z do not
double the final
consonant.
Words that end in
l, do double.
admitting
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Grammar
Correct Punctuation (Grade 2)
Editing Checklist
Identify and Use Pronouns (Grade 2)
Singular
Pronoun
I
you
Singular
Pronoun
he
she
it
I walk to the store.
You hold the pencil.
James ran home.
Sentence with a Singular
Pronoun
He ran home.
Alexis works hard.
The book is on the table.
She works hard
It is on the table
Apostrophes hold
the place where
letters have been
erased!
has not
there is
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hasn’t
there’s
All sentences begin
with a capital
letter.
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Names and proper
nouns are
capitalized.
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All sentences end
with correct ending
punctuation.
Sentence
Sentence with a Noun
Contractions (Grade 3)
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Compound Sentences (Grade 3)
Coordinating
Conjunction
and
but
or
so
Relationship
addition
difference
contrast
choice
result
Direct Speech (Grade 4)
Rules for Quotation Marks
Marty said, “I’m hungry.”
“I’m hungry,” he said.
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Grammar
Simple Tease Verbs (Grade 3)
Verb Tense
Present
tense shows
that action
happens
now.
How to form the verb: verb
I, we, you, they,
I jump
jump
the dogs
the dogs jump
How to form the verb: verb + s
he, she, it, the dog
Verb Tense
she jumps
the dog jumps
How to form the verb: verb + ed
Past tense
shows that
action
already
happened
in the past.
I, you, he, she, it,
the dog, we, they,
jumped
the dogs
Verb Tense
Future
tense
shows that
action will
happen in
the future.
jumps
you jumped
they jumped
How to form the verb: will + verb
I, you, he, she, it, the
dog, we, they, the
dogs
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Year 4 Language 1490
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will jump
it will jump
we will jump
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