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Peer Reviewer:____________________
Writer:____________________
Paragraph 1: Narrative paragraph - Peer Evaluation
(PLEASE NOTE I HAVE SIMPLIFIED THIS TO THE FORM I SHOWED YOU IN CLASS ON WEDNESDAY)
1. Is the paragraph interesting?
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Write a comment about a part that is especially interesting to you.
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2. Do you understand everything?
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Circle or underline any part that you do not understand, and write a comment about it.
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3. Copy the topic sentence here, and circle the topic and underline the controlling idea.
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4. How many supporting sentences are there in the paragraph?
Is there at least one example for every supporting point?
5. Would you like more information about anything?
number _______
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___no
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If your answer is yes, write down what you would like to know more about.
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6.
Do all of the sentences belong in the paragraph? If you feel there is a sentence that does not
belong, write it down here and make a note of why it doesn't belong.
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7. Is the paragraph unified, in other words are transition signals used to create the flow of the
paragraph and link all the supporting details and examples? Write down the transition signals
which have been used.
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8. In your opinion, what is the best feature of this paragraph? In other words, what is this writer's
best writing skill. Furthermore, what weakness does the write have?
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