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Everything You Wanted to Know About English and Literary Terms, But Were Afraid To Ask By: James L. Smith 1 English Survival Notes TYPES OF SENTENCES I. A. Sentence - a group of words that expresses a complete thought. All sentences start with a capital letter. A sentence must have a subject and a verb (predicate). B . Declarative Sentence- a sentence that makes a statement. It ends with a period. EXAMPLE: I bought a new car for my birthday. C. Interrogative Sentence - a sentence that asks a question. It always ends with a question mark. EXAMPLE: What are you going to give me for my birthday? D. Imperative Sentence - a sentence that gives a command or makes a request. It ends with a period. (YOU) is always the subject of an imperative sentencel EXAMPLE: Please put up the book. (Subject = You) E. Exclamatory Sentence - a sentence that shows excitement or strong feeling. It ends with an exclamation mark. (!) Exclamatory sentences can also be imperative sentences EXAMPLE: Stop talking now! (You) is the understood subject. This is a command, therefore making it an imperative sentence. 2 PARTS OF SPEECH II. Preposition - a preposition is usually followed by a noun or pronoun. This noun or pronoun is called the object of the preposition. The preposition, its object, and the object's modifiers make up a prepositional phrase. MOST COMMONLY USED PREPOSITIONS aboard against along beneath by despite excepting for inside like over since underneath without at down off under beside in through with with between into throughout from since upon upon of toward but onto out concerning except outside past regarding round in past up unlike after about before during on to within off around until underneath across below as throughout till near under above behind except toward within among beyond Some Compound Prepositions according to in addition to next to aside from in place of on account of because of in spite of out of on top of out of except for along with apart from in addition to in back of as for in case of in front of in spite of instead of up to by means of 3 III. NOUNS A. Concrete Nouns - take up space in the physical world. Ex. boy car city B. Abstract Nouns - are ideas, emotions, qualities, or actions, Ex. freedom joy beauty running C. Collective Nouns - stand for a group of things Ex. flock family committee D. Compound Nouns - are made up of two or more words Ex. cupcake jack-o-lantern IV. VERBS - tell what the subject does, is, has or feels. A. Main verb- last verb in the verb phrase. Must be an ACTION verb or LINKING verb. 1. The simple predicate (VERB) is made up of at least one verb; a word that shows action or state of being. B. Compound verb - when a sentence has two or more main verbs (action or linking) joined by the connecting word and or or, or but. Ex. Insects live and thrive everywhere ion the planet. C. MAIN VERB - last verb in a verb phrase. Must be an ACTION verb or LINKING verb ***THERE ARE THREE (3) TYPES OF VERBS 1. helping verb, 2. Linking verb 4 3. Action verb D. Helping Verb - must come before the main verb Ex. Tom must have gone to the library. E. *LINKING VERBS am is are was were be being been *look *sound *feel *smell *taste *may also be used as action verbs HELPING VERBS do does did Examples of sit stand play have has had may might must should would could Common Action Verbs run hit throw jump jog hop take *grow *remain/stay *feel *become *seem (to be verbs) is am are was were be being been shall will can sat yell walk talk F. Verb Phrases A verb phrase may be composed of one word or two or more verbs placed as a group. This group is called a verb phrase 5 Verb phrases always consist of a helping verb and a main verb VERB PHRASE = HELPING VERB(S) + MAIN VERB can play = can + play has been taken = has + taken should have left = should have + left G. VERB TENSES Present fly, flies go, goes Past Future flew will fly went will go Present Perfect has/have flown has/have gone Past Perfect had flown had gone Future Perfect will have flown will have gone Helping verbs can be used alone as a verb in some cases. Example: I am here (used as a verb) I am going to a cookout. ( am used as a helping verb) Helping verbs can also be used as main verbs. Helping verbs work with main verbs to help you understand what action is taking place. **Note, most ing verbs have a helping verb with them. Sometimes a sentence can have up to three (3) helping verbs plus a main verb. Example: Joseph had been in a play (been is used as a main verb) Her friend has been crying. (has been is used as a helping verb) The dog must have been chasing me. (must have been = helping verbs + chasing = main verb) 6 In declarative (statement) sentences, the verb phrase is usually together. Example: The box had been sent in the mail. FINDING SUBJECTS AND VERBS IN SENTENCES V. SUBJECTS AND VERBS Subject - answers the question whom or what the sentence is about. A. The Complete Subject - all the words in the subject make up the complete subject. B. Subjects in Interrogative Sentences - You can find the subject in an interrogative sentence by rearranging the question into a statement. Then ask who or what the sentence is about. EXAMPLE: Will you answer the door? REARRANGE THE SENTENCE TO SAY: “You will answer the door.” C. Subjects in Imperative Sentences - in imperative sentences, the subject is always word you. Write you in parenthesis (you) to indicate that the subject is the understood word (you). D. Compound Subject - when a sentence has two or more subjects, joined by the connecting word and, or or the subject is called a compound subject. 7 Ex. People, animals, and plants must share the earth. Natural Order - The verb follows the subject in the sentence. Ex. The desert will bloom in the spring. Inverted order - The subject follows the verb in the sentence. Ex. Have you had dinner yet? There was a long line at the theater. Across the highway scampered a frightened rabbit. Understood Subject - a verb usually begins a command or request. The subject is not expressed in the sentence instead it is understood to be you. This is written as (you). Ex. Do not lose, your study sheet. (you) VI. Conjunctions - words that join or link elements in sentences. and but for nor so yet - join words, phrases, or clauses that are grammatically equal in rank. Either/or, neither/nor, both/and, not only/but also, and whether/or VII. Conjunctions - a word that joins words or groups of words. A. The words and, but, for, nor, or so, are coordinating conjunctions. Use and to add information, or to give a choice, and but to show contrast. 8 EXAMPLE: Beans and rice movies or television sad but true Egypt, Italy and Spain VIII. Sentence Fragment - a sentence that is missing a subject, predicate, or both. EXAMPLE: Beside the desk (what was beside the desk? There is no subject and no helping verb. Susan, while running to school (did what? There is no verb.) IX. Run-on Sentence - two or more sentences that are run together into one sentence. EXAMPLE: Joe ran into the classroom he dropped his books he asked Ron to help him pick them up. X. Complex Sentence - is made up of two simple sentences joined by a subordinating conjunction. Always place a comma in front of a subordinating conjunction. THE FOLLOWING WORDS ARE SAMPLES OF SUBORDINATING CONJUNCTIONS. after because unless whenever since when it as although until before while EXAMPLE: Dolphins are easy to train, since they are very smart. XI. Adjectives - are used to DESCRIBE NOUNS. You'll usually find them in front of a noun or following a linking verb. Adjectives tell which one, what kind, or how many. 9 *WHICH ONE: WHAT KIND: HOW MANY: this car blond hair two birds that dog large box many birds There are two general types of adjectives: DESCRIPTIVE adjectives and LIMITING adjectives. A. Descriptive Adjectives – are describing words. They often tell what kind. Examples: pumpkin pie What kind of pie? Pumpkin pie Soft, velvet dress What kind of dress? Soft, velvet dress Red sponge ball What kind of ball? Red sponge ball B. Limiting adjectives include determiners. Determiners are actually called determining adjectives. These mut be memorized and learned. 1. Determining adjectives: a. Articles: a, an, the b. Demonstratives: this, that, those, these c. Numbers: twenty-five days , third base d. Possessive pronouns (used as adjectives): my, his, her, its, your, our, their e. Possessive nouns (used as adjectives): Nikki’s cow, teachers’ meeting f. Indefinites: many, some, few, several, no any… 10 2. In order to be a determining adjective, a noun must follow it. A determining (also called limiting) adjective modifies a noun. Modifies means goes over to. Examples: Several laser printers were purchased. Several is an adjective because it modifies or goes over to printers. (Several what? Several printers. She had been hired as an architect. An is an adjective because it modifies or goes over to architect. (a/an what? An architect) XII. Adverbs - are used to describe verb s, sometimes other adverbs, and even adjectives. Often end in -ly and may be anywhere in the sentence. Adverbs tell how, where, when, how often, to what degree. HOW: WHERE: WHEN: HOW OFTEN: TO WHAT DEGREE: quickly well outside nearby soon now never often very almost XIII. Interjections - words that express a burst of emotion that are not grammatically related to other elements in a sentence. Ex. Wow! Gosh! Hey! Stop that! XIV. Direct Object- noun or pronoun that follows an ACTION VERB. A direct object tells who or what receives the ACTION of the verb. 11 To 1. 2. 3. find the direct object: find the subject find the verb ASK THE MAGIC QUESTION BY READING FROM THE BEGINNING OF THE SENTENCE TO THE VERB AND SAYING WHO OR WHAT. Ex. Everyone should eat a good breakfast. BREAKFAST IS THE DIRECT OBJECT. XV. Indirect Object - tells to whom or for whom the action is done. The indirect object MUST be BETWEEN the ACTION VERB and the DIRECT OBJECT. TO FIND THE INDIRECT OBJECT FIRST: Ex. The catcher gave the pitcher a signal for a fast ball. 1. 2. 3. Find the subject - catcher Find the verb - gave Find the direct object . Note - You must have a direct object. (signal) 4. Ask the magic question by reading the subject, verb, and direct object and adding to whom/what or for whom/what. The catcher gave a signal to whom? (pitcher) XVI. Subject Complement - Noun/pronoun/adjective that follows a LINKING VERB and identifies or describes the subject. 12 A. NOUNS and PRONOUNS are called PREDICATE NOUNS and pronouns. Adjectives are called PREDICATE ADJECTIVES. TO FIND A SUBJECT COMPLEMENT: That walnut desk is an antique. 1. Find the linking verb (is) 2. Find the subject (desk) 3. Ask the magic question by reading from the beginning of the sentence to the verb and saying who or what (That walnut desk is what? (antique) XVII. Quotation Marks SAMPLE SENTENCES USING QUOTATION MARKS "We go sledding during winter, : said Sue. "When does the movie begin?" asked Bob. "Help!" screamed the mountain climber. Mom complained, "Your music is too loud." She yelled, "Turn it down!" Next she asked, "What did I tell you?" "Who knows the answer?" the teacher asked. "Raise your hand." "Why," demanded the teacher, "is no one prepared for the test?" "We'll never finish on time," said Bob. "We're already an hour behind." 13 DIALOGUE: HOW TO WRITE IT Enclose the exact words being said with the quotation marks. EXAMPLE: Jerry said, “I want to go home now.” “I want to go home now,” Jerry said, “because it’s getting late.” “I want to go home.” Jerry stood up. “It’s getting late.” **DO NOT capitalize the second part of a quoted sentence, as shown here. EXAMPLE: “I wish I could go,” Tiffany said, “but I have to do my homework.” Start a new paragraph each time a different speaker begins. Conclude the actual words of a speaker with a comma, question mark, or exclamation point placed before the concluding quotation mark. If it is the end of the sentence add punctuation and then close quotes. EXAMPLE: Tom asked, “May Jim and I go to the mall?” “Have you cleaned your room yet?” asked Mom. “No,” answered Jim. Mom replied, “Room first, and then the mall.” “Alright,” grumbled Tom. 14 XVIII. HOW TO USE COMMAS Rule 1 Use a comma to set off a noun of direct address. (a person spoken to) Ex. Louise, come here, please. Have you gone, Michael? I want to go, Roy, with your group. Rule 2 Use a comma to set off introductory words. Ex. No, I haven’t seen it. Well, I’ve changed my mind. Yes, the chimes are new. Rule 3 Use a comma to set off interrupters in a sentence. Ex. The answer, I think, is fifty-four. This Calendar, in fact, is an old one. However, not all is lost. These swings, by the way, need to be repaired. Rule 4 Use a comma after the greeting of a friendly letter. Ex. Dear Karla, My dearest friend, Rule 5 Use a comma after the closing of any letter. Ex. Sincerely yours, Love, Use a comma to set off words or phrases in a series. EX. Furniture, linens, toys,and dishes were sold there. We ran a mile, swam a half mile, and biked a mile. You may go to the zoo, to the park, or to the carnival. Rule 6 15 Rule 7 Rule 8 Use a comma to clarify (make clear) a sentence. Ex. In the night time was extremely important. In the night, time was extremely important. Use a comma between two or more descriptive adjectives. Ex. Bright, sparkling stars twinkled in the dark night. Do not place a comma between the last adjective and the noun or pronoun. Note: if one adjective is a color or a limiting adjective, no comma is placed between the two adjectives. Ex. A white fluffy puppy ran by. Rule 9 Use a comma to set off an appositive from the rest of the sentence. Ex. Ms. Wilson, the bank president, spoke about loans. The best student is Gregg, the boy in the last row. We invited Tracy, our best friend, Rule 10 Use a comma between a city and state or country. Ex. Miami, Florida London, England Use a comma to separate the parts of an address. Ex. Bill lives at 567 West Lowe Drive, Tulsa, Oklahoma. CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 16 If the city and state or country appears in a sentence, also place a comma after the state or country. Ex. Have you been to Richmond, Virginia, in the fall? Dallas, Texas, is a growing city. I moved from 23 Dray lane, Las Vegas, Nevada, last fall. Rule 11 Rule 12 Use a comma after a month and year or day and year in a date. Ex. February, 1980 Jan. 1, 1990 Use a comma after the day of the week if the day appears with the date. Ex. Monday, August 3 Friday, Nov.7, 1999 If the month and year, or day and year, appear in a sentence, also place a comma after the year. Ex. On June 22, 1898, her grandparents were married. Use a comma at the end of most direct quotations. Ex. “Your book is falling,” said Millie. “I know,” replied Harrison. If the person who is making the statement is given first, place a comma after the person’s name + verb that follows it. Ex. Mr. Kimble said, “Let’s begin.” Mary asked, “Where are we?” CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 17 Rule 13 If the quotation is split, place a comma after the first part of the quotation and also after the person + verb (or verb + person): Ex. “I agree,” replied Mark, “that this rocket is ready.” se a comma to set off a title following a name. Ex. Gloria Kole, D.D.S., is opening a new office. Linn Smith, R.N., works at Summerlin Hospital. Rule 14 Use a comma to invert a name. Ex. Smith, Jim Moore, Clay His name appeared alphabetically as Green, Bill. Rule 15 Use a comma after a dependent clause at the beginning of a sentence.* Ex. After we ate lunch, we went to a movie. (Dependent clause) (Independent clause) If I could ge there, I would be delighted. (dependent clause) (Independent clause) If the dependent clause is at the end of a sentence, no comma is needed. Ex. We went to a movie after we ate lunch. I would be delighted if I could be there. Rule 16 Use a comma before the conjunction that joins two independent clauses (compound sentence). Ex. Our outing was fun, but we were glad to return. (Independent clause) (Independent clause) 18 Rule 17 Use a comma after two introductory prepositional phrases or after a long prepositional phrase when a subject follows it. Ex. In the middle of the night, Frank boarded a plane for Japan. During the long intermission, everyone chatted. XVIX. Colons and Semicolons Semicolon Rule: Use a semicolon to join two independent clauses in a sentence that are closely related. Do not place and, but, or or after a semicolon. First, I washed the dishes and swept the kitchen; then I went to the store. This scarf is pretty; I might buy it for my sister. Colon Rule: 1. Use a colon after the greeting of a business letter. Ex. Gentlemen: Dear Sir: 2. Use a colon in writing the time. Ex. 9:00 A.M. 11:23 P.M. 3. Use a colon to set off lists. Ex. Groceries: milk, bread, cookies The following people must attend the meeting: Susan, Bill, Mary, Jane, Tom. 4. Use a colon between the chapter and verse(s) in the Bible. Ex. John 3:16 Genesis 7:1-11 CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 19 5. Use a colon after divisions or topics in writing. Ex. Commas: Rule 1: Rule 2: Colons & Semicolons XX. APPOSITIVES Mrs. Farmer is my English teacher. She is in room 720. Appositive: Mrs. Farmer, my English teacher, is in room 720. Kerri is my older sister. She left immediately. Appositive: Kerri, my older sister, left immediately. Or My older sister, Kerri, left immediately. XXI. PRONOUNS A. Demonstrative Pronouns this, that, these, those B. Interrogative Pronouns Who..? Whom..? Whose..? Which..? What…? C. Reflexive Pronouns myself yourself himself, herself, itself ourselves yourselves themselves CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 20 D. Personal Pronouns First Person (person speaking) Singular I, me, my, mine Plural we, our, ours, us Second Person (person spoken to) you, your, yours, you, yours, Third Person (some other person Or thing) he, his, him, she, her, hers it, its they, their, theirs, them E. Relative Pronouns Who , whom, whose, which, that F. Indefinite Pronouns all each another either any everybody anyone everything anything flew both many more most much nobody none no one one other several somebody someone XXII. PHRASES AND CLAUSES A phrase will NOT contain a subject and a verb. A clause WILL contain both. Ex. Phrases: Sitting in the corner by the desk In the corner by the desk 21 Clauses: Because he was sitting in the corner He was sitting in the corner XXIII. SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX SENTENCES A. Simple sentences: Ex. Cats and dogs make good pets. Julie rides a unicycle around town. Joey washed the dishes and then dried them. B. Compound Sentences: Ex. The wind grew fierce, and several trees fell. He grilled hamburgers; she tossed a salad. Whales must breathe air, or they will drown. C. Complex Sentences: Ex. Amy blushed, after she read the letter. Because she feared for the safety, she decided to call her parents. Australia has summer when we have winter. XXIV. ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VOICE Active Voice Passive Voice The manager hired us. We were hired by the manager. Mark Twain wrote Tom Sawyer. Tom Sawyer was written by mark Twain. XXV. CAPITALIZATION RULES RULE 1: Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a sentence. Example: The chicken was baked in an oven. 22 RULE 2: Capitalize the pronoun I. Example: Should I call you later? RULE 3: Capitalize the first letter of the first word in most lines of poetry. Example: She always thought a gallant prince would love her Forsaking life itself to please only her RULE 4: Capitalize the first word, the last word, and all important words in any title. Do not capitalize a, an, and, but, or, nor, or prepositions of four or less letters unless they are the first or last word of a title. (Memorize this entire rule!) Examples: "Silence of the Songbirds" "Missiles to Earth from a Crater on Mars" **Be sure to capitalize all verbs in titles. Example: "You Are My Sunshine" Be sure to capitalize prepositions of five or more letters in titles. Example: The Man Without a Country RULE 5: Capitalize people's names and their Initial(s). Examples: Sharon Mrs. Mary T. Barkley RULE 6: Capitalize days, months, holidays, and special days. Examples: Tuesday Thanksgiving July Arbor Day Hanukkah St. Patrick's Day Christmas Eve Sunday 23 RULE 7: Capitalize Mother, Dad, and. other titles If you can Insert the person's name. Example: Has Dad gone to the store? (If Mike is the father's name: Has Mike gone to the store?) You can replace Dad with a name; therefore, you capitalize Dad. My mom is nice. (If Amy is the mother's name: My Amy is nice.) This doesn't make sense; therefore, you do not capitalize mom. Capitalize the title If It appears with a name. Examples: Uncle Duane Aunt Fran Grandma Wilson Lieutenant Jackson RULE 8: Capitalize names of organizations. Examples: Future Homemakers of America American Red Cross Organization of American States RULE 9: Capitalize the names of Institutions. Examples: Morton School Samaritan Hospital York College Maricopa County Jail Rogich Middle School Clark County Jail University Of Nevada Las Vegas 24 RULE 10: Capitalize business names. Examples: Cross Company Sock Store, Inc. Ameriola Airlines Old Navy Tillies The Gap Hot Topic Murray Hotel Beamer Grocery Posada. Restaurant RULE 11: Capitalize the names of structures. Examples: Washington Tunnel Leaning Tower of Pisa London Bridge Cumberland Expressway RULE 12: Capitalize the names of specific geographic places. Examples: Indian Ocean North America Baltic Sea England Missouri River Maryland Skunk Creek Fulton County Fox Hill Memphis Mt. Rushmore Midwest Mammoth Cave Dristol Park Cape Cod Roanoke Island Gulf of Mexico Pocono Mountains CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 25 RULE 13: Capitalize the names of historical events and historical documents (papers). Examples: American Revolution Declaration of Independence Battle of Shiloh U.S. Constitution RULE 14: Capitalize the names of languages. Examples: English Chinese Spanish French RULE 15: Capitalize the Roman numerals and the letters of the first major topics In an outline. Examples: I. A. B. II. A. B. C. Capitalize only the first word in an outline unless the words are a proper noun. Examples: I. Oceans and seas A. Major oceans B. Major seas II. Land forms 26 A. B. Western hemisphere continents 1. North America (proper noun) 2. South America (proper noun) Eastern hemisphere continents. RULE 16: Capitalize the first word of a direct quotation. Examples: Harley asked, "How old is your brother?' "He is five," said Jodi. ***Note: Do not capitalize the word following the quotation unless It Is a proper noun. Example: "He looks older," said Harley. RULE 17: Capitalize brand names but not the products. Examples: Ford van Sony computer disc Lucerne ice cream Bar S hot dogs RULE 18: Capitalize religions, religious documents, names of churches, and names for a supreme being. Examples: Christian (religion) Ten Commandments (document) Moslem (religion) Bible Heavenly Father Palmcroft Baptist Church God Talmud (writings of the Jewish religion) 27 Note: Capitalize a religious denomination such as Methodist or Baptist. If the name of a specific church is not given, capitalize only the denomination. Example: a Baptist church (The name of a church is not given.) Do not capitalize the terms, gods and goddesses. RULE 19: Capitalize a proper adjective but not the noun it modifies. Examples: a California beach a Memorial Day parade a Payson music festival an African nation RULE 20: Capitalize the first word of a greeting and closing of a letter. Examples: My dearest friend, Sincerely yours, RULE 21: Capitalize directions when they refer to a region of a country or the world. Examples: Georgia is in the South. (region of the U.S.) He lives in China which is also called the East. (region of the world) DO NOT CAPITALIZE RULE 1: Do not capitalize the seasons of the year. spring summer autumn fall winter RULE 2: Do not capitalize school subjects unless they have a number or name a language. 28 Examples: We like science, spelling, social studies, geography, and history. Patrick studies Algebra II, Spanish, and Biology204 in high school. If a proper adjective appears with the subject capitalize only the proper adjective. Example: American history Greek literature RULE 3: Do not capitalize north, south, east, west, northeast, northwest, southeast, or southwest when they are directions. Example: Go north on Ludlow Street. Do not capitalize regions of a state, county, or city. Example: Are you moving to southern Texas? Sissy lives in northeastern Anaheim. RULE 4: Do not capitalize career choices. Example: Their dad is a teacher. Hannah wants to be a computer programmer. RULE 5: Do not capitalize foods. Example: fudge milk apples lettuce beef lemonade tacos cookies If a proper adjective appears with the food capitalize the proper adjective but not the food. Example: Swiss cheese German pancakes CONTINUED NEXT PAGE 29 RULE 6: Do not capitalize diseases. Example: measles cancer mumps flu polio hepatitis chicken pox arthritis XXVI. HOW TO WRITE A PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH FORMULA – Use this for format writing. If you follow the formula correctly, you will never fail. Sentence #1 – TS (Topic Sentence) Sentence #2 – CD (Concrete Detail) (For example,……..) Sentence #3 – CM (Commentary) Sentence #4 – CM (Commentary) Sentence #5 – CD (A New Concrete Detail) (In addition,……….) Sentence #6 – CM (Commentary) Sentence #7 – CM (Commentary) Sentence #8 – CD (A New Concrete Detail) (Finally,…………………) Sentence #9 – CM (Commentry) Sentence #10 – CM (Commentary) Sentence # 11 - CS (Concluding Sentence) (The concluding sentence RESTATES the topic sentence BUT is said/written in a little different way.) *********************************************************** (CD) (Concrete Detail) sentences CAN/SHOULD begin with these words called TRANSITION WORDS: *********************************************************** SEE NEXT PAGE 30 Examples of Transition words (Transition words are always followed by a comma (,) whenever they begin a sentence) TRANSITION WORDS TO MAKE A POINT: First one is Specifically Second another is By the way Third the other is However Besides for instance in other words Then moreover to explain Also furthermore to describe Next above all in the first place Secondly in addition to Yet For example to begin with Similarly as a matter of fact meanwhile on the other hand Afterward in the meantime Nevertheless Consequently better yet Otherwise TRANSITON WORDS TO TERMINATE: in conclusion to sum up to conclude as a result as one can see ini short Finally Insummary for these reasons i conclude that *********************************************************** **If you get stuck on a commentary (CM) sentence, start with “This shows that….” Or, “Being able to….”. Organizational Chart – TAP And Count (Always complete an organizational chart before attempting to write your paper. This will aide you with keeping a focus and following a logical sequence.) 31 32 33 34 35 Single Paragraph – Skeleton Chart I want to write about _____________________________________________________ #1 (TS) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #2 (CD) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #3 (CM) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #4 (CM) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #5 (CD) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #6 (CM) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #7 (CM) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #8 (CD) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #9 (CM) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ #10 (CM)_______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ #11 (CS) _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ 36 TS Example of a Paragraph – (Skeleton Chart) My Marvelous Shoes My green converse shoes are incredible!!! CD For example, they permit me to travel through time. CM All I have to do is close my eyes and click my heels together and they will take me to the past. CM Last week, I was able to visit the Knights of the Round Table and King Arthur. CM I visited with the knights, jousted on my horse, ate large dinners of fresh fruits and vegetables, and had servants to bring me anything I wanted. CD In addition, my shoes do work for me. CM Last week, they graded all of the papers from my English class. CM They also did my wash, cleaned my house, and went grocery shopping for me. CD Finally, the best thing they did, was re-decorate my house while I was at work. CM When I came home, not only was the house clean, but all the furniture was moved around in a better way, and the walls were freshly painted. CM It is rather amazing how they get everything done in a blink of an eye! CS My green Converse tennis shoes are the best shoes in the world, and I would not trade them for anything! NOW LET’S PUT THIS PARAGRAPH IN PROPER PARAGRAPH FORM: *********************************************************** 37 My Marvelous Shoes My green converse shoes are incredible! For example, they permit me to travel through time. All I have to do is close my eyes and click my heels together and they will take me to the past. Last week, I was able to visit the Knights of the Round Table and King Arthur. I visited with the knights, jousted on my horse, ate large dinners of fresh fruits and vegetables, and had servants to bring me anything I wanted. In addition, my shoes do work for me. Last week, they graded all of the papers from my English class. They also did my wash, cleaned my house, and went grocery shopping for me. Finally, the best thing they did, was re-decorate my house while I was at work. When I came home, not only was the house clean, but all the furniture was moved around in a better way, and the walls were freshly painted. It is rather amazing how they get everything done in a blink of an eye! My green Converse tennis shoes are the best shoes in the world, and I would not trade them for anything! THE MULTIPARAGRAPH ESSAY FORMAT CHART ELEVEN-SENTENCE BODY PARAGRAPHS, 125+ WORDS PARAGRAPH #1 – Introduction 40+ words 3+ sentences thesis is the last sentence PARAGRAPH #2 – 1st body paragraph 11 sentences 125+ words Format: #1 Topic sentence #2 CD, starts with For example, #3 Commentary #4 Commentary #5 CD, starts with In addition #6 Commentary #7 Commentary 38 PARAGRAPH #3 – 2nd #8 CD, starts with Furthermore #9 Commentary #10 Commentary #11 Concluding sentence body paragraph 11 sentences 125 + words Format: #1 Topic Sentence #2 CD, starts with For example #3 Commentary #4 Commentary #5 CD, starts with In addition #6 Commentary #7 Commentary #8 CD, starts with Furthermore #9 Commentary #10 Commentary #11 Concluding sentence PARAGRAPH #4 – 3rd body paragraph 11 sentences 125 + words Format: #1 Topic Sentence #2 CD, starts with For example #3 Commentary #4 Commentary #5 CD, starts with In addition #6 Commentary #7 Commentary 39 #8 #9 #10 #11 CD, starts with Furthermore Commentary Commentary Concluding sentence PARAGRAPH #5 – concluding paragraph (includes conclusion) 40+ words, all commentary no repeats unless names gives a finished feeling to the whole essay XXIII. Editing A Paper Always Edit your paper using the COPS METHOD CAPITALIZAITON OVERALL PARAGRAPHS PUNCTUATION SPELLING 1st Read the paper and check for capitalization. 2nd Reread the paper and check for paragraphing. 3rd Reread the paper and check for punctuation, period, question marks, etc. 4th Reread the paper and check for correct spelling of words. ALWAYS COPS YOUR PAPERS ONCE YOUR PAPER HAS BEEN COPSED, WRITE ON THE BOTTOM OF YOUR PAPER: “I HAVE COPSED MY PAPER" SIGN YOUR NAME 40 Now you are ready to give your paper to another student to edit it for you. Skeleton charts are used to transfer the information from the organizational chart. The skeleton chart is a great place way to edit your paper. You are able to clearly see if you have included all components of the paragraph or the essay. It gives you more space for editing and making corrections. Once the skeleton is completed and edited, you are ready to write the final draft. See next page for Skeleton Chart – Essay 41 SKELETON CHART - ESSAY Paragraph #1 Thesis: __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Paragraph #2: first body paragraph #1 (TS) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #2 (CD) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #3 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #4 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #5 (CD) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #6 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #7 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #8 (CD) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #9 (CM) __________________________________________________________ 42 __________________________________________________________ #10 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #11 (CS) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Paragraph #3: second body paragraph #1 (TS) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #2 (CD) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #3 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #4 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #5 (CD) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #6 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #7 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #8 (CD) __________________________________________________________ 43 __________________________________________________________ #9 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #10 (CM) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ #11(CS) __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Paragraph #4: Concluding paragraph, Last Sentence: __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 44 45 46 XXVII. FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE 1. Alliteration Alliteration is the use of the same sound or letter at the beginning of words in a sentence or poem. Alliteration is used for effect in a poem. Example: The sparkling sun glanced off the silver sea. Explanation: The underlined letter s is repeated throughout the sentence. By using the s sound, the writer reinforces the shimmering, fluid image of the sea with light reflecting off it. Example: Hungry Harry’s hand hovered over a huge hamburger. Explanation: The h sound is repeated over and over again. What can Harry, who is very hungry, want to eat that begins with h? A huge hamburger! 2. Simile -A simile compares one thing directly to something unlike it by using the words like or as. (You can remember this by thinking a simile shows how things are similar. Example: I used to wrap my dreams around me like a soft blanket. Explanation: The simile begins with the word like and compares the author’s dream to a blanket. The author is telling you that dreams made him or her feel warm and safe, the way you feel wrapped in a soft blanket. Example: My friend yelled as loud as a train whistle to get my attention. 47 Explanation: The simile uses as to compare the friend’s voice to a train whistle. The author is telling you that the friend’s voice was really loud and got his attention, like a train whistle. 3. Metaphor A metaphor compares one thing to another by stating that one thing is the other. It does NOT use the words like or as. A metaphor indirectly suggests a similarity between two things. Example: Snowflakes, white feathers drifting, slowly falling. Explanation: The author is comparing snowflakes to feathers. The author substitutes the word feather for snowflakes. The reader infers that the snowflake is being compared to a feather because they are both lightweight. Example: This house is an icebox this morning. Explanation: The author is implying that the house is very cold. It is being compared to an icebox without using the words like or as. 4. Onomatopoeia Onomatopoeia is a form of figurative language that uses words that imitate natural sounds. Example: Bzzz. Bzzz. Bzzz goes the bee. Explanation: Bzzz is the sound that a bee makes, so the reader can “hear” the sound of a bee in the sentence. Example: The white owl called “Whoooo, whooo” in the night. Explanation: The writer uses whoooo to imitate the sound an owl makes. 48 5. Appositives An appositive is a group of words that explains something in a sentence. An appositive is placed by the word it explains. An appositive is set off by commas. The exception to this is a one word name. Example: His mission was to stand in line for tickets. His mission was no fun. His mission, one of standing in line for tickets, was no fun. John Davis is the president of Diet Enterprises. John Davis presents seminars about weight loss. John Davis, president of Diet Enterprises, presents seminars about weight loss. A cobra is a poisonous snake. A cobra lives in Asia or Africa. A cobra, a poisonous snake, lives in Asia or Africa. XXV. Elements of Poetry rhyme – Words that sound alike end rhyme – Words at the end of a lone of poetry that rhyme with each other internal rhyme – rhyme within the same line of poetry near rhyme – words close to each other in sound Example – weather, better visual rhyme – words with the same letters Example – again, pain simile – comparison of two unlike things using like or as Example – The house is as cold as an ice box The car rode like a luxury liner at sea. 49 Metaphor – comparison of two unlike things NOT using like or as Example – The house is an ice box. The car is a luxury liner. Alliteration – words that begin with the same letter. Example – The big brawny boy bit into the burger. Assonance – repetition of consonant sounds within a word. Illusion – not being real, a mirage. Verse- one line of poetry. Stanza – a group of lies in a poem grouped together. Hyperbole – extreme exaggeration personification – giving human qualities to something not human. Allusion – a reference to something well known. Onomatopoeia – words created to mimic sounds. Example – The Bzz of a bee. The drip, drip, drip of water. Rhyme scheme – aabb, abab, abcabc refrain – repetition of lines in a poem hyperbole - hy·per·bo·le - deliberate and obvious exaggeration used for effect EXAMPLE: “I could eat a million of these” personification – giving human qualities to something not human. Repetition – repeating words and phrases blank verse – iambic pentameter, 5 feet of iambic pentameter rhythm free verse – no particular rhyme or rhythm XXVII. Literary Terms 50 Foreshadowing - A suggestion or hint in a story. It is put there by the author to indicate an event to come. At times this "hint" maybe so subtle that it is difficult to recognize until the "event" has occurred. Flashback - To go back to an earlier time. Imagery - This term refers to word pictures-groups of words that create specific pictures in the mind. These images are not restricted to visual images. Imagery refers to all the senses sight sound, taste, smell, and touch. In the story "After the Battle" by Joseph A. Altsheler, the author creates images of touch and smell in this way: "There was no wind. The night had brought no coolness. The thick and heavy atmosphere hung close to the earth and coiled around and embraced everything. Through it came the faint gun powdery vapor that crept into the throats and nostrils..." Exposition - the beginning of a story and the author tells you what the story is all about. The author shows us what the story is all about. The part of the story that helps the reader understand the background or situation in which the story is set. It is intended to make clear or explain something that might be difficult to understand. Rising action - events that build interest to the climax of the story Rising actions always is the part of the action that happens before the climax. Climax or turning point - the high point of the story. This is not in the middle of the story, but found toward the end. From this point 51 on the main character is going to live or die. Everything is falling in place. Resolution - denouement - the end of the story. Everything resolves itself, all problems are solved. Characterization - This is how the author creates people for a story. Character is revealed by what the author says about the character; how the character speaks, thinks, and acts; and how other characters act toward the character and what they say about the character. A. character - person, animal, robot, some being that corries the action forward in the story. B. static character - a character that does not change, they stay the same. C. dynamic character - a character that does change in a story, a character that has learned more about himself/herself during the story. Point of view - through whose eyes the story is told, 1st person, 3rd person Genre - type of literature, horror, mysteries, thrillers, historical, science fiction, biography, autobiography, etc. Theme - a little understanding, a lesson learned, this is not always obvious. Mood - how the story makes you feel. A mood can change in the story. The music often helps to set the mood of a movie. Mood is the feeling that the author wants the reader to experience. The 52 way words are put together determine the kinds of feelings the reader feels fear, humor, sadness, hate, anger, etc. In "The Monkey's Pas" the narrator says, "The cold white of the winter moon cast a slant of light on the far wall, capturing the shadow of the hunched old woman as she peered expectantly toward the graveyard." This sentence was intended to create a mood of loneliness, depression, misery, etc. Plot - the storyline, what happens in the story, the sequence of events. The play is the action of the story that moves from the opening situation to the problem and on through to a resolution. The plot usually proceeds this way: (1) a tranquil situation involving a main character is related; (2) a conflict develops; (3) complications arise from the main character's attempts to find a solution to the conflict; (4) the complications eventually result in a climax; (5) the climax is followed by a resolution to the conflict returning the situation to a state of relative calm. A. subplot - (below) a subplot is a secondary little story going on in itself within the main plot of the story. B. parallel episode - another thing happening in a story and goes up and down like a main plot. Protagonist - the hero or good guy during a story. In real life, the heroes also have faults. They are the person you want to see succeed. Antagonist - the bad guy or villain in the story. The antagonist has some good qualities; they are a mixture of good and bad. This is the term that refers to the force, person, or obstacle that stand in the way of the main character is he/she attempts to solve the problem or conflict in the story. 53 Setting - The setting is the time and place in which the story occurs. The time or place may be either stated or suggested. The setting provides a background for the action and can also help shape events. For example; London's "Love of Life" takes place within the Arctic Circle in northern Canada, hundreds of miles from the nearest outpost of civilization. A man who has injured his ankle, has been deserted by his partner and winter is coming on. Questions that help analyze the setting are: 1. When does the story occur? 2. Where does it occur? 3. Why is the main character in this particular setting? 4. How does the setting affect the main character? 5. How does the setting help create tension? 6. How does the setting help determine the action? Suspense - Suspense is the tension created in the reader by the action of the story. This is done when the author hints that something new is about to happen. For example: The narrator in "The Monkey’s Paw" says "But on rare occasions, when all the pivots and wheels in the Great Clock of Fate are synchronized to permit it, then, we get exactly what we want. And believe me, friend to grant our deepest wish can be one of Fate's cruelest jokes." After this, it would be difficult to imagine a person who would not want to know more about this "cruelest" of jokes. Symbol (symbolism, symbolic) - Something in a story which stands for something else. A symbol usually is some real object that stands for an abstract meaning. In "The Necklace" by Guy de Maupassant, the diamond necklace is a symbol for the beauty and 54 glamour of the world Madame Loisel (Marsha in the adaptation) yearns for. Theme - A brief generalized meaning of the story stated (ideally) in one sentence. A good way to approach identification of theme is to ask the question: "The author is trying to show that..." For instance: In "The Last Leaf" O. Henry was trying to show that love for another can be stronger than love for self. Some themes, however, are difficult to state briefly or precisely and need to be discussed. Tone - The attitude the author has toward the story subject as reflected in the story. Ambrose Bierce's tone (attitude) toward war, in his short story "Chickamauga" is abhorrence. In this story the author describes, through the eyes of a deaf-mute child, the horrors of war. Active Voice - if the subject is doing the action. Passive Voice - The subject is not doing the action to place lay laid laid to recline lie lay lain Conflict - what moves the story forward. Something adds to the interest of the story. The conflict is the problem between the opposing forces in the story. The main character wants something and something else is standing in the way. There are 5 types of conflict: 55 1. Man against man [one character has a problem with one or more other characters.] 2. Man against Society [A character has trouble deciding what action to take. This type of conflict deals with right and wrong. For example: A character is hungry. He has no money. He cannot find work to make money, but he must eat. He believes it is wrong to steal.. He must decide whether to break into a grocery story and steal food or go hungry.] 3. Man against Society [A character has a problem with the law, school, accepted behavior, etc.] 4. Man against Nature [A character struggles with the elements. In "love of Life" by jack London, the man wants to live, but Nature in the form of the barren arctic tundra stands in his way. To survive he must overcome all that Nature puts in his way; an injured ankle, hunger, cold, distance, wolves, etc.] 5. Man against Fate (the God's the Supernatural) [A character is faced with uncontrollable circumstances.] Flat line story - A story is flat when nothing interesting in the story takes place. Complication - Complication refers to the difficult circumstances that come about through the character's attempts to find solutions to his/her problem. Dialogue - This term refers to the exact words of conversation taking place between characters. Dialogue is one of the most common ways an author reveals character. The words a character uses also serve to relate the plot to the reader. 56 Falling Action - The action of a story is said to increase in tension to a climax. Falling action is the part of the story that occurs after the climax. Irony - In literature an implication of meaning where there is a striking contrast between what the statement says and what the statement means. A simple example of irony is when a character calls a fat person skinny. Another example is in "The Necklace"; M. Loisel (Marsha in the adaptation) sacrifices her youth to pay for a diamond necklace she has lost, but the irony of this is that the necklace was worth only a small amount. Metaphor - A metaphor is an implied comparison between two things to illustrate a point of similarity. Almost everyday, we use metaphors in our speech. For instance: When we speak of someone who has a habit of bragging, we might say, "Oh, he's just a big bag of wind." (OR) when describing someone who keeps saying the same thing over and over again, we might say "She's a broken record." (AND) in the adaptation of "The Monkey's Paw" the narrator describes fate as a clock: "But, on rare occasions, when all the pivots and wheels in the Great Clock of Fate are synchronized to permit it, then, we get exactly what we want." Personification - This is a metaphor where human characteristics are given to inanimate or abstract ideas. In "The last leaf" the author gives pneumonia the characteristic of a man. "In November, a cold, unseen stranger whom the doctors called Pneumonia stalked about the colony, touching one here and there with his icy finger. Over on the east side this ravager strode boldly, smiting his victims by scores, but his feet trod slowly through the maze of the narrow and moss-grown places." 57 Point of view - From whose point of view is the story told? The two most commonly used by authors are the first person and the third person. 1. First Person: If the author tells the story from the point of view of one of the characters, we call this first person point of view. The adaptation of "The Monkey's Paw" is written in first person, when the narrator is speaking, personal pronouns are used (I, me, my): During supper the monkey's paw was more or less forgotten, and afterward my three hosts coaxed me into tell them more of my adventures in a world oceans away from their own. I was still weary though from much travel and before long, bid my friends good night and left for home. 2. Third Person: if the author tells the story from the point of view of someone outside the story, we call this third, person, point of view. The original of the "The Monkey's Paw" is written in third person. The pronouns I, me and my are not used by the narrator. The same paragraph as above read this way: Mr. White dropped it back in his pocket, and placing chairs, motioned his friend to the table. In the business of supper the tailsman was partly forgotten, and afterward the three sat listening in an enthralled fashion to a second installment of the soldier's adventures in India. Protagonist - This is the main character in a story. When discussing conflict, the main character is referred to as the protagonist when he/she is trying to overcome an opposing obstacle, person or force. 58