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#1: Correct Sentence Formation: 20.5%
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Recognizing fragments
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Recognizing run-ons, including comma splices
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Joining sentences correctly
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Incorrectly used semicolons
#2: Use of commas, dashes, and colons: 17.7%
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No comma between subject and verb
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No comma before or after preposition
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When to use commas to separate adjectives
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No comma between adjective and noun
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Commas used after introductory words
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No commas between compound subjects or compound objects
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No commas around emphatic pronouns
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Colons used for a list or explanation
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Dashes used with non-essential clauses, as intro for a list, and with a deliberate pause
#3: Correctly formed non-essential clauses and relative pronouns: 10.2%
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Non-essential clause must be surrounded by commas
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Correct use of which vs. that; who vs. which; who vs. whom
#4: Verb tense and form: 9.6%
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Correct and consistent tense usage
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When to use past tense instead of past participle
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Past participle needs a helping verb
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Incorrectly formed past participle
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Will vs. would
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When to use gerund and when to use infinitive
#5: Misplaced and dangling modifiers and word placement: 9.2%
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Descriptive phrases must be next to the word they describe.
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Would a word make more sense elsewhere in the sentence?
#6: Apostrophe use: 7.5%
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Correct formation of plural nouns
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Correct formation of possessive form of nouns
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Common contractions and their meanings (such as “it’s”)
#6: Pronoun Use: 7.5%
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Consistent use of pronouns
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Pronoun-antecedent agreement (including singular or plural pronouns)
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Pronoun case
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Present and clear antecedents
#8. Idioms: 5.1%
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Idiomatic use of prepositions
#9: Parallel Structure and Word Pairs: 4.1%
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Use of matching prepositions
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Items in a list match
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Such as neither…nor, either…or, not only…but also, from…to, as…as
#10: Subject-Verb Agreement: 3.8%
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Singular subjects need singular verbs; plural subjects need plural verbs
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Subject – non-essential clause – verb construction
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Subject – prepositional phrase – verb construction
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Verb before subject
#11: Adjectives vs. Adverbs: 2.4%
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Adjectives are used to describe nouns
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Adverbs are used to describe adjectives, adverbs, and verbs
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Correct use of the comparative and superlative forms
#11: Comparison words: 2.4%
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Correct use of comparison words such as more/less than, less vs. fewer, much vs. many, and that of/those of
Even though the English language is complex, ACT English tests a specific set of grammar rules. Furthermore, it tests
these rules the same way, over and over again.
In this complete guide, we've compiled the comprehensive list of ACT English grammar rules you need to know to
ace the ACT English section. If you master all these rules and practice them with realistic ACT questions, you'll have a
huge advantage on the English section.
Unlike other guides, we give you lots of examples to show you exactly how the grammar rule will show up on the ACT.
After all, you need to master the ACT format to do well on the ACT.
Quick Overview
The writing rules tested on the ACT can be grouped into two categories: Usage and Rhetoric.
Usage skills are what you classically call "Grammar Rules," such as punctuation, subject/verb agreement, verb tenses.
Rhetorical skills have to do with style, organization, and writing logic. You'll need to learn how to organize sentences in a
paragraph, how to connect two ideas together logically, and how to sequence paragraphs together.
We'll start first with Usage skills, then onto Rhetorical skills.
USAGE SKILLS
Punctuation
The ACT only tests very specific uses of certain kinds of punctuation. Those rules, and only those rules, are detailed
below.
Commas
Use commas to separate words and word groups in a simple series of three or more items.
We had coffee, cheese, crackers and grapes.
Use a comma to separate two adjectives when the adjectives are interchangeable.
It was a vibrant, massive painting.
When starting a sentence with a dependent clause, use a comma after it.
When Jim studied in the library for his chemistry quiz, it was very quiet.
Use commas to set off nonessential parts of the sentence.
The woman, knowing it was late, hurried home.
Apostrophes
Apostrophes are used two ways on the ACT: to show possession and to create contractions. Many of the apostrophes
issues are tested using the "Word Choice" skill further below.
To form possessives of nouns:
Laura's hat
The kids' toys
The tree's leaves
Note that the singular possessive Laura's has the apostrophe before the s, while the plural possessive kids' has
the apostrophe after the s.
To create contractions (show the omission of letters):
There's a clown.
You'd love it.
Who's there?
Colons
Use a colon after an independent clause when it is followed by a list, a quotation, appositive, or other idea directly related
to the independent clause.
The vote was unanimous: the older candidate had won.
Semicolons
Use a semicolon to join 2 independent clauses when the second clause restates the first or when the two clauses are of
equal emphasis.
I'm not sure how to get there; let's get directions.
Use a semicolon to join 2 independent clauses when the second clause begins with a conjunctive adverb (however,
therefore, etc.) or a transition (in fact, for example, etc.).
The basement is scary; thus, I do not go down there alone.
Dashes
Dashes are used to set off or emphasize the content enclosed within dashes or the content that follows a dash. Dashes
place more emphasis on this content than parentheses.
Upon discovering the errors—all 124 of them—the publisher immediately recalled the books.
End Punctuation
Use a period at the end of a sentence that makes a statement.
He will try again.
Use a question mark after direct questions.
Where are we?
Use (rarely) an exclamation point at the end of a sentence to express strong emotion.
Stop it!
Subject/Verb Agreement
Nouns and verbs are both parts of speech with number: they are written differently if they refer to just one thing or
multiple things. One dog runs fast, for example, but two dogs run fast. Number agreement just means that the noun and
the verb have the same number (singular or plural).
Examples
Error: The writing in those paragraphs are absolutely horrible.
Corrected: The writing (singular) in those paragraphs is (singular) absolutely horrible.
Error: There was a doctor and a crew of nurses in the emergency room with me during my surgery.
Corrected: There were (plural) a doctor and two nurses (plural) in the emergency room with me during my surgery.
Error: Mr. Peterson is trying to do yard work but a swarm of bees keep distracting him.
Corrected: Mr. Peterson is trying to do yard work but a swarm (singular) of bees keeps(singular) distracting him.
Pronouns
A pronoun is a noun that can stand in for another noun. For example, the pronoun "she" can stand in for "the woman" or
"Queen Elizabeth." But, unlike nouns, pronouns change their form if they're used in different ways. These are the ways
that pronouns are tested on the ACT.
Subject vs. Object Pronouns
Nouns, in relation to verbs, can be subjects or objects. Subjects "do" verbs and objects have verbs "done" to them: a dog
(the subject noun) chases (the verb) its tail (the object noun).
Regular nouns like dog or tail do not change depending on whether they are subjects or objects, but most pronouns do.
For example, in the phrase "she likes him," the woman is the subject, so the pronoun is she; in the phrase "he likes her,"
the woman is the object, so the pronoun is her.
Subject Pronouns
Object Pronouns
I
me
you
you
he
him
she
her
it
it
we
us
they
them
Examples
Error: Me and my parents ate dinner.
Corrected: My parents and I ate dinner.
Error: The tourists asked my friends and I for directions.
Corrected: The tourists asked my friends and me for directions.
Error: The Girl Scouts sold cookies to my sister and I.
Corrected: The Girl Scouts sold cookies to my sister and me.
Note above that all of the examples pair the faulty pronoun with another noun. This is almost always how the harder ACT
pronoun questions test this skill.
That vs. Who
This concept is simple: who is the pronoun for a person or people, and that is the pronoun for everything else.
Examples
Error: The coach is the person that is in charge of the team's schedule.
Corrected: The coach is the person who is in charge of the team's schedule.
Error: The elephant is the animal who asks for the most treats.
Corrected: The elephant is the animal that asks for the most treats.
Error: The corporation is who owns this land.
Corrected: The corporation is what owns this land.
Person: 1st, 2nd, and 3rd
When we use pronouns more than once in a sentence, we have to use the same person, or perspective, throughout. For
reference, 1st person is I or me, 2nd person is you, and 3rd person ishe or she.
Examples
Error: If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game.
Corrected: If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, she has to know the rules of the game.
Error: Everyone should make their own decision.
Corrected: Everyone should make his own decision.
Error: Every student must study hard if they want good grades.
Corrected: Every student must study hard if she wants good grades.
Note, in the second example, that the error is the commonly-used "their" to mean a singular noun (everyone). These
singular nouns that seem plural (such as nobody, anyone, and each person), as well as "their" instead of the singular "he"
or "his," are often tested in the hardest pronoun questions.
Ambiguous Reference
Wherever there is a pronoun, it should be obvious what the pronoun is "standing in" for.
Examples
Error: Ethel told Lucy that her pie was wonderful.
Corrected: Ethel told Lucy that Lucy's pie was wonderful.
Error: The files arranged by the temporary workers were out of order, so we sent them back to the main office.
Corrected: The files arranged by the temporary workers were out of order, so we sent the files back to the main office.
Error: Once Nora and Elise go to live with their husbands, they have to convert to their ways of living.
Corrected: Once Nora and Elise go to live with their husbands, the husbands have to convert to their wives' ways of living.
Verb Forms: Tense and Agreement
There are 2 main issues with verbs tested on the ACT: verb tense and subject-verb agreement. The subject is the noun that
"does" the verb (below, the subject of the sentences is they.)
Verb Tense
There are six basic verb tenses, two for each time period:
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Simple Present: They sing.
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Present Perfect: They have sung.
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Simple Past: They sang.
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Past Perfect: They had sung.
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Future: They will sing.
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Future Perfect: They will have sung.
All of these tenses are created out of three forms of "to sing": sing (present), sang (past), and sung(past participle). As you
can see, some of the correct verb forms are created by adding forms of the words "have" and "do." The idea is to keep
verbs in a single sentence within the same time period.
Examples
Error: The boy insisted that he has paid for the candy bars.
Corrected: The boy insisted (past) that he had paid (past perfect) for the candy bars.
Error: The doctor suggested bed rest for the patient, who suffers from a bad cold.
Corrected: The doctor suggested (past) bed rest for the patient, who suffered (past) from a bad cold.
Error: I told him that he can drop by any time and I will be happy to help him.
Corrected: I told (past) him that he could (past) drop by any time and I would (past) be happy to help him.
Number Agreement
Nouns and verbs are both parts of speech with number: they are written differently if they refer to just one thing or
multiple things. One dog runs fast, for example, but two dogs run fast.
Number agreement just means that the noun and the verb have the same number (singular or plural).
Examples
Error: The writing in those paragraphs are absolutely horrible.
Corrected: The writing (singular) in those paragraphs is (singular) absolutely horrible.
Error: There was a doctor and a crew of nurses in the emergency room with me during my surgery.
Corrected: There were (plural) a doctor and a crew of nurses (plural) in the emergency room with me during my surgery.
Error: Mr. Peterson is trying to do yard work but a swarm of bees keep distracting him.
Corrected: Mr. Peterson is trying to do yard work but a swarm (singular) of bees keeps(singular) distracting him.
Comparison
These are pretty simple. Comparisons between two things are formed by the construction "x ismore/less
[adjective]/[adjective]-er than y." For example, Bill is more friendly than Louis.
Comparisons between three or more things, however, are formed by the construction "x is the most
[adjective]/[adjective]-est of the [things]." For example, Lucy was the most adept student in the class or The cheetah is
the fastest land animal.
The ACT tests this skill by mismatching the types of comparison:
Examples
Error: Between butterflies and spiders, butterflies are the most admired by humans.
Corrected: Between butterflies and spiders, butterflies are more admired by humans.
Error: Cheetahs are the faster of all land mammals.
Corrected: Cheetahs are the fastest of all land mammals.
Error: Nationalists think theirs is the better nation of all.
Corrected: Nationalists think theirs is the best nation of all.
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Word Choice
These questions are about commonly confused words. Just memorize which is which.
Its vs. It’s
It's is short for it is or it has.
It's too late.
Its shows possession, like his and her.
These are its footprints.
Their vs. There vs. They’re
There refers to a place.
There is a terrarium in the first building; it is over there.
They're is a contraction of they are.
They're not in this building.
Their is the possessive pronoun.
Their house is on the next street.
To vs. Too vs. Two
Two is a number.
There were two books on the table.
Too means "more than enough" and "also."
After we got our dinner for free, they gave us too much ice cream for dessert, too!"
To indicates direction and action.
We're going to the park to play basketball.
Then vs. Than
Then is mainly an adverb, often used to situate actions in time.
That was then; this is now.
Than is a conjunction used mainly in making comparisons.
Shaq is taller than Kobe.
"Might have" vs. "Might of"
"Might have" is correct. "Might of" is not.
She might have gotten lost.
Idioms
Idioms are expressions that mean something different than the actual words they use, such as "rain cats and dogs" or "kick
the bucket." But in English we also have short phrases made of words that always go together, and these are also tested on
the ACT.
Examples
Error: Maria stumbled in her old rocking horse in the garage.
Corrected: Maria stumbled upon her old rocking horse in the garage.
Error: Loud guard dogs keep burglars in bay.
Corrected: Loud guard dogs keep burglars at bay.
Error: Arturo and I happened for meet at the library.
Corrected: Arturo and I happened to meet at the library.
Verbal Phrases
The ACT particularly loves one type of idiom: verbal phrases, which are verb + preposition pairs. They always want to
know if you know which is the correct preposition, as in the incorrect sentences below.
Examples
Error: The show was followed on an encore.
Corrected: The show was followed by an encore.
Error: She is responsible of returning her library books.
Corrected: She is responsible for returning her library books.
Error: One should refrain for texting while driving.
Corrected: One should refrain from texting while driving.
Sentence Fragments & Run-on Sentences
Sentences are made up of groups of words that are called clauses. There are two types of clauses:independent (can be a
complete sentence) and dependent (must be attached to an independent clause in order to be a complete sentence).
An independent clause has a subject-verb pair and does not start with a word or phrase that makes the clause dependent,
such as "when" or "because" (as in example 3 below).
In the examples below, the subjects are underlined and the verbs are in bold.
A Sentence Fragment is a sentence made of anything less than an independent clause. To fix it, we add an independent
clause.
Examples
Fragment: Such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
Corrected: There are many STEM careers, such as electrical, chemical, and industrial engineering.
Fragment: Saving her team at a time when they needed her.
Corrected: The goalie was saving her team at a time when they needed her.
Fragment: Because the one I have now isn't working out too well.
Corrected: I need a new roommate, because the one I have now isn't working out too well.
A Run-on Sentence is made of multiple independent clauses joined by only a comma or no punctuation at all. It can be
fixed with a comma and conjunction (example 1 below), a joining word (and or because) (example 2 below), or a
semicolon (example 3 below).
Examples
Run-on sentence: My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus it is very garlicky.
Corrected: My favorite Mediterranean spread is hummus, as it is very garlicky.
Run-on sentence: I rushed out to the shop, I had no milk left.
Corrected: I rushed out to the shop because I had no milk left.
Run-on sentence: Mary likes dogs she has a beagle.
Corrected: Mary likes dogs; she has a beagle.
Parallel Construction
Parallel construction is when we present a list of things all in the same way. For example, if two things in a list are
adverbs, the third should also be an adverb. If two things in a list are "to [verb]," then the other should also be in the form
"to [verb]." To fix it, we just phrase all of the items in the list the same way.
Examples
Error: The couple bought the concert tickets, arrived at the theater, and went about finding their seats.
Corrected: The couple bought the concert tickets, arrived at the theater, and found their seats.
Error: The deer moved carefully, quietly and in a way that was slow.
Corrected: The deer moved carefully, quietly and slowly.
Error: Peeling hazelnuts requires skill, patience and the ability to persevere.
Corrected: Peeling hazelnuts requires skill, patience and perseverance.
Faulty Modifier
A modifier is a word or phrase that describes (a.k.a. modifies) something. There are two kinds ofmodifier problems tested
on the ACT: dangling modifiers and misplaced modifiers.
Dangling Modifier
A dangling modifier is a modifier that begins a sentence, has a comma after it, and has the noun it describes NOT placed
after the comma. In the first example below, for example, the modifier is "coating the sidewalk," and it describes the
snow. Since "we" is the first word after the comma, not "snow," "coating the sidewalk" is a dangling modifier. Modifiers
are underlined, while nouns being modified are in bold.
Examples
Error: Coating the sidewalk, we trudged through the heavy snow.
Corrected: We trudged through the heavy snow coating the sidewalk.
Error: Long and tangled, it was difficult to comb the child's hair.
Corrected: Long and tangled, the child's hair was difficult to comb.
Error: Exhausted and weak, the soldiers' uniforms were covered in frost.
Corrected: Exhausted and weak, the soldiers were covered in frost.
Misplaced Modifier
A misplaced modifier is a modifier that's not close enough to the thing it describes, so it looks like it's describing the
wrong thing. In the first example below, for example, the modifier "on the sale rack" seems to be describing how the
jacket fits the rack, which isn't right. To correct it, we move the modifier closer to the noun it describes.
Examples
Error: The jacket was too small on the sale rack.
Corrected: The jacket on the sale rack was too small.
Error: Ray wore his one collared shirt to the job interview, which was stained with mustard.
Corrected: Ray wore his one collared shirt, which was stained with mustard, to the job interview.
Error: She handed out brownies to children wrapped in foil.
Corrected: She handed out brownies wrapped in foil to children.
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RHETORICAL SKILLS
We're now going to cover the Rhetorical skills you need for ACT English. Where Usage skills tend to focus on smaller
subparts of a sentence, Rhetorical skills broaden the scope to consider how sentences are constructed, and how sentences
fit together with each other.
Relevance
This skill is deciding what the passage is about and whether a certain detail belongs in that category or not. Which
sentences, if any, are irrelevant in the paragraph below?
[1] My uncle explained to me that bonsai cultivation was part of our ancestors’ culture that could remain with me for my
whole life. [2] He said that bonsai as old as Hoshi didn’t need much maintenance, but he would teach me what I needed to
know. [3] He added that I could easily do everything necessary for Hoshi's care in my dorm room. [4] It’s funny to think
that Hoshi is older than my great grandparents. Bonsai are grown from parts of normal-sized trees that are kept small by
pruning and planting in small pots. [5] They thrive in only partial sunlight but need to be pruned several times per year
and kept in temperatures that stay well above freezing year-round. [6] Bonsai also require careful watering, and Hoshi in
particular needs to live outside in the summer to get the best light and inside in the winter because of the cold.
If you said Sentence 4 is irrelevant, you're correct. The paragraph is all about bonsai cultivation, and Sentence 4 is about
the age of bonsai trees.
Author Intent
For this skill, we need to be able to identify the writer's topic, point, or goal, and the ways she achieves it.
There are many names for the Sun, like the ancient Egyptians' Aten. They saw it as either the body or the eye of the god
Ra, who was the source and symbol of all life. In ancient Egyptian mythology, it was believed that Ra’s tears and sweat
were the origin of humanity, and so the Egyptians sometimes called themselves the “Cattle of Ra.” This personification
illustrates how closely connected we feel to the Sun, even to the extent that we give it a face, a name, and a unique
personality. Even the Sun, it turns out, isn’t immune to our impulse to personify the things upon which we depend.
What is the writer's point, or goal, in the above paragraph? The correct answer is something along the lines of "the idea of
Ra shows that people personify objects they depend on."
Organization: Transitional Logic
The ACT wants to test our ability to transition between ideas: within a sentence, a paragraph, or a whole essay.
Examples
Error: All through high school, we were inseparable; however, even our parents eventually became friends.
Corrected: All through high school, we were inseparable; in fact, even our parents eventually became friends.
Error: The painting is a fascinating work because, by representing women in such a novel way, it questions both
representational art and traditional notions of femininity. Nonetheless, most critics agree that it is a groundbreaking work
in the development of both cubism and modern art as a whole.
Corrected: The painting is a fascinating work because, by representing women in such a novel way, it questions both
representational art and traditional notions of femininity. Indeed, most critics agree that it is a groundbreaking work in the
development of both cubism and modern art as a whole.
Organization: Macro Logic
Macro-logic is the skill of putting the parts of an essay in the right order. Fortunately, on the ACT, there are tons of clues
as to what order sentences and paragraphs should go in. Can you spot the out-of-place sentence(s) in the passage below?
[1] He wore a sailor’s uniform and used papers given to him by a free black sailor, showed his ingenuity and courage.
[2] After a number of previous failed attempts, Douglass finally escaped to freedom. [3] He took two boats and two trains
to get from Havre de Grace, Maryland to a safehouse in New York City, completing his journey to freedom in less than
twenty four hours. [4] He received the uniform from Anna Murray, a free black woman in Baltimore who later became his
wife.
If you said Sentence 4 is out of place, you were right. It should go after Sentence 1.
Conciseness and Redundancy
There are times when saying something twice is needed: for emphasis, to review a difficult topic, or to explain something
more clearly. None of these apply on the ACT. The two ways this skill is tested on the ACT is through wordy sentences
and redundant sentences. They're related, but different.
Wordy Sentences
Examples
Error: To travel around Berlin, we have the option of choosing many different transport systems; among them are the UBahn, or the underground rail system similar to New York’s Subway, and the tram, which is another form of transport that
involves railways that have tracks on the streets.
Corrected: To travel around Berlin, we might take the U-Bahn, or subway; we could also take the tram.
Error: High-quality learning environments are a necessary precondition for facilitation and enhancement of the ongoing
learning process.
Corrected: Good schools enable people to learn more.
Error: With reference to the fact that the company is deficient in manufacturing and production space, the contract may in
all probability be awarded to some other enterprise.
Corrected: The company may not be awarded the contract because it lacks production facilities.
Redundant Sentences
Examples
Error: Many uneducated citizens who have never attended school continue to vote for better schools.
Corrected: Many uneducated citizens continue to vote for better schools.
Error: The eye of a storm is a region of mostly calm weather found at the center of a tropical cyclone.
Corrected: The eye is a region of mostly calm weather found at the center of a tropical cyclone.
Error: The teenage woman who wanted to audition was talented, but only sixteen years old.
Corrected: The woman who wanted to audition was talented, but only sixteen years old.
Formality and Tone
Every piece of writing has a level of formality, from none (a note passed in class) to maximum (official government or
legal documents). The skill here is understanding the formality of the text (which is always pretty close to a book you'd
read in English class). What's the informal phrase in the passage below?
Examples
Many cultures in recorded history have venerated and even worshipped the Sun. To some civilizations, the Sun represents
all life; to others, the reason for the cycles of day and night. To Plato, the Sun represented the offspring of all that was
good. In other myths, though, the Sun might have another kind of significance. It's for sure that the Sun carries great
significance for many cultures both ancient and modern.
If you said "it's for sure," you got it! It's less formal than the rest of the passage, which sounds quite academic.