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ORGANIZATION It starts with a story…. The Main Orders: Spatial Order *takes the reader from one spot to the next, drawing the readers eye Spatial order is describing items based on their physical location or relation to other items. For example: describing the picture on this page, you could point to how it’s daylight outside, or how the woman is feeling in the picture etc. Spatial organization is used for a variety of purposes including descriptions, comparisons, and narrations. Space Order Space order means writing about objects in the order in which they are located. This organizational feature always begins at some point and goes in some particular direction. Ex: When describing a person, place, or thing, space order should be used. Time Order Time order could be used as a way to draw in your reader like for example: (1)Beginning, middle end (2)Pre-End, beginning, middle, all-end (1) is the complete story for stories that are action packed and is used by most Authors. (2) is used when you want to really draw your reader in, because after all, a story that begins with an ending like The Magic tree House #2: “Jack couldn’t sleep. He put his glasses on. He looked at the clock. 5:30. Too early to get up. Yesterday so many strange things had happened. Now he was trying to figure them out.” –Mary Pope Osborne, The knight at dawn, pg1- really draws you in doesn’t it? Logical Order Logical order in writing is considered more like an analysis. When using this, it’s frequent to break the subject down into subheadings, and write about each in a order that is natural and logical. The most common type is the breaking it into order of importance events and details come into picture. These writing patterns are most commonly wrote from general to specific, most familiar to least familiar and smallest to To show the order building up in importance, authors place special emphasis on final sentences of paragraphs to show logical order being used. Chronological order- organizing ideas in a paragraph by occurrence of time, used in historical narratives and explaining procedures Logical division of ideas- the most common and is used for grouping related ideas together and discuss each one, one after another. Comparison / Contrasting- analyzing of similarities and differences between 1 or two different things in writing. The content can either be placed in one paragraph together or split into individual paragraphs for similarities and/or differences. Other’s I may have missed… Problem->Solution- In an essay, there might be a problem and a solution that you want to establish like losing your lunch money, state then in your essay (in the same paragraph) what is the problem, and what should be done about it (the solution). Process-this is used for manuals, but can also be used in essays…somehow? Classification- The main idea of the essay is slaughtered and dissected in each word sentence and paragraph. Quiz Question 1 What is this an example of? • • • A) An egg sandwich B) A passage from Dick and Jane C) How to fall down D) Chronological Order It seemed like an ordinary day when she got up that morning, but Lynda was about to embark on the worst day of her life. First, she fell in the bathtub because her mother forgot to rinse out the bath oil. Then she spilled orange juice on the outfit she had spent hours putting together for school pictures. When she changed, she messed up the French braid her mother had put in her hair. As she walked out the door, she dropped all of her school books and her math homework flew away. Once she made it to the car she thought everything would be all right. She was wrong; her father didn't look before he backed out of the driveway and ran into the neighbor’s truck. Lynda’s side of the car was damaged the most, and she ended up with a broken arm. That night, she cried herself to sleep. ** all examples come from this amazing website: http://www.kimskorner4teachertalk.com/writing/sixtrait/organization/patterns .html I couldn’t believe my eyes when we finally emerged from the storm shelter. Where the barn once stood there was now only a few tufts of hay. The path that led to the house was scattered with branches and debris. The house! The entire roof was gone. The north wall was caved in and we could see right into the house. Well, what was left of it. Tears rolled down my cheeks as I noticed that most of our belongings had been sucked up into the great vacuum and scattered across the countryside. We heard a loud cracking and moaning as the west wall gave way and collapsed, sending up a wave of dust. And yet, there in the middle of the front yard was mother’s prized rose bush. It swayed in the breeze as if nothing had happened. Seeing it made me realize how lucky we were to be alive. We stood there in dismay, our arms locked around one another. Question 2 This is an example of: A) what Tornados do B) Spatial Order C) Vacuums = tornadoes D) Logical Order A plan to improve the city’s park was approved Monday night by the city council. The plan involves adding landscaping to the north end, rebuilding the bridge over the lake, and updating the playground equipment. Funds for the project have been donated by local businesses who hope that improving the park will bring more people to the downtown area which will in turn bring more customers. The next order of business is for the city council to open the bidding process for the various improvements. ~Last Verse, same as the first~ A) How things happen, once approved B) How Diehl's Orchard farm came to be C) Reverse Climatic Order D) Climatic Order Tips about how to not Jumble: Rough draft! Then you can: add notes to the side of your piece of writing Use Writing corrections: sp, ->, ¶, ^, SC etc. If you want to vent, do it. Write what you feel about a certain subject then rearrange. If your having trouble keeping the same tone in a piece of writing, add music in the background to keep it flowing. Well, it’s your writing, so get busy!! Credits: Logical Order by: Joesph Bellini Space Order by: Beth Simsack Time and Spatial Order by: Cassie Humphreys Other Slides by: All Music: “Unwritten” by Natasha Bedingfield “Putting it together [Live]” By Barbra Streisand