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Cataplexy and the Brain Cataplexy is a symptom of narcolepsy (a sleep disorder-This is what I suggest,. First introduce narcolepsy. Describe it, tell us how many people suffer from it etc… Then introduce cataplexy as a symptom and describe it.with examples), and consists of episodes of loss of muscle tone triggered by strong emotions. The severity and manifestation of each cataplectic attack differs greatly. Some patients may experience knee buckling, weakness in the arms, or slurred speech. Need a transition Severe episodes may lead to muscle paralysis for several minutes, and, rarely, will last for several hours. Cataplectic attacks are usually caused by positive emotions. For instance, one might have an attack after hearing or telling a joke.-telling it? Meaning you laugh at your own joke? However, it is possible for episodes to be activated by negative emotions, such as anger, as well. Because the episodes are usually mild- I wouldn’t say because. The reader does not know they are mild. Explain to the reader that most are mild. What exactly does mild mean?, they often go unnoticed by those other than the person experiencing them.-example? Patients describe feeling as if time has stopped, along with a sensation of warmth-is this the mild? (Nishino, 2007). There are several explanations for the affects of narcolepsy-cataplexy, but the disorder in general has been linked to a loss of a certain chemicals produced in the brain.-You need to end this differently. This last sentence feels like it should be the first of the next paragraph. I would just say that although much is known about the systems, the causes remain partly a mystery. Then mention how understanding the causes might lead to treatment of a better understanding of the brain. What scientists do know is that the cause likely lies in specfic parts of the brain called the… Hypocretin, also known as orexin, is a peptide (a string of amino acids) –the reader will have no idea what this is released by the hypothalamus, a section of the brain that is involved in temperature control and basic functions-basic functions is vague. This will tell the reader nothing. Hypocretin-started two sentences in a row with hypocretin. performs many roles, such as regulating sleep and feeding behavior. Transitions…For example, during wakefulness, hypocretin-producing cells are more active, and the peptide flows to multiple parts of the brain, while during sleep, the peptide is prevented from flowing to certain brain regions-the same ones it normally goes to? I am confused by this wording. Please clarify. (Baumann, 2005). Two types of hypocretin have been identified, hypocretin-1 and hypocretin-2. These are segments of a protein reader will be confused. Try and relate this to what the reader already knows somehow. called preprohypocretin. Two different receptors, groups of cells in the brain that receive chemicals, receptors are proteins in the cell membrane of cells. The reader needs a more basic and simplified explanation. You need to work on this. for hypocretin, hypocretin receptor-1 (Hcrtr-1) and hypocretin receptor-2 (Hcrtr-2), have also been discovered. There have been many experiments on animals who either have narcolepsy-cataplexy or similar disorders that provide further information about hypocretin.-This sentence is vague and contains no substantial info. Some investigators have noted that in canine cases of narcolepsy, the peptide is either abnormally low or absent in the fluid that surrounds the brain and spinal cord, which provides more evidence that a lack of hypocretin may be the cause of cataplexy (Mignot & Hungs, 2001).Transition here Genetic studies done with mice show that the absence of preprohypocretin could it be written pre-pro-hypocretin? results in a narcolepsy-cataplexy-like disorder. Mice without Hcrtr-2 also have cataplexy, while mice with no Hcrtr-1 you need to say that this is somewhat surprising. I assume it is. Emphasize it. display no dramatically unusual behavior. In addition to this experiment, other research suggests that Hcrtr-2 is responsible for most of the symptoms of narcolepsy –this is vague. What experiments? (Mignot & Hungs, 2001). While a lack of hypocretin is associated with cataplexy, the reactions in the brain of cataplexy patients also contribute to this symptom. –I would not transiton at the end here. Transition in the next paragraph. In addtion to a lack of…, (something like this) During cataplectic attacks, different areas of the brain show unusual activation in comparison to people without narcolepsy-cataplexy. For example, the right inferior frontal gyrus, a section of the brain involved in inhibitory control (a person's ability to restrain from different actions-just say this then. Do not say inhibitory control.) has been shown to have abnormally increased activation during cataplectic attacks caused by humor. Cataplexy patients learn to control their emotions in order to avoid triggering episodes, which could be the cause of the hyperactivation in this area-reverse this sentence. You just came off the idea of hyperactivating. Lead that into the patient needing to control it (Reiss, et al., 2008). In fact, cataplexy often improves over time as patients learn to control their feelings (Nishino, 2007). Activation in the amygdala also increases when cataplexy patients are exposed to humor (Schwartz, et al., 2007). The amygdala is heavily involved in memory, and the malfunction of this part of the brain has been linked to narcolepsy (Maquet & Frank, 1997). Abnormal amygdalar activation may be one of the physical causes of cataplexy.-you sort of said this already One study hypothesized that this was due to the decreased activation they observed in the hypothalamus.-The reader will not understand this until you discuss the general link between the two structures. Just tell the story of how the hypothalamus is linked to the amygdala. The hypothalamus has been shown to assist the amygdala in modulating responses to emotional stimuli. As mentioned before, hypocretin is produced in the hypothalamus, therefore the hypothalamus may use hypocretin in order to mediate amygdalar reactions The lack of control of the amygdala could be the reason behind a symptom such as cataplexy surfacing (Schwartz, et al., 2007).-I am confused by this sentence. Aren’t you saying that it is the hypothalamus, not the amygdala directly? On the other hand, another study found that the hypothalamus displayed increased activation when cataplexy patients were exposed to humorous material. Although the hypothalamus is believed to be involved in laughter, cataplexy patients rated the material in the experiment less funny than the controls.-I am confused. Then was it humorous material? This means that the increased activation in the hypothalamus was not due to its involvement in humor appreciation. The abnormal reaction was probably caused by hypocretin, because it intensifies the physical effects of humor (Reiss, et al., 2008).-This needs to be clarified. I am confused by this last experiment. Despite all the research that has been done, there are many things-do not use the word “things”. we still do not know about cataplexy. The cause for unusual activation in the brain has not been found and the exact role of the hypocretin system is still unknown. However, the discovery of hypocretin’s association with cataplexy opens many doors to new research like…(be specific), and may offer more efficient ways of diagnosing the disease. Hypocretin may even lead to a dependable cure for cataplexy (Mignot, 2001).s 8.4/10 References Baumann, C.R., & Basetti, C.L. (2005). Hypocretins (orexins) and sleep-wake disorders. Lancet Neurol, 4, 673-682. Maquet, P. & Frank, G. (1997). REM sleep and amygdala. Mol Psychiatry, 2, 195-196. Mignot, E. (2001). A hundred years of narcolepsy research. 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