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3-2 Reading- Nathaniel Bacon’s Challenge to William Berkeley and the Governor’s Response WHAT IS A THESIS? A thesis statement is the position a student is going to take, the argument that is going to be made. It is therefore the answer to the question being asked. As such, the thesis statement is not a fact; it is an informed interpretation of the facts. DON'T QUOTE LARGE PORTIONS OF THE DOCUMENTS The readers of the essays are already familiar with the documents. You can quote a short passage or two if necessary, to make your point, but don't waste time or space reciting them. MAKE SURE THESIS MATCHES ASSESSMENT & KNOWLEDGE Many good essay writers demonstrate a sense of complexity in the documents, showing that most of the evidence may point in one direction but that part of the evidence points in a different direction. It is better, however, to support a clear, simple thesis than to create artificially a complexity that you can't support using the documents or outside knowledge. Almost every essay—including the DBQ—is designed to allow the student to agree or disagree with the statement. Your ultimate goal should be to present a well-argued and well-supported thesis, not merely to give the people scoring the essay what you think they want. ORGANIZE YOUR RESPONSE CAREFULLY In addition to having a strong thesis, it is a good idea to have a guiding organizational principle— a stated agenda for making your point. Try to integrate your outside information into your response. Your exam shouldn't read as if you threw in a few tidbits of outside information at the end. IS THERE A RIGHT ANSWER? Most good questions allow for a range of possible answers. In other words, a continuum exists and students can generally feel free to choose a response along that continuum. However, you should avoid crafting an extreme response at either end of the continuum. WHAT SIDE SHOULD I PICK? You always need to carefully weigh all of the historical evidence and then craft a response that best articulates their understanding of the historical record. In other words, students should not feel free to argue any side simply because they can believe they can support it. Instead, they should feel compelled to support the side with the most evidence behind it. YOU SHOULD INCLUDE 3 THINGS: Argument Reasons to support your answer Background information EXAMPLES OF THESIS STATEMENTS Bad: George Washington set many important precedents as president. This is a fact not a position. Good: The precedents that Washington set as America’s first president greatly benefited the American political system. This is a clear position that can be supported or opposed. Weak: The Revolutionary War brought about change in American society. This is, technically, a position. But, it is vague and not really debatable. Strong: The Revolutionary War ushered in a slew of wide-ranging and permanent social changes in American society. This is a clear, strong, and debatable thesis. EUROPEAN-NATIVE AMERICAN RELATIONS Ch. 3 9/19/12 INDIAN SLAVES IN SPANISH COLONIES How did Spanish soldiers ensure that the Indians obeyed orders? Encomienda system: allowed them to collect tribute (goods, money) from Indians. It was not suppose to include forced labor but it usually did. Repartimiento system: mandatory draft of Indian labor for public works Rescate system: forced rescued Indians to work for those who freed them SPANISH BRUTALITY AND ENCOMIENDA SYSTEM TRADE Indians formed alliances before they would trade with Europeans Unfortunately, trade often led to violence between Indian groups (e.g. Beaver Wars) Displacement of Indians Whites outnumbered Indians in many colonies, but Indians still controlled most of N. America Misunderstandings about land ownership led to conflict Natives saw land as belonging to everyone Europeans thought they owned land; often abused the land Religious Conversion Spanish Catholic priests converted many Indians French Catholic priests had more difficulty English Protestants put little effort into converting Indians In many cases, Indians merged Christianity with their native beliefs SPANISH MISSIONS FRENCH AND SPANISH MISSIONARIES INDIAN-EUROPEAN MILITARY CONFLICT King Philip’s War: 1675, New England Bacon’s Rebellion: 1675, Virginia Wampanoag Indians attacked English settlements after years of tension Violence broke out after struggling white settlers (led by Nathaniel Bacon) moved into Indian lands Indians lost land and power due to these conflicts KING PHILIPS WAR BACON’S REBELLION Who treated Natives worst? Best? Explain. Homework: AMSCO multiple choice questions, pg. 54-55, # 2 on pg. 56 Middle Passage reading, APPARTS