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Advanced Technical Writing
Lecture 10
Writing Letters
1/7/2008
Types of Letters
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Cover Letter
Acceptance Letter
Acknowledgment letters
Adjustment letters
Application letters
Complaint letters
Correspondence … good news and bad news letters
Inquiry letters and responses
Reference letters ( Recommendation letter)
Refusal letters
Resignation letters
Technical information letters
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Letter Format
Two common Format:
1 - Full Block Style
2 - Modified Block Style
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Full Block
Your address
The recipient address
Date
Dear Mr./Ms recipient last name:
Body
Complimentary close
Space for Signature
Typed name
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Modified Block Style
Your address
The recipient address
Date
Dear Mr./Ms recipient last name:
Body
Complimentary close
Space for Signature
Typed name
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Instructions
1. Establish your objectives
2. Determine your reader’s attitude
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and needs
Prepare an outline
Write the first draft
Allow a cooling period
Revise the draft
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Hints
Tone:
Imagine the reader sitting across the
desk
Keep the language neutral
Careful choice of words
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Cover Letter
Letter of application (cover letter) is a
sales letter Main Objective is to get the job
interview
 Identifies the item being sent
 The person to whom it is being sent
 The reason for sending it
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Cover Letter
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Each letter should also make specific references
to the company and indicate your knowledge of
and interest in the work the company is
currently doing.
The cover letter also allows you to highlight the
most important and relevant accomplishments,
skills, and experience listed in your resume.
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Cover Letter
Should provide the following
information
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Identify an employment area
Point out your source of information
Summarize your qualification
Refer the reader to your résumé
Ask for interview
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Content of the Cover Letter
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In the first paragraph, you should state what job you
are applying for and how you learned about it.
You should also state your general qualifications for
the job.
Pick out the most relevant qualifications listed in
your resume and discuss them in detail
Be as specific as possible, and refer the reader to
your resume for additional details.
State where and when you can be reached, and
express your willingness to come to an interview or
supply further information.
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Cover Latter Example
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John Jackson
34 Second Street
Troy, New York 12180
October 4, 1999
Mr. James Roberts
Recruiting Coordinator
Department DRR 1201
Database Corporation
Princeton, New Jersey 05876
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Cover Latter Example Continue
Dear Mr. Roberts:
Your advertisement for software engineers in the January issue
of the IEEE Spectrum caught my attention. I was drawn to the
ad by my strong interest in both software design and Database.
I have worked with a CALMA system in developing VLSI circuits,
and I also have substantial experience in the design of
interactive CAD software. Because of this experience, I can make
a direct and immediate contribution to your department. I have
enclosed a copy of my resume, which details my qualifications
and suggests how I might be of service to Database.
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Cover Latter Example Continue
I would like very much to meet with you to
discuss your open positions for software
engineers. If you wish to arrange an interview,
please contact me at the above address or by
telephone at (518) 271-9999.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Joseph Smith
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More examples For Cover Latter in
your Text Pages 57-59
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Acceptance Letters
This letter is written in order to accept a
received job offer. It should be written
within a week of receiving the offer. The
format is as follow
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Acceptance Letters Example
230 Elnaser St.
Gaza, Palestine
19/8/2004
Dr. Basil Hamed
General Manager
Mechatronics Company
22 Omer Al-moktar St.
Gaza, Palestine
Dear Dr. hamed:
I am very happy to accept your offer for a position as a computer engineer at a
salary of $1200.00, per a month.
Since graduation in July 25, I plan to move to Gaza from Khan Younes this month. I
should be locating to a suitable living accommodation within a week and be ready to
report for work on Saturday, August 26th. Please let me know if this date OK to you.
I look forward to work for you and join a great team.
Sincerely,
Ahmed Ali
Ahmed Ali
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Acknowledgment Letters
In this letter you acknowledge receiving
an item (letter, box, or something). It
serves as a good public relation practice.
In this letter you mention what and when
items are received in a short and polite
manner.
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Acknowledgment Letters Example
Rocky Tech Corp.
112 Jamal Abed Nasser St.
Gaza, Palestine
October 3, 2004
Mr. Ayman Majeed, Salesman
102 Mannara Square
Ramalla, Palestine
Dear Mr. Majeed:
I received your shipment of ten digital multimeters today; the shipment seems
To be complete and in good shape. Thank you for sending it on time.
After the multimeters passing our tests, we will send you a check with the last
payment covering the cost of this purchase.
Sincerely,
Ahmed Ali,
General Manager
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Complaint Letters
When customers are not satisfied with goods and
services that are offered by businesses, they write
complaint letters asking for fixing these situations.
In order to be more effective, the tone of the letter
should not be angry. In order to obtain a positive
response, you should not vent your anger in the
letter. You should state your claim supported by
factual evidence and ask for adjustment.
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Complaint Letters Example
Islamic University of Gaza
PO Box 108,
Gaza, Palestine
Majed Imran
Kan Yunis, Palestine
28, June, 2006
Attention: ECE Department Head
On June 16, I filed for an incomplete grade in the Power Systems course. All the
supporting items were attached which included a medical doctor report, medical
prescription, and the hospital check out papers.
On June 23 I received a denial for my incomplete application without any explanation.
I immediately contacted the department with a note explaining my situation. Not only
I received no explanation but also I was advised to just forget about it.
Please either send me a explanation for the denial or else advise me with the steps
and procedures that I need to take to fix this problem.
Sincerely,
Majed Imran
5th year Electrical Engineering student
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Correspondence Letter
The Correspondence Latter Can be:
 Good news Letter
 Bad news Letter
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Good News Letter
1. Good news
2. Explanation or facts
3. Goodwill
Example text page 150
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Good News Letter Example
Good News
Please accept our offer for the position of assistant
professor in the department of electrical
engineering at IUG.
Explanation
if the terms we discussed in the interview are
acceptable to you, please come in at 9:30 a.m. on
September 5, at that time we will ask you…....
Goodwill example
Everyone here at IUG is looking forward to working
with you. We all were very favorably impressed with
you during the interview
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Bad News Letters
 Buffer
 Bad
news
 Goodwill
Example text page 149
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Bad News Letters Example
Buffer
Thank you for your time and effort in applying for
the position of assistant
professor in the
department of electrical engineering at IUG
Bad News
Since we need someone who can assume the duties
here with experience, we have selected an applicant
with over ten years of experience.
Goodwill
I am sure that with your excellent college record
you will find a position in another University.
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Inquiry Letter
Two types:
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Provides benefit to the reader
Example: Asking about a product the company
recently advertised
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Provides benefits to the writer
Example: Asking the public utility for information
on energy-related project you are developing
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Inquiry Letter
Objective:
to obtain, within a reasonable period of time,
answers to specific questions.
Examples: text page, 327-329
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Sample Letter of Recommendation
XYZ Company
123 XYZ Way • New York City • NY • 12345
(123) 555-0000 • Fax (123) 555-0001
February 1, 2000
To Whom it May Concern:
I've been Holly Smith's manager for over six years. While I wish her only the best and fully understand that she
must advance her career, I'm truly sorry to see her go. It has been a pleasure having her on my team.
Holly is a professional technical writer of the highest caliber, who meticulously researches, formats, edits and
proofs her documents. I've received many compliments from customers who rely on Holly's
documentation. Management and personnel in tech support, engineering, technical training, and other
departments praise her work.
Holly is an innovative self-starter, who rarely needs supervision. She is punctual and typically exceeds
expectations. She handles pressure well, and will voluntarily work overtime and take work home to meet a
deadline. For example, we received a rush order from one of our customers for a complex product modification,
including critical user documentation. Holly not only made the extremely tight deadline, but beat it; yet she still
produced a stellar, technically-accurate addendum for the standard user manual. Sales, marketing, training and
engineering were quite pleased with Holly's performance in this crunch. Even our CEO was impressed, and our
customer was ecstatic.
This is just one example among many of Holly's superior skills and admirable work ethics.
Holly is an invaluable asset to any technical communications department, and I highly recommend hiring her. If
you'd like to discuss her attributes in more detail, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Sincerely,
[Signature]
John Doe
Manager, Technical Communications
Ext. 245,
[email protected]
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Resignation Letter Sample
[Your Name]
[Street • City • State • Zip Code]
[Phone # • Fax phone # • Messages phone # • Email]
[Date today]
[Recipient's name]
[Company name]
[Address]
Dear [Recipient's name]:
Please accept this letter as my formal notice of resignation from [Company name],
effective [date, two weeks from date above]. The associations I've made during
my employment here will truly be memorable for years to come.
I hope a two-week notice is sufficient for you to find a replacement for me. If I can
help to train my replacement or tie up any loose ends, please let me know.
Thank you very much for the opportunity to work here.
Sincerely,
[Sign here]
[Your name, title]
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Retirement Letter Sample
Your Name
Your Address
Your City, State, Zip Code
Your Phone Number
Your Email
Date
Name
Title
Organization
Address
City, State, Zip Code
Dear Mr./Ms. Last Name:
I would like to inform you that I am retiring from my position with Smith Agency, effective
August 1.
Thank you for the opportunities for professional and personal development that you have
provided me over the years. I have enjoyed working for the agency and appreciate the
support provided me during my tenure with the company.
While I look forward to enjoying my retirement, I will miss working for the company. If I
can be of any assistance during this transition, please let me know.
Your Signature
Your Typed Name
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It is time
for the new
assignment
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Assignment 7
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Write a cover letter for any (from internet,
newspaper,…) announced job. Need to include
the ad.
You bought something (computer, book,
electronic instrument) from the internet, when
you received it was not in good shape. Write a
complaint letter to the company.
Due Next Tuesday
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