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Below is a basic framework for your problem-solution speeches. I have not provided all of the data that you will need in your own sub-subpoints, making reference only the fact that in the sub-subpoints is where the data goes. I have also not gone into detail on the solution data, offering, once again, a framework for illustrating how your outlines should look. READ ALL THE WAY TO THE END OF THIS DOCUMENT AND FOLLOW EVERY INSTRUCTION!!!! Doctors Need to Practice More Than Just Medicine Attention Getter: The hip bone may be connected to the back bone, and the back bone connected to the neck bone, and the neck bone connected to the head bone, but when it comes to doctors’ communication with patients, the head and heart, and the mouth and the ears are rarely connected. Adaptation: As we grow older it would be nice to deal with doctors who know how to talk to us as people rather than simply as cases and body parts. Thesis: Medical Schools should require communication competency before awarding students their medical degree. Preview: I. Doctors cannot communicate effectively II. Medical schools should require communication courses Transition into next speaker (DO NOT include this statement on your outline.) BODY Individual Introduction (minus adaptation) Attention Purpose Preview (This will be an internal preview) I. Doctors cannot communicate effectively. A. They are inarticulate in expressing their ideas. 1. DATA 2. DATA B. They are ineffective listeners. 1. DATA 2. DATA C. They are ineffective in speaking in understandable language. 1. DATA 2. DATA D. They are ineffective in giving clear medical instructions. 1. DATA 2. DATA Conclusion: Internal Summary Transition into next speaker (Ditto above) Individual Introduction (minus adaptation) II. Medical Schools should require communication courses. A. Communication courses will train doctors to express themselves 1. DATA 2. DATA B. Communication courses will train doctors in effective listening. 1. DATA 2. DATA C. Communication courses will train doctors in how to effectively speak in understandable language. 1. DATA 2. DATA D. Communication courses will train doctors to effectively give medical instructions. 1. DATA 2. DATA Internal Summary Transition into final speaker (Ditto above again) Conclusion At a time when we are most vulnerable and in need of meaningful communication, our unavoidable times of illness, we are and will continue to be too often confronted with doctors who are ineffective communicators, bad listeners, and horrible instruction givers. Something must be done. By requiring communication courses before students are awarded their medical degrees, medical schools can take a significant step towards ameliorating this continuing problem, and thereby give each of us a chance to talk with a doctor who is clear and listen. It is then that the head and heart, the ear and the mouth will be connected. See NOTES on next page You notice that there is both a general introduction and a general conclusion. You must have these for the overall group presentation. I recommend one of you do the intro and the other the conclusion. Your individual speeches must also have an introduction and conclusion tailored to your particular speech (as in the problem main point or the solution main point) In these introductions you DO NOT need an adaptation statement since the relevance of the topic will be made known to us in the general introduction. Do not think you cannot have any more than four (4) subpoints. I just stopped there because these subpoints addressed the critical problems. It may be that you have five (5) sub’s or three (3), depending on how much you develop each point. But do notice that each point needs two (2) pieces of evidence. NOTE: do not simply list DATA on your outline. I have the DATA there as a label for what is supposed to be placed in that location. So, you would insert your actual data. You also see data under the solutions section of the outline. That is because none of us (me included) are experts on your topics. So we have no credibility in terms of proposing our own solutions. Thus, your proposed solutions must be based on what the experts say and that must be cited. Finally, do not type “transition to final speaker” on your turned-in outline. I put that sentence fragment there as direction for what you must insert into your outline and do in your speech. Thus, following the internal summary for your individual presentation, you will insert the statement you will use to transition to the next speaker.