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issue 61 习作
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61) People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered
its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree
with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In
developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which
adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain
how these examples shape your position.
I am in favour of the claim that people should consider the consequences thoroughly
before taking risky action. Because under the circumstance like adventure, if one is
not fully prepared, one may get hurt or even worse, one will die.
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Also, when one is going to conduct some financial investments, one need to review
its 指代不明 financial statements and use sophisticated models to calculate the risk,
断句 otherwise one will suffer great loss if the market change. However, the
statement may not be true under emergency situation when people take risky action
out of instinct. Outlined below is my explanation.
There is no doubt that adventures 不懂 缺少背景引入 are well known for high risk,
especially walking through the desert. Before setting out, you must bring maps,food,
clothes, water and some devices can purify the water, medicines and other survival
tools. If you underestimate the risk of desert, when you get lost, the charming desert
will become fatal. 例子不合适 没有体现出风险 Therefore, for most of the
adventurers, they would have planned for a long time, considering every possible
situation and danger and the according methods. Only when they feel the
preparation 搭配不当 can reduce the risk, they will start the journey.
It is also true that people need to assess the risk of the financial investments.
Apparently, the financial market is mutable, especially the price of stock fluctuating
every day. Without a comprehensive understanding of the stock, one may become
impecunious the next day. 例子展开不够 Thus, you can find out the successful
investors are always those who have reviewed the financial statements carefully
and calculated the risk before investing.
Nevertheless, when confronted the emergency, it is hard to analyse the
consequences because people take the risky action out of instinct. Being in danger,
the risky action can help the human body to release endorphins which is helpful for
people to perform physical act that are not possible under normal situation. 没有具
体例子 Such action may save people's life.
In conclusion, it is indispensable to consider the consequences before taking risky
actions like walking through the desert and conducting financial investment. But
when something emergent happen, people will do whatever they can without
considering the results.