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Peer Edit
Body Paragraph #1
Introduction
Assignment:
Writer:
Grader:
Does the writer…
Begin with title of novel, author, and genre
plus a hint about the essay/thesis
Provide at least 2-3 sentences of background
about the topic of the paper
Have a solid thesis statement as the last
sentence in the introduction paragraph
- Should include: W. Shakespeare,
Sonnet 29, what he does (device),
how the device creates the theme.
Have a topic sentence that directly connects
to the thesis’s device and theme
Provide enough context for supporting
example 1
Weave in a quote that supports the thesis
-correctly cited
Analyze how the device creates the theme
(Rename the quote, insert an analytical
verb, tie all back to the thesis)
Provide enough context for supporting
example 2
Weave in a quote that supports the thesis
-correctly cited
Analyze how the device creates the theme
(Rename the quote, insert an analytical
verb, tie all back to the thesis)
Use sophisticated vocabulary?
Overall
Use varied sentences?
Use proper grammar/spelling?
Use only 3rd person? Avoid “you”
Write with clarity?
Final Suggestions:
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