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“Review: Harry Potter and the Cursed Child Works Serious Magic on the West End Stage” Khairul Nizam Bin AB Rahman 1501981C Time Magazine’s “Review: Harry Potter and the Cursed Child Works Serious Magic on the West End Stage” Harry Potter and the Cursed Child is the eighth instalment to the Harry Potter saga On stage play instead of a movie on the silver screen Story is split into 2 parts – 5 hours long Huge opening and popularity Bring millennials interest toward theatrical arts Why This Article… • This article interests me because reading J.K Rowling’s Harry Potter was a huge part in my younger teenage years. • Cursed Child is a direct continuation of the stories. • Curious about the theatre industry Target Audience Young Adults & Teenagers • Short attention span • Easily frustrated/uninterested Web article should be Concise, Objective and Scannable. Article should adopt a “scan first, read later” format. Change of Article Title More concise and straightforward as it describes exactly what is in the article. Hyperlinks Added These hyperlinks were added to allow readers to find out more of each subject. Each link will redirect the user by opening a new window to a separate website regarding the subject. Reorganising the Article “Uncharitable” is changed with “secretive behaviour” “Negative word of mouth” switched to “spoilers” Reorganising the Article Unnecessary points were cut out “fiendishly complex narrative, and moves at a lick” to “long and complex narrative which is already fast-paced” Original Article: 863 words Adjusted Article: 382 words