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Lesson 40 (student pages 117–118) Correlative Conjunctions Objectives • To learn that correlative conjunctions always appear in pairs and that they connect words or groups of words • To identify correlative conjunctions in sentence context • To rewrite pairs of sentences as a single sentence with correlative conjunctions • To select the correct correlative conjunctions to complete sentences and then use the sentences to solve riddles Options for Completing the Lesson See page T10. Objectives • To learn that sentence diagrams with linking verbs look different from those with action verbs • To learn where to place predicate adjectives, predicate nouns, and adverbs in a sentence diagram Diagraming Linking Verbs Ask students what difference they see between the two model sentence diagrams. Elicit that in the sentence diagram with the action verb, the direct object is separated from the verb by a vertical line, and in the sentence diagram with the linking verb, the predicate noun is separated from the verb by a slanting line. Have students diagram the three sentences. 1 2 Hawks subject verb direct object 1 3 eat rodents 2 3 Diagraming Predicate Nouns and Predicate Adjectives Have students examine the examples. (Students should note that predicate nouns and predicate adjectives go after the linking verb, separated from the verb with a slanting line.) Then have students diagram the four sentences. 1 1 3 2 Ospreys are powerful 2 3 4. Carp are 6. osprey is hungry 5. bottom-feeders subject verb predicate adjective carp are orange 7. cry is shrill Its Talking Together Write several correlative conjunctions on index cards. Have student pairs pick a card and use the correlative conjunctions in sentences about favorite pets or about animals they have seen. (Example: I have both a dog and a cat.) (student pages 119–120) at Th Options for Checking Understanding See page T10. Diagram sentences e ur at m y an M Scaffolding for Students Acquiring English Inform students that they are going to read about pairs of animals that depend on each other for their survival. Read aloud the sentences in Part 1. Clarify the meanings of symbiotic, parasites, commensal, and mutual and of unfamiliar phrases, such as to build up immunity to. Call on volunteers to name the words that make up each correlative conjunction they identify. Ask others to identify the coordinating conjunctions in the remaining sentences. Have students work with an English-proficient partner to complete Part 2. Point out that they may have to delete some words and add others when they rewrite each sentence pair as one sentence. Model, using item 17. Have partners orally identify the correct correlative conjunctions for Part 3. Then have them answer each clue. (you) Diagraming Adverbs Recall with students that in sentence diagrams containing adjectives, the adjective is connected to the noun it modifies by a slanted line below the noun. Have students look at the example; point out that an adverb is connected to the verb it modifies by a slanted line below the verb. Have students diagram the three sentences. 1 2 osprey 3 circled 1 river 2 th 3 e 4 e wl slo Th Extra Practice Activity Assign the activity on page 238 for more practice. 4 y 4 5 5 11. Steelhead are trout 12. subject verb direct object article adverb steelhead inhabit streams l ta as co y an M e rg la Continued on page T46 t45 G / / Continued from page T45 Proofreading Steelhead are migratory 14. They are swimmers 15. I hooked steelhead 16. It fought po 13. we rfu l de a e rg la sp ce on er at ely I was disappointed It swam nt e es te am re st up 19. 18. co un e th steelhead was victor Th 17. d but I was impressed Practice Have student pairs diagram the practice sentences. Writing Sentences (student page 121) Tell students that the sentences in the top part of page 121 need to be revised so that they make sense. Read the first sentence aloud and call on a volunteer to tell why the sentence does not make sense. (The phrase that follows the subordinating conjunction although is misplaced.) Call on another volunteer to correct the sentence. (Although days grow longer after the winter solstice, springtime is still months away.) Then have students work independently or in pairs to correct the remaining sentences. Point out that there may be more than one way to revise each one. When the students have finished, encourage them to compare their revisions. Ask students to name the parts of a paragraph. (topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence) Then ask them to read the model paragraph at the bottom of the page and to identify the time-order words and the transition sentence (the fourth sentence). Point out that writers often use a transition sentence to go smoothly from one topic to the next; in the model paragraph, the transition sentence ties the topic of the first sentences (camping) to the topic of the last part of the paragraph (fishing). Writing a Paragraph (student page 122) Ask students to read aloud the instructions at the top of the page and then to write a paragraph using the sentences they revised on page 121. Tell students that they may need to add a transition sentence to make the sentences flow better. Encourage students to read aloud their completed paragraphs. Have students work independently to write their personal narratives in the space provided or on another sheet of paper. Remind them to check their work using the checklist at the bottom of the page. Scaffolding for Students Acquiring English Have students work with a partner who is fluent in English for the proofreading activities. Proofreading Others’ Writing Ask students to identify the topic of the report on page 123. (the miniature ecosystem within an acorn) Explain that the report contains several mistakes and that as they read, they should look for these mistakes. Review the Proofreading Marks chart and the examples. Remind students that these marks are used by professional writers to check their work before publication. Read the first sentence aloud. Discuss the error (believe is spelled incorrectly) and how it should be marked for correction. After they have completed the proofreading activity, ask volunteers to read each sentence aloud and to identify errors. Ask students to mark overlooked errors in another color. Note: Some errors can be corrected in more than one way. Proofreading Your Own Writing Proofreading Checklist for Unit 4 Ask students to select a recent piece of their own writing and to write the title of that piece at the top of the chart. Ask students to put a check mark next to each item in the checklist after they have checked it in their work. Students might first work independently and then trade papers with a partner to double-check each other’s work. You might model, or ask a student to model, using the Language Handbook (beginning on student page 269) to clarify a concept or rule. Also Remember… Remind students that capitalization and punctuation are important for clear writing. If necessary, help students use the Handbook to clarify when commas should be used and to review the use of capital letters. Your Own List Suggest that students look at the errors they did not find in the proofreading activity and add them to the checklist. Ask students to think about other kinds of errors they make and to add these to the checklist. Ask students to place this page in their writing portfolios. These pages may be used to assess students’ progress over the course of the year. t46 G (student pages 123–124) / /