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-1- Richard III By William Shakespeare Set scenes 2008 G.Mounsey 2007/8. -2- Assessment Focuses Your response to Shakespeare in the SAT exam will be assessed according to the following criteria: AF2 Can I find and quote information effectively? AF3 Can I read and interpret meaning beyond the obvious? AF4 Can I explain why writers choose to shape their work in a particular way? AF5 Can I explain why writers choose to use particular words and sentences? AF6 Can I explain the writer’s purpose, and how it achieved? The question on the SAT paper will focus on one of the following: Character and motivation Ideas, themes and issues The language of the text The text in performance G.Mounsey 2007/8. -3- Could you be as devious as Richard of Gloucester? To understand the scenes; we need to understand what kind of a person Richard is. Richard manipulates people, sometimes to gain power, sometimes to get his own way and sometimes for cruel fun. Imagine you want to be friends with a popular person (A) at school; not because you like them, but because you think that being seen with them will increase your own popularity. How far will you go to get what you want? Below is a questionnaire, put a tick next to the answer you think suits your personality! You know you will bump into (A) in the dinning hall at dinner. Will you: 1. Invent some stories in advance to tell (A) to impress them. 2. Stand close to them and hope they notice you. 3. Make it up as you go along. Once you are talking to them would you: 1. Tell (A) bad things about their friends to upset them. 2. Tell (A) how lucky they are to have such good mates. 3. Tell them how much you want to be their friend. If (A) becomes worried about something will you: 1. Pretend to be concerned about (A) and offer your support. 2. Let their oldest friends look after them. 3. Tell them some jokes. (A) comes to you unexpectedly with a problem will you: 1. Act as if you are deeply interested to gain their trust. 2. Listen politely to them and do nothing else. 3. Tell them not to worry there’s pizza for dinner. G.Mounsey 2007/8. -4- (A) is very angry and threatening to punch someone do you: 1. Calm them down and tell them what to do. 2. Go and warn the other person. 3. Go to the gym and get some boxing gloves. (A) seems to think you’re up to something do you: 1. Act upset at their lack of trust to gain their sympathy. 2. Admit you only want to know them for your own gain. 3. Tell them you never liked them anyway. (A) asks why do you like them anyway? Do you. 1. Throw a hissy fit to make (A) feel guilty for asking the question. 2. Tell them how great it is to be around them. 3. Say it’s because they smell of custard and it’s your favourite. You want to impress (A) with a story about your hols. Do you: 1. Invent the biggest most fantastic story ever. 2. Tell them the truth, you went to Skeggi. 3. Inform them school is the best holiday and you want to stay forever Add up how many of each number you got. Mainly 1- You are an excellent manipulator! You know what you want and how far you have to go to get it. Your friends really need to watch out. I would expect you would make an excellent King of Medieval England. Mainly 2- You are a little too kind to make it in the dangerous world of manipulation. However, you would probably make a good second in command to a real trickster. Although I still think your friends should keep an eye on you! Mainly 3- What a wimp! You are far too nice to survive in this manipulative world; you will be better off carrying out charity work and saving the planet. You are trustworthy and kind, not really cut out to be King or Queen. G.Mounsey 2007/8. -5- Act 1, Scene 2, lines 33 to 186 In this extract from RICHARD III, Richard, here called Gloucester, has decided he needs an acceptable wife to further his chances of becoming King. His choice of wife is LADY ANNE; unfortunately for him Richard has killed her husband and her father in law. This does not stop Richard who uses his skills of manipulation to pay court to Lady Anne. Oh, and just to make it more of a challenge, Richard chats her up as she takes her father-in-law’s body to be buried. G.Mounsey 2007/8. -6- Act 1, Scene 2, lines 33 to 186 Enter GLOUCESTER GLOUCESTER Stay, you that bear the corse, and set it down. 33 LADY ANNE What black magician conjures up this fiend, To stop devoted charitable deeds? GLOUCESTER Villains, set down the corse; or, by Saint Paul, I'll make a corse of him that disobeys. GENTLEMAN My lord, stand back, and let the coffin pass. GLOUCESTER Unmanner'd dog! stand thou, when I command: Advance thy halbert higher than my breast, 40 Or, by Saint Paul, I'll strike thee to my foot, And spurn upon thee, beggar, for thy boldness. LADY ANNE What, do you tremble? are you all afraid? Alas, I blame you not; for you are mortal, And mortal eyes cannot endure the devil. Avaunt, thou dreadful minister of hell! Thou hadst but power over his mortal body, His soul thou canst not have; therefore be gone. Corse = corpse, which is a…..? _______________ Halbert = spear Richard threatens to make a “corse” of the coffin bearers. What does he mean? ________________________________________ ________________________________________ Richard then makes a second threat, Write it in your own words. ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ Lady Anne is talking to several people in her next two speeches. Text mark with a * the lines that are directed to the different characters. Identify who she is talking to. 1___________________2___________________ _ What tone of voice do you think Gloucester GLOUCESTER (Richard) adopts here? Why? Sweet saint, for charity, be not so curst. ____________________________________ ____________________________________ LADY ANNE Foul devil, for God's sake, hence, and trouble us not; 50 ____________________________________ ____________________________________ For thou hast made the happy earth thy hell, Fill'd it with cursing cries and deep exclaims. Lady Anne hates Richard and curses him. If thou delight to view thy heinous deeds, Underline and draw an arrow to words that Behold this pattern of thy butcheries. show us: O, gentlemen, see, see! dead Henry's wounds Lady Anne thinks that: Open their congeal'd mouths and bleed afresh! o Richard should be ashamed of Blush, Blush, thou lump of foul deformity; himself. For 'tis thy presence that exhales this blood o Richard likes to see suffering. From cold and empty veins, where no blood dwells; Thy deed, inhuman and unnatural, 60 o The body has started to bleed. Provokes this deluge most unnatural. o Richard makes the world a nasty G.Mounsey 2007/8. place. o Richard is ugly o Evil things happen when he is around -7O God, which this blood madest, revenge his death! O earth, which this blood drink'st revenge his death! Either heaven with lightning strike the murderer dead, Or earth, gape open wide and eat him quick, As thou dost swallow up this good king's blood Which his hell-govern'd arm hath butchered! GLOUCESTER Lady, you know no rules of charity, 68 Which renders good for bad, blessings for curses. LADY ANNE Villain, thou know'st no law of God nor man: 70 No beast so fierce but knows some touch of pity. GLOUCESTER But I know none, and therefore am no beast. LADY ANNE O wonderful, when devils tell the truth! GLOUCESTER More wonderful, when angels are so angry. Vouchsafe, divine perfection of a woman, Of these supposed-evils, to give me leave, By circumstance, but to acquit myself. LADY ANNE Vouchsafe, defused infection of a man, For these known evils, but to give me leave, By circumstance, to curse thy cursed self. 80 GLOUCESTER Fairer than tongue can name thee, let me have Some patient leisure to excuse myself. LADY ANNE Fouler than heart can think thee, thou canst make No excuse current, but to hang thyself. GLOUCESTER By such despair, I should accuse myself. LADY ANNE And, by despairing, shouldst thou stand excused; For doing worthy vengeance on thyself, Which didst unworthy slaughter upon others. 88 Super important !!! Did Gloucester kill her husband, brother and father-in-law? Yes / No G.Mounsey 2007/8. What two things does Anne hope will happen to Richard? 1_______________________________ ________________________________ 2_______________________________ ________________________________ What feature of Richard’s appearance does she draw attention to? _____________________________________ Vouch safe = To accept or believe. Charity = forgiveness Acquit = prove innocent Richard attempts to confuse Lady Anne to allow him to manipulate her. While she says horrid things to him; he says complimentary things to her. With a partner re write line 68- 88 in your own words. (It has been started for you) G – Lady you don’t know how to forgive. When someone hurts you, you should be nice to them. L.A- Pig! You don’t know any rules; even dangerous animals show some pity. ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ ___________________________________ -8What does “say” mean in this context? (Note the question mark) We still use this term today. GLOUCESTER Say that I slew them not? ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________ LADY ANNE Why, then they are not dead: But dead they are, and devilish slave, by thee. 90 GLOUCESTER I did not kill your husband. LADY ANNE Why, then he is alive. GLOUCESTER Nay, he is dead; and slain by Edward's hand. LADY ANNE In thy foul throat thou liest: Queen Margaret saw Thy murderous falchion smoking in his blood; The which thou once didst bend against her breast, But that thy brothers beat aside the point. GLOUCESTER I was provoked by her slanderous tongue, which laid their guilt upon my guiltless shoulders. LADY ANNE Thou wast provoked by thy bloody mind. 100 Which never dreamt on aught but butcheries: Didst thou not kill this king? What is Gloucester’s version of the murder? _____________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ _________________________ Lady Anne’s version. o You were going to stab the Queen. o You killed him because you are a psycho who dreams about killing people. o Your brothers stopped you killing the queen o Queen Margaret caught you stabbing him with your sword. Text mark the lines that correspond to these. Draw arrows to them. GLOUCESTER I grant ye. LADY ANNE Dost grant me, hedgehog? then, God grant me too Thou mayst be damned for that wicked deed! O, he was gentle, mild, and virtuous! GLOUCESTER The fitter for the King of heaven, that hath him. LADY ANNE He is in heaven, where thou shalt never come. GLOUCESTER Let him thank me, that holp to send him thither; For he was fitter for that place than earth. G.Mounsey 2007/8. Copy and explain Lady Anne’s insult. ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ -9LADY ANNE And thou unfit for any place but hell. GLOUCESTER Yes, one place else, if you will hear me name it. 110 LADY ANNE Some dungeon. GLOUCESTER Your bed-chamber. LADY ANNE I'll rest betide the chamber where thou liest! GLOUCESTER So will it, madam till I lie with you. Plantagenet = the Royal family name LADY ANNE I hope so. GLOUCESTER I know so. But, gentle Lady Anne, To leave this keen encounter of our wits, And fall somewhat into a slower method, Is not the causer of the timeless deaths Of these Plantagenets, Henry and Edward, As blameful as the executioner? What two lines reveal Richard’s intention? Underline and draw arrows to them. What is Richard’s intention? __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ Richard has confused Lady Anne. What does she think Richard is talking about? __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ Richard thinks they should stop arguing and calm down. Y/ N Richard enjoys arguing with Anne and wishes to continue Y/N Which of these interpretations is correct? Text mark the lines that show this. LADY ANNE Thou art the cause, and most accursed effect. 120 GLOUCESTER Your beauty was the cause of that effect; Your beauty: which did haunt me in my sleep To undertake the death of all the world, So I might live one hour in your sweet bosom. Do Not Forget- Gloucester and Richard III are the same person. Whose fault is it that Richard killed Henry and Edward? ____________________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ What made him do it? ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ For HWK find out what a Basilisk is. How did it kill people? G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 10 - Imagine you are Richard writing a Valentine’s card LADY ANNE to Lady Anne. If I thought that, I tell thee, homicide, Look at the lines below the love hearts. These nails should rend that beauty from my cheeks. write them In your own words as message in the card. ( A start has been made for you) GLOUCESTER These eyes could never endure sweet beauty's wreck; You should not blemish it, if I stood by: As all the world is cheered by the sun, So I by that; it is my day, my life. 130 LADY ANNE Black night o'ershade thy day, and death thy life! GLOUCESTER Curse not thyself, fair creature thou art both. LADY ANNE I would I were, to be revenged on thee. GLOUCESTER It is a quarrel most unnatural, To be revenged on him that loveth you. LADY ANNE It is a quarrel just and reasonable, To be revenged on him that slew my husband. GLOUCESTER He that bereft thee, lady, of thy husband, Did it to help thee to a better husband. LADY ANNE His better doth not breathe upon the earth. 140 GLOUCESTER He lives that loves thee better than he could. LADY ANNE Name him. GLOUCESTER Plantagenet. G.Mounsey 2007/8. Darling Anne, My eyes couldn’t stand to see your face spoiled, you would not mark it if I was there! ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ Now write lady Anne’s reply in your own words. ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ - 11 LADY ANNE Why, that was he. GLOUCESTER The selfsame name, but one of better nature. LADY ANNE Where is he? On this page Shakespeare uses language to show how Richard/Gloucester manipulates Lady Anne by slowly twisting her words. Follow the numbered text and in each box illustrate how Richard slowly turns insults into positive words. (1) GLOUCESTER Here. (She spitteth at him) Why dost thou spit at me? LADY ANNE (1) Would it were mortal poison, for thy sake! (2) GLOUCESTER (2) Never came poison from so sweet a place. LADY ANNE (3) Never hung poison on a fouler toad. Out of my sight! thou dost infect my eyes. GLOUCESTER (4) Thine eyes, sweet lady, have infected mine. 150 (3) LADY ANNE (5) Would they were basilisks, to strike thee dead! Shakespeare uses images about eye sight in this section find them, highlight and explain themHint one refers to a previous HWK. 1. ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ 2. ______________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ 3. ______________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ ____________________________ G.Mounsey 2007/8. (4) (5) - 12 GLOUCESTER I would they were, that I might die at once; For now they kill me with a living death. Those eyes of thine from mine have drawn salt tears, Shamed their aspect with store of childish drops: These eyes that never shed remorseful tear, No, when my father York and Edward wept, To hear the piteous moan that Rutland made When black-faced Clifford shook his sword at him; Nor when thy warlike father, like a child 160 Told the sad story of my father's death, And twenty times made pause to sob and weep, That all the standers-by had wet their cheeks Like trees bedash'd with rain: in that sad time My manly eyes did scorn an humble tear; And what these sorrows could not thence exhale, Thy beauty hath, and made them blind with weeping. I never sued to friend nor enemy; My tongue could never learn sweet smoothing word; But now thy beauty is proposed my fee, 170 My proud heart sues, and prompts my tongue to speak. (She looks scornfully at him) Teach not thy lips such scorn, for they were made For kissing, lady, not for such contempt. If thy revengeful heart cannot forgive, Lo, here I lend thee this sharp-pointed sword; Which if thou please to hide in this true bosom. And let the soul forth that adoreth thee, I lay it naked to the deadly stroke, And humbly beg the death upon my knee. 180 (He lays his breast open: she offers at it with his sword) Nay, do not pause; for I did kill King Henry, But 'twas thy beauty that provoked me. Nay, now dispatch; 'twas I that stabb'd young Edward, But 'twas thy heavenly face that set me on. Here she lets fall the sword Underline all the references to tears and crying in this speech. Find two adjectives to describe crying. 1_______________________________ 2_______________________________ Find the simile Shakespeare uses and label it. Richard tries to get sympathy by explaining two occasions when he could not cry, what were they? 1)_______________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ____________________ 2)______________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ ________________________________ _____________________ Text mark the lines that correspond to these interpretations. I killed the King because of your beauty. Don’t make your lips look like that. I killed your husband as well If you can’t forgive me stab me in the heart. Kill me or marry me. Take up the sword again, or take up me. LADY ANNE Arise, dissembler: though I wish thy death, I will not be the executioner. 186 Richard loves Anne 4 eva 100% ? G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 13 Task 1 Richard uses the opposites of the insults Lady Anne uses to confuse her and make her see him in a better light. Find the words Richard uses after the following insults and explain what Richard’s reply means, Insult: No beast so fierce but knows some touch of pity. Quotation 1 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Insult: Black night o'ershade thy day, and death thy life! Quotation 2 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Insult: Out of my sight! thou dost infect my eyes. Quotation 3 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 14 - Task 2 Essay style question. In this scene Gloucester manipulates and confuses Lady Anne so that she will marry him. Explain how Shakespeare builds the tension in this scene. Consider: What is happening at the start of the scene. How Gloucester uses the opposite of what Anne says to confuse her. Dramatic techniques used by Shakespeare. The things that Richard has done to Lady Anne’s family. The excuses he makes up. TASK 3 Imagine that you are creating a film production of this scene. Draw a storyboard to show how you would film the wooing of Lady Anne. Think about how you would use camera angles, sound effects, costume, setting and lighting to create a tense atmosphere. Write a paragraph explaining your ideas. G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 15 - Act 4, Scene 4, lines 199 to 342 In the next extract GLOUCESTER is now RICHARD III, his wife, LADY ANNE has died in mysterious circumstances. Richard is at war to protect his crown Richard now needs another suitable wife to help him maintain his hold on the throne, he selects his niece Princess Elizabeth and sets about manipulating her mother, QUEEN ELIZABETH, to help him. Once more Richard has problems; he has murdered Queen Elizabeth’s two young sons, he has murdered her brotherin-law, his own brother! And he has murdered most of her friends. Once more Richard loves a challenge! G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 16 - Act 4, Scene 4, lines 199 to 342 KING RICHARD III Stay, madam; I must speak a word with you. What do you think Elizabeth thinks Richard intends to do? ____________________________________ QUEEN ELIZABETH I have no more sons of the royal blood For thee to murder: for my daughters, Richard, 200 They shall be praying nuns, not weeping queens; And therefore level not to hit their lives. KING RICHARD III You have a daughter call'd Elizabeth, Virtuous and fair, royal and gracious. QUEEN ELIZABETH And must she die for this? O, let her live, And I'll corrupt her manners, stain her beauty; Slander myself as false to Edward's bed; Throw over her the veil of infamy: So she may live unscarr'd of bleeding slaughter, I will confess she was not Edward's daughter. KING RICHARD III Wrong not her birth, she is of royal blood. 211 QUEEN ELIZABETH To save her life, I'll say she is not so. KING RICHARD III Her life is only safest in her birth. QUEEN ELIZABETH And only in that safety died her brothers. KING RICHARD III Lo, at their births good stars were opposite. QUEEN ELIZABETH No, to their lives bad friends were contrary. KING RICHARD III All unavoided is the doom of destiny. QUEEN ELIZABETH True, when avoided grace makes destiny: My babes were destined to a fairer death, If grace had bless'd thee with a fairer life. 220 G.Mounsey 2007/8. ____________________________________ Corrupt-spoil / damage. Slander-tell lies about someone or something Identify the things Elizabeth will do to protect her daughter. Underline them. Then write them in your own words. 1)__________________________________ ____________________________________ 2)__________________________________ ____________________________________ 3)__________________________________ ____________________________________ Elizabeth cannot accuse Richard of killing her Sons out right, or She would be in danger. How does she use the word safety to hint that her sons were killed to stop them becoming Kings of England. _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ _____________________________________ - 17 KING RICHARD III You speak as if that I had slain my cousins. QUEEN ELIZABETH Cousins, indeed; and by their uncle cozen'd Of comfort, kingdom, kindred, freedom, life. Whose hand soever lanced their tender hearts, Thy head, all indirectly, gave direction: No doubt the murderous knife was dull and blunt Till it was whetted on thy stone-hard heart, To revel in the entrails of my lambs. But that still use of grief makes wild grief tame, My tongue should to thy ears not name my boys 230 Till that my nails were anchor'd in thine eyes; And I, in such a desperate bay of death, Like a poor bark, of sails and tackling reft, Rush all to pieces on thy rocky bosom. Cozen-an archaic(old) word for cheat. Whetted-sharpened Elizabeth uses a metaphor to say that no one wanted to harm her children till Richard came along. Underline and draw a line to it. She also uses a homophone to accuse Richard of robbing her sons. Underline and draw a line to it. Highlight all the imagery associated with Sailing boats used here What simile does she use to describe herself? ------------------------------------------------------ Shakespeare uses many literary techniques in Queen Elizabeth’s speech. Write a new version of the speech (line 222 to 234) you must include. What Richard has done. What Elizabeth cannot do What she wants to do. ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 18 - KING RICHARD III Madam, so thrive I in my enterprise And dangerous success of bloody wars, As I intend more good to you and yours, Than ever you or yours were by me wrong'd! Which three words hint that Richard’s war is going well? 1. _________________________ 2. _________________________ 3. _________________________ QUEEN ELIZABETH What good is cover'd with the face of heaven, To be discover'd, that can do me good? 240 A KING RICHARD III The advancement of your children, gentle lady. B Match the statement’s to the correct letter on the script and write the characters name below it. A What could happen now to make me feel better QUEEN ELIZABETH Up to some scaffold, there to lose their heads? C I love your daughter KING RICHARD III No, to the dignity and height of honour The high imperial type of this earth's glory. D I can do a lot for your kids. QUEEN ELIZABETH Flatter my sorrows with report of it; F Tell me what state, what dignity, what honour, Canst thou demise to any child of mine? G KING RICHARD III Even all I have; yea, and myself and all, Will I withal endow a child of thine; H So in the Lethe of thy angry soul 250 Thou drown the sad remembrance of those wrongs Which thou supposest I have done to thee. I QUEEN ELIZABETH Be brief, lest that be process of thy kindness Last longer telling than thy kindness' date. J KING RICHARD III Then know, that from my soul I love thy daughter. K QUEEN ELIZABETH My daughter's mother thinks it with her soul. KING RICHARD III What do you think? QUEEN ELIZABETH That thou dost love my daughter from thy soul: So from thy soul's love didst thou love her brothers; And from my heart's love I do thank thee for it. 260 G.Mounsey 2007/8. Be quick, in case your explanation of your kindness lasts longer than the actual kindness. Kill them, you mean? I can give promote them to the highest jobs. Tell me what will you do for my children? Cheer me up with your idea. I will give everything I have to a child of yours. Forget everything I am supposed to have done to you. Does this line make you think Elizabeth believes him, if not why not? ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ - 19 - KING RICHARD III Be not so hasty to confound my meaning: I mean, that with my soul I love thy daughter, And mean to make her queen of England. Woo- chat up Sweet talk. Humour-temperfeelings QUEEN ELIZABETH Say then, who dost thou mean shall be her king? KING RICHARD III Even he that makes her queen who should be else? QUEEN ELIZABETH What, thou? KING RICHARD III I, even I: what think you of it, madam? Line 261 to 270. What is Richard’s plan? __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ What does he want Elizabeth to tell him? __________________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________ QUEEN ELIZABETH How canst thou woo her? KING RICHARD III That would I learn of you, As one that are best acquainted with her humour. Draw and label pictures of the things Elizabeth tells him to send to her daughter. QUEEN ELIZABETH And wilt thou learn of me? KING RICHARD III Madam, with all my heart. 270 QUEEN ELIZABETH Send to her, by the man that slew her brothers, A pair of bleeding-hearts; thereon engrave Edward and York; then haply she will weep: Therefore present to her--as sometime Margaret Did to thy father, steep'd in Rutland's blood,-A handkerchief; which, say to her, did drain The purple sap from her sweet brother's body And bid her dry her weeping eyes therewith. If this inducement force her not to love, Send her a story of thy noble acts; 280 Tell her thou madest away her uncle Clarence, Her uncle Rivers; yea, and, for her sake, Madest quick conveyance with her good aunt Anne. KING RICHARD III Come, come, you mock me; this is not the way To win our daughter. G.Mounsey 2007/8. What is “purple sap” a metaphor for? _________________________________________ What does she mean by “madest away”? __________________________________________ __________________________________________ Who was “aunt Anne”? __________________________________________ __________________________________________ Write a modern equivalent for Richard’s reply. ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ - 20 QUEEN ELIZABETH There is no other way Unless thou couldst put on some other shape, And not be Richard that hath done all this. KING RICHARD III Say that I did all this for love of her. QUEEN ELIZABETH Nay, then indeed she cannot choose but hate thee, Having bought love with such a bloody spoil. Several words have been removed from Richard’s speech-use your judgement to replace them with modern equivalents below. Fixed your children make mistakes make your family bigger she’ll give birth trouble Was banished bad memories paid for Young beaten stupid my children Lover’s Look, what is done cannot be now ________: Men shall ________________ sometimes, Which after hours give leisure to repent. If I did take the kingdom from your sons, KING RICHARD III To make amends, Ill give it to your daughter. Look, what is done cannot be now amended: 291 If I have kill'd ______________________, Men shall deal unadvisedly sometimes, To ________________________, I will beget Which after hours give leisure to repent. _____________ of your blood upon your daughter If I did take the kingdom from your sons, A grandam's name is little less in love To make amends, Ill give it to your daughter. Than is the doting title of a mother; 300 If I have kill'd the issue of your womb, They are as children but one step below, To quicken your increase, I will beget Even of your mettle, of your very blood; Mine issue of your blood upon your daughter Of an one pain, ____________________________, A grandam's name is little less in love for whom you bid like sorrow. Than is the doting title of a mother; 300 Your children were _____________ to your youth, They are as children but one step below, But mine shall be a comfort to your age. Even of your mettle, of your very blood; The loss you have is but a son being king, Of an one pain, save for a night of groans And by that loss your daughter is made queen. Endured of her, for whom you bid like sorrow. I cannot make you what amends I would, Your children were vexation to your youth, Therefore accept such kindness as I can. But mine shall be a comfort to your age. Dorset your son, that with a fearful soul The loss you have is but a son being king, __________________________________________ And by that loss your daughter is made queen. This fair alliance quickly shall call home I cannot make you what amends I would, To high promotions and great dignity: Therefore accept such kindness as I can. 310 The king, that calls your beauteous daughter wife. Dorset your son, that with a fearful soul Familiarly shall call thy Dorset brother; Leads discontented steps in foreign soil, Again shall you be mother to a king, This fair alliance quickly shall call home And all the ______________________________ To high promotions and great dignity: with double riches of content. The king, that calls your beauteous daughter wife. What! we have many goodly days to see: Familiarly shall call thy Dorset brother; The liquid drops of tears that you have shed Again shall you be mother to a king, Shall come again, transform'd to orient pearl, And all the ruins of distressful times _________________________________________ Repair'd with double riches of content. Of ten times double gain of happiness. What! we have many goodly days to see: 320 Go, then my mother, to thy daughter go The liquid drops of tears that you have shed Make bold her bashful years with your experience; Shall come again, transform'd to orient pearl, Prepare her ears to hear a ______________ tale Advantaging their loan with interest Put in her ____________heart the aspiring flame Of ten times double gain of happiness. Of golden sovereignty; acquaint the princess Go, then my mother, to thy daughter go With the sweet silent hours of marriage joys Make bold her bashful years with your experience; And when this arm of mine hath _______________ Prepare her ears to hear a wooer's tale The petty rebel, __________________Buckingham, G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 21 Put in her tender heart the aspiring flame Of golden sovereignty; acquaint the princess With the sweet silent hours of marriage joys And when this arm of mine hath chastised 331 The petty rebel, dull-brain'd Buckingham, Bound with triumphant garlands will I come And lead thy daughter to a conqueror's bed; To whom I will retail my conquest won, And she shall be sole victress, Caesar's Caesar. QUEEN ELIZABETH What were I best to say? her father's brother Would be her lord? or shall I say, her uncle? Or, he that slew her brothers and her uncles? Under what title shall I woo for thee, 340 That God, the law, my honour and her love, Can make seem pleasing to her tender years? G.Mounsey 2007/8. In your own words sum up Queen Elizabeth’s feelings in her final lines. ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ ______________________________ - 22 Task 1 In this scene Queen Elizabeth, unlike Lady Anne, uses very vivid imagery when talking to Richard. Find three quotations that demonstrate Queen Elizabeth’s distrust of Richard. Give a short explanation of why you have chosen each quote. Quotation 1 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Quotation 2 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ Quotation 3 “_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________” Explanation____________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 23 Task 2. Using quotations from the script, explain what happens in this scene. Include; The reasons the characters have for what they say. What way do you think the lines would be said e.g. “Richard spoke as if he did not care about anything” How has Richard changed from the first scene. How different Elizabeth is to Anne. Task 3. How has Gloucester’s character changed since he became Richard III? Give evidence to back up your ideas. G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 24 SATs practice questions. Task 1 – Text in performance Act 1, Scene 2, lines 33 to 186 Act 4, Scene 4, lines 199 to 342 Once Richard has started to twist the truth he cannot stop. In the first extract he tries to convince lady Anne he loves her; in the second he tries to convince Queen Elizabeth to make her daughter marry him. Imagine you are directing a class performance of these extracts. What advice would you give to the actors playing Gloucester/Richard III, Lady Anne and Queen Elizabeth to help them show the difference in relationship between them in the two extracts? Support your ideas by referring to both extracts. 18 marks Task 2 – Character and motivation Act 1, Scene 2, lines 33 to 186 Act 4, Scene 4, lines 199 to 342 Once Richard has started to twist the truth he cannot stop. In the first extract he tries to convince lady Anne he loves her; in the second he tries to convince Queen Elizabeth to make her daughter marry him. Explain how the relationship between Gloucester and Lady Anne is different to that between Richard III and Queen Elizabeth in these extracts. Support your ideas by referring to both extracts. G.Mounsey 2007/8. 18 marks - 25 - Top Tips - How to Write a Successful SATs answer on Richard III DO . . . Read the question carefully: highlight key words and use them to plan your answer Look back at the scenes quickly – SCAN them and highlight useful quotations that you will use. Plan your answer – use a brainstorm or bullet points to plan your key points. Number them in the order you will do them. Write a brief opening where you start to answer the question with a BIG IDEA – Use POINT – EVIDENCE – EXPLORE- LINK every time you make a point. Make sure you balance you time so that you don’t say too much about one scene and then don’t have enough time to write about the later scenes. Check your spelling and punctuation carefully. DON’T . . . Re-tell the story of Richard III When you use a quotation don’t use your explanation to rewrite it in your own words – instead explain what the quotation reveals about the character, how it builds drama or how it uses interesting language. Don’t try to write about all the scenes – you haven’t got enough time!!! Pick out details that help you write a good answer to your question – ignore the rest. G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 26 - Marking criteria for reading Shakespeare. Band Reading Criteria Marks Available 1 A few simple facts and opinions about what characters say or do in these extracts, though some misunderstanding may be evident. Parts of the extracts are retold or copied and answers may be only partly relevant. 1,2,3 2 A little explanation showing some awareness. Comments relevant, but mainly at the level of plot. Some broad references to how the characters speak. A few words or phrases are mentioned although the selection is not always appropriate. 4,5,6 3 Some general understanding, although points may be undeveloped. Some limited awareness of the language used, with points illustrated by relevant references to the text. 4 Some discussion though the same quality may not be evident throughout. Awareness of characters’ use of language and its effects, with ideas developed by relevant references to the text. 10,11,12 5 Clear focus on the given question. An understanding of use of language. Well-chosen references to the text justify comments as part of overall argument. 13,14,15 6 Coherent analysis. Appreciation of the effects of language to explore ideas. Comments and precisely selected references to the text integrated into well-developed argument. 16,17,18 G.Mounsey 2007/8. 7,8,9 - 27 - G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 28 - G.Mounsey 2007/8. - 29 - G.Mounsey 2007/8.