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“Review: Harry Potter and the Cursed
Child Works Serious Magic on the
West End Stage”
Khairul Nizam Bin AB Rahman 1501981C
Time Magazine’s
“Review: Harry Potter and the Cursed Child Works Serious Magic on the
West End Stage”
 Harry Potter and the Cursed Child is the eighth instalment to the Harry Potter saga
 On stage play instead of a movie on the silver screen
 Story is split into 2 parts – 5 hours long
 Huge opening and popularity
 Bring millennials interest toward theatrical arts
Why This Article…
• This article interests me because reading J.K Rowling’s Harry Potter
was a huge part in my younger teenage years.
• Cursed Child is a direct continuation of the stories.
• Curious about the theatre industry
Target Audience
Young Adults & Teenagers
• Short attention span
• Easily frustrated/uninterested
Web article should be Concise, Objective and Scannable. Article should adopt a “scan first, read later” format.
Change of Article Title
More concise and straightforward as it describes exactly what is in
the article.
Hyperlinks Added
These hyperlinks were added to allow readers to find out more of each subject. Each
link will redirect the user by opening a new window to a separate website regarding
the subject.
Reorganising the Article
“Uncharitable” is changed with “secretive behaviour”
“Negative word of mouth” switched to “spoilers”
Reorganising the Article
Unnecessary points were cut out
“fiendishly complex narrative, and moves at a
lick” to “long and complex narrative which is
already fast-paced”
Original Article: 863 words
Adjusted Article: 382 words