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The Iowa Review Volume 1 Issue 3 Summer 1970 Louise Bogan Paul Ramsey Follow this and additional works at: http://ir.uiowa.edu/iowareview Part of the Creative Writing Commons Recommended Citation Ramsey, Paul. "Louise Bogan." The Iowa Review 1.3 (1970): 116-124. Web. Available at: http://ir.uiowa.edu/iowareview/vol1/iss3/36 This Contents is brought to you for free and open access by Iowa Research Online. It has been accepted for inclusion in The Iowa Review by an authorized administrator of Iowa Research Online. For more information, please contact [email protected]. Article 36 Louise Paul Bogan Ramsey is a great lyric poet. Louise Bogan Greatness in poetry is hard to discuss, especially in the lyric. It is comparatively easy to show that Bogan is a very good poet: powerful in feeling, surprising and chaste in diction, strong in structure, masterly in imagery and rhythm, important in themes; but greatness in the lyric is as and impact profundity and so simple almost to defy scrutiny. The thing own note is in the struck; happens; Bogan's the language where her . . . Music / "terrible arrive poems time and in the hill" granite and sounds, we there are, again. Lyrics are to be judged by depth and perfecting, not range, yet the reach of her work is more than its slightness in quantity might suggest. She writes mostly on the traditional lyric subjects, themselves no small range, of love, time, comprising passion, grief, nature, death, music, stoicism, art limitation, (not overmuch), dreams. She also has done some very fine light verse with its own memory, and to to have of special quartz wryness, manages say something psychiatrists, malevolent cocktail parties, Jonathan Swift, St. Christopher. It is the saint who is most the stranger. He is tough and able (arrived from a is almost wholly fresco), an infrequent sort of visitor to her poems. Religion lacking in her work, except in hints, including the brilliant but puzzling hints of the near light verse of "I Saw Eternity," and the spirits who do appear ("Spir are dark ones. it's Song," "The Daemon") Perhaps the lack is an ingredient in the grief which persistently and underdwells her poems. profoundly Her is talent unique so well. Her poems ending endings no I know poems. startle and compose, and in at least these others: "Betrothed," ened "The Man," "Winter "Kept," Swan." "Late," other in most poet of who the ends poems "Come Break with Time," "To Romantic," Be Sung on so many I discuss, "The Fright and the Water," Her rhythms are brilliant, unique, and work in a variety of kinds: the short-line free verse of "The Dragonfly"; the free verse, varied in line length, often near or in rising rhythm, of "Summer Wish"; the mostly rising rhythm with five strong stresses of "Didactic Piece," one of her best poems; the long-line free verse, quite different in the two poems, of "Baroque Comment" and "After the Persian"; the special falling rhythms of "Train Tune"; and her "Poem in Prose," mostly, despite its title, in rising rhythm with some counterposing with falling rhythms. These poems, all done well, ment, but it is no accident Theodore Roethke's words show a very unusual range of metrical accomplish that her most powerful poems are work in which, in about these poems, the "ground beat of the great 116 University of Iowa is collaborating with JSTOR to digitize, preserve, and extend access to The Iowa Review ® www.jstor.org tradition can be heard." The great teenth century chosen: well near accentual-syllabics, some of her best to be accents) The as heard poems is tradition in heard other are words some and are near, strong norm. the than ways since the late six Roethke's the pressure of grouped, (especially from changes and iambics, primarily are accentual-syllabic, for her pulsing variations enough verse in English tradition is in metrical, diction, and image, thought, yet always heard afresh. She does not violate the dignity of the com attitudes or freakish privacies, yet has something monplace by self-indulgent to say. distinct can She even write about greatly "Men Loved Wholly a rare emotion, as achievement, in the superb Beyond Wisdom": Men beyond wisdom loved wholly Have staff without the the banner. Like a fire in a dry thicket within Rising Is the women's love men so subtle Heart, a marvel What To and now, trembling, to be wise, never love eyes return. must in this manner! To be quiet in the fern Like a thing gone dead and still, Listening to the prisoned cricket Shake its terrible, dissembling Music in the granite hill. The poem ful. known The visions of the poem. Thus the images staff of yet feeling: and frustration Shakespeare's precision us what tell is felt; the is banner just fern, thickets, dry the by and images is felt what with known is the the subject of a very important kind. Of the and potent, images have an immediately fire, terrible and fear sonnets is reached is new knowledge the poem without in only tensions and reflection. The other reaches truths, than here. The fiercer precision rhythms. is destructive says that passion are These prison, a moment's requiring seen propriety yet lead to far granite. The poem is, in logical shape, a dilemma. A disjunction is offered, this or that, each alternative leading to the tragic. The poem does not say or imply whether other alternatives closure, a truth completeness?there of great moral importance. the Metrically of hers poems ing distance are variations heard 117 is poem as means?and surely as magnificent, are near which more Criticism than To would move are occur further says in any several norms. in its of her in more those involved poem and turns to iambics from It poems. principles This traditional expectancies, sense profound of human resolution detail. The traditional of the accentual-syllabic variations. exists tragedy in some metrical I shall discuss poem other but exist, of stays of sexuality, is one the to apply within hear in the last verse. The meters but as much still modern are norm. the verse free near-iambic The pattern vv. 2, 3, traditionally: iamb trochee, but of strength more much a than an trochaic in unusual are ways, two the sixth to norm the appears "The of lines, the between with trochees, The poem iambic truncated the again and form, the the is other commas; after rhythm rocking that the some narrative "a the of passion strict iambic tetrameter rhythmical being changes are the the and subject The passion. Castitatem" structured verse free The rhythms without iambics and in (parallel in beautiful are have. in mind tetrameter, an itself intense, "Ad poems. progress) of flame." breeze short-line lax, mixing can the kinds separately is in analogy restraint and by feeling, to real It is a good poem, well and intense subtilizes a bear between, struggle in a number of her indirectly unforgettable is about Alchemist" once and some the best scansion is foot by foot, would movement iambic by a control distinctions especially but comparatively intensities the flesh. in enough bacchiac sounds. the theme. nice in the often the poems occurs when often varies (light followed in her more straight of, or directly with achieving occurs verse, together frequently The bacchiac English times grouping renews and contrast deals directly with imagery, delicate Several with trochees, scans as are empowered extends poem; vocations the is sounded, what that subject as verse rhythms passion of the in foot feature. stresses most she which by pattern. strong last verse begins falling but turns back to resolving iambs; its shape, trochee in the first place, is traditional. The struggle against the subsides; Such iambic comparative trochaic pattern back Shifting pattern). scans last comma. The iambic with an the a breaks occurs in verse eight, of which apply. It iamb feminine ending (others, acceptable line next the means of because and grouping rhythm, unusual singular and trimeter the violate a line falling substitution of accentual-syllabic. scansion, scansion would iamb bacchiac The a most strongs), to be poetry correct in first breaks across vibrancy scan verses following scans as trochee trochee of strength and the line, iambic two the from the standard procedures by her a substitution and forth from rising to falling often rising 13. The 9, 10, is not of because the strength, trimeter, 7, 5, effect and "loved" lose is the poem 4, the to is does, of with struggle except the some for traditional important too perhaps passion truncated measure; mimetic intensely its sudden thresh." The poem is about the failure of the will to govern yet displays, in opposition to that theme, will governing passion to a in "ceased passion, single continued majestic poetic are legion nowadays?about our in are, experience lax and disordered ferior The to of more styles consistency and rhythms, is the which Most poem. poems?they of the control or understanding than but are poem Bogan's same for the of written displays, reason much in poems. Bogan's view with metaphor the impossibility the poem is stoic, anti-rational, pessimistic, and at least approaches If "flesh" is not the sole reality, it is the controlling one, and the physicalism. mind submits. Since I believe that all four of these views have something seriously wrong 118 with them, my admiration needs explaining. It will not do to separate aesthetics and one since belief, or of experience" of patterns What validates is a monism, becomes neither nor politeness the its is poem not all powerful; to is Nor as say, she this here and in some thing, accord with be imaginative than reality as better dissolve. can truth, partial be and poem or offering, but controlled; logical problems relevant, and fail; reasonings in belief seen. deeply can experience be is not all there is to say; but there is that That other one should reject the be are there can rhetoric grim and must be met honestly. much more and and that to be consistent than the beliefs which expressed and judged in poems imaginative by are that such patterns imply Tolerance Passion one for since, belief, moving can themselves patterns imaginative to insist are moved second that we thing, or across under is to beliefs experience valid liefs. against more is, of patterns are attitudes the by, it (simply) do to appeal to "imaginative patterns a For more as like experience that others, worse. the is moved to, responds in and through the forms, nor will of her necessarily poems show. beautifully a exemplifying, truth. general The al chemist in the poem is one (one individual) who seeks a passion of the mind and finds unmysterious flesh. Others may successfully go beyond the submission to passion, for instance the speaker in "Knowledge," who knows the limits of and passion success an its which experience to seeks treasures, goes learn beyond each verse the other stanza, but the parallelism does is over-structured, "Knowledge" "Trees yerses quantity next-to-last the verse ation of the physical, of and speaks very rare in since respect is a grouping bacchiac trochee poem's verse corresponding is the knowledge the poem turns reflection of my from the the world. perception It is one the despite in fact she is one favorites work; Bogan's of and Campion the but Herrick; her best the strange known poems, is writing in this consistent poets is of the poem crudely stanza. second poor of the most stanza second to nature of of Poor written and has a bad confusion caused by syntax. In "joy you thought" from the tongue is in meaning other than the powerful joy of youth?the ence is the of the point the comparison. damages ets than simple stanza?but syntax meant. does yet does harm, The last overstressed not for me because three the Shakespeare could obtain; syntax of the first stanza, especially clumsy, in verses In these the sound." light scansion of accent (the simplest cre feminine abet the ending) ending which literal, perfected the Mind" one remains curious the the impact of the last two strengthen And / the paralleling in finds seeks. From "Henceforth, ness of the mind's and shadow long and the of richness of a make and beyond passion the self. at and syntax times in damage Bogan verses of emotional says something are the stanza and the confusion them, in his thick syntactical Piece" the "Didactic syntax more says Bogan's of the last verse the identifies the joy differ in it, is dislocated force less and heavy-handed of the more or else very passage. confused clich?s, Here than with the she some alliteration. The first stanza, however, is well written and of high generalizing power, and the last two stanzas are one of the most perfectly modulated analogies in English 119 Criticism poetry. The that way but sea; is not phenomenological, image easily enough, the poem has no one what since hint of that. The it could have been pushed though in a hears is one's shell view mind's of not blood, is experience strange, distant, and modified by emotion and memory, but the line to reality there; the echo is of truth. What is true is truly loved, even at a distance. Love moves in grief and dreams, mix themes say her poems other. by for the the out said "I there. of is a delicate "Second says as less to sleeping to is still of her poems; Song," from or descends comes often. What in many darkly, deeply, sleeping," the her explicitly is lucid and is crossed passion delicacy or anal, or The be salt, black may provender." phrase vaginal, or can to say so is not to all I know but the of force neither; prove explain since the power share such of sources; many phrase, (presumably) phrases comes in the in some remains Its force incalculable. poem phrase literally "Second the Song" farewell whose "Black in context, as though she were applying her own part from its unexpectedness rule in "Sub Contra" that notes should be "delicate and involute" but "Let there sound from root music's note One / can rage understand." to offer "All that is worth / Grief. Give that She asks of wine in "To Wine." beat again." Grief is in the strength of her dreams. Dreams open on reality that the day does not reckon, reality of the mind and, as she hints once in a while, perhaps the touch kingdom of "Come, each is sometimes for its the Maine, the for of freeing and form's A undernotes. but unconscious; even when lucidities a to her keep center severe of touch in her sounding a conscience, (I like to think) extremes where or in art untrammeled the a vested memory pretension, native her she mind's with of for truth without rockscape irradiate describes, criticism modernism celebrating never loses murmurous passion grass; In her beyond. sexuality, verse she of the meet and other. . Sleep in . Surely, Never ." fresh magnificently asks whether they (spaced concise and dream; It dreaming. ant, whale, flower, palm, corridor glassy dream. their bee, : replies in the whispers trouble is about hers) periods phrases, Never, for them, the dark turreted house reflects itself In the depthless stream. The stream is of the mind's not depth-less, The mind. to be shades of we are voice and it may depth measured, cannot haunted yet the house of the poem iswell built. Two poems, of her best accounts imagined "The Dream" ful and cross. 120 known of and less dreamlike Perhaps the clarity Sleeping for me of be deeper. and the stream Since goes in or of "The Sleeping though very development, very myth, are well done, in which the dreams conscious is the beyond their is a retold than other poems narrative it reflective utterance, "Medusa" Fury," far how "The Dream" and dreams, "The say meaning; Fury," like less are a dream. success flash visibility in or of Freudian poems' "Medusa" lyrics. livelier lyrics in motion not motion; are active than most. motion. stop one has is about note the What the poem in so, especially fixes motion; so that it stops, arrow not does Bogan's like Medusa, fixes motion its Zeno's place. of The is itself motion, stopped bell tipped is about, beyond does active its make example in steadier unlike of her and shape she not has fixed which "Medusa," fly. and those Medusa, one each changeless, sound. is not made the legend, it sounds in get and image becoming She, one usurped reversals earned persuasively stillness, as not retold, quite objects, If startlingness and heard. struck, not the its motion perfects Good does or meanings, or in mine. way, clear. The is legend as but although allegorical, private experience. allegory, to death, of fear, the the time, eternity, analogies, past, apply paralysis are not such and the poem of trance, but analogies, given meanings, no are to of them. subclasses of a class; any provides bridge Analogies larger are not each so and other's when subclasses made except meanings, intentionally are sources its in the way Nor the that by psychic signals. poem's meaning sources are of the within "The Dream" and "The part meaning psychic Sleep to Sources and the but does the poem empower poem; ing Fury." analogies help not it It and them. say stops. happens; One may a moment is of the most "Old Countryside" Its sensuous description surface which difficulties make "we" is unidentified, The and brother the day sister. the first time must be occurs fourth stanza last severe the stillness which has the images fourth time stops snow, could be much matter. were and first occurs stanzas, Memory even it could is elusive. sequence un painfully "All time the the of is present in a and at that place space, least one except time "far The cannot that past back" endured in vision. winter to friends, refer come has irremediably far one and time, from the time of the third suggests "in the stanza since nearer that space, of stillest the Chronologically the "winter before first lovers, proof" stanzas in of tell the relation between the to on a stormy day. The the memory since" "long long long since. "Far back" stanza. stranger. in the country house since earlier. One makes is unsaid, what silence generic: between time; present lyrics in the language. suggestive hold; obscure perhaps time to a time refers the and yet can eye the of the attic remembered stanza third The etched as firm impression of clarity is so final that it is startling to find is the silence. The heard, two is seems and as though the the and year" fourth stanza, dry leaves" and the time of the earlier. It contemporary, does not as does the poem. One detail puzzles, either an odd ellipsis or a shift to the godlike, the we pulling down oak leaves in a winter of dry leaves, as though they were the agents of the a lyric poem, total change. The detail in general is simply the finest I know in in the clarity of what is seen and in the integrity of what is felt: "The summer like thunder, a wooden along cloudy day 121 Criticism / The bell, attic / Rang floor in . . . the ," ". storm . .we . . . ," the heard the "mirror cock / cast Shout the its unplaceable then the the cry, axe's of perfection Far love we back, The scrawled Red to the sound and saw, in the vine shudder, thorns, a moment / Delay clear pain and, of of stillest and as sharp the after last the axe's stroke," and stanza: the year, rose-branch the can sight show bear, The thin hound's body arched against the snow. The The poem anapestic iambics, are rhythms is in substitution and the being the meter hers; uniquely form called the "the in much normal in trimeter graceful heroic is conventional quatrain." nineteenth- Except and no variation stanza two, without for four variation. anapests, twentieth-century occurs that one could not find in Dry den's heroic quatrains. The quatrain is traditionally used for and explicit meditation and narrative, generalizing, (Dryden's Annus Mirabilis a Country in Written it is used for here Gray's Elegy Churchyard); particulariz ing, and Its meditation. implicit memories. is "narration" the narrating and relating of in Gray and Dryden, it focuses motion and stillness in a it and achieves tones; quietly echoing sharpness of definition unique in the examples I know of the form, either historical or modern. Like much In "Song for the Last Act," perhaps her greatest poem and certainly the one I find most moving, her powerfully controlled energies throb with a different res onance. Of all her poems it has the most visible frame (a variation of the refrain verse is repeated at both the beginning and end of each of the three stanzas) and the most radical Now of wildness and meaning image. that I have your face by heart, I look at Less Where its features quince than its and melon, darkening as yellow frame young flame, Lie with quilled dahlias and the shepherd's crook. a Beyond, garden. ease in insolent There, The lead and marble figures watch the show Of yet another summer loath to go Although the scythes hang in the apple trees. Now that I have your face by heart, I look. Now that I have your voice by heart, I read In the black chords upon a dulling page that Music Whose The staves Unprinted I must The Now 122 is not meant for music's emblems mix with words are over shuttled with cage, that shake and bleed. a stark silence. In a double dream out the spell too swift. beat's storm, The the notes stream. running shift in the dark. that I have your voice by heart, I read. that I have your heart by heart, I see Now The their with wharves great and ships architraves; The rigging and the cargo and the slaves a On a broken under beach strange sky. O not departure, but a voyage done! The rust red Now music breaks its on only bleed; notes I have to as one mystery, the music includes are streams." The cage; over with the to an third and my even stanza, in last death. the stanza, clear abundantly of oncoming much first and the certainly, as moves poem plangent the red Beside Now 123 Criticism rust and the dream" details was stream book Teasdale's Poetry. The in winter locked some love knowledge in Modern water into "double from first downward, from the away shifting a the sea's port, edge of image image, of realized with as much stanza's, . . Its notes a "In book.) It is a traditional and The echoes and is like knowing the beyond read however, meaning, general Like / stanza silence shake words, the To storming the music addressed in Achievement seems more same metaphors: mix with subject feeling. to the shift of (The image from Sara "Secret Treasure" music in the and from that I have (the music)." the second in the and through second in portrait sur-rationality "Now returns, The silence. regret as much and control stanza's, on shaded and meaning image feeling beauty a self-inconsistent is to relate the formulable silence. lines small by heart, it. The music the person in does, and meaning to repeat the emblems reaches the I read read praised by Bogan that Garden" Darkening In not "Fear the two by sl book Strange Victory, lines and influenced probably one and passage, in face a is general, and needs in music stanza and musical voice understanding what the the is face reaches, the your not to and pain and passion. To understand the share A the firm shapes, yet seemingly nature parts. quite statable shuttled clear: and with of the first stanza precisely itself and are is in its tending musical look," paraphrase is not for music's page the staves I see. and of varied is heart beyond To passion. creeps sun. a window by time and itself painted with flowers, by or the face is framed by a garden behind which garden; that "Now by loose the Art seeming. relation the I heart, by stanza: weeps vine heart, description in the opening The metaphor of a visualize face anchor long by statement Neither garden. stanza. for the second is another second the heart your frame is darkened gives on an actual prepares have I have that exactly your and downward, in a way is the stone; first stanza is mellow The firmness whose which the the salt herb, in the lengthening Beside cannot on stand bales Its as that . and of any the the long poem anchor vine the salt herb, in the lengthening greatness, strangeness measure of exact the creeps sun. that I have your heart by heart, I see. of meaning an image as as the pain sound touched in our weeps as with of heritage: is a It long as and poem, is always, greatness as great finally, is English to my substantial is to spoken say too argument. For case the say that some of her the poems. To little. For since value for poetic lyrics will in inheres last eternity, the worth of her poems is not finally to be measured by the length of enduring. To have written "Song for the Last Act," "Old Countryside," "Men Loved Wholly "Didactic Wisdom," Beyond "The Alchemist," very nearly ments of Next Issue "Second comparable the human "Medusa," Piece," Song," "Night," excellence spirit, and to deserve Poetry Stephen Berg Hanson Lawrence Kramer John Logan W. S. Merwin Steven Dennis Dennis Charles Orlen Saleh Schmitz Simic T?te James C. K. 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