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Name______________________________ Date___________________ Essay Grading Guide Excellent Essays – 9-8- 100-95 Central Idea: is significant, original, and mature and supported with substantial, insightful, relevant detail and analysis. Organization/Development is handled so that the essay conveys a sense of controlling purpose and orderly progression; the thought moves – clearly, coherently, and with compelling logic toward a conclusion; paragraphs are developed with substantial support and suitable proportion and emphasis; transitions between paragraphs are explicit and graceful. Sentence Structure is skillfully constructed and displaying fluency, economy, and effective variety; together with diction, sentence structure is the best evidence of style, the distinctive, natural display of a good mind at work. Diction is everywhere appropriate to the writer’s subject, purpose, audience, and occasion; distinctive in precision, economy, illustrating wit, imagery, irony, and/or metaphor – all with unusual freshness and vividness. Mechanics is notable for the consistent use of conventional English grammar, punctuation, and spelling; what few errors there are do not detract from the generally high quality of the essay as a whole. Good Essays – 7-6 – 94-85 Central Idea: is clearly defined, supported with less substantial, concrete, or relevant detail. Organization/Development: conveys a sense of controlling purpose, but may lack some orderly progression; paragraphs are developed with sufficient support but occasional disproportionate or inappropriate emphasis; transitions are clear but sometimes abrupt, mechanical, or monotonous. Analysis is less thorough or insightful than 9-8 papers. Sentence Structure: is generally well-constructed with indication of fluency, economy, and variety; diction and sentence structure reflect appropriate voice. Stylistically less mature than 9-8 papers. Diction: is appropriate to the writer’s subject, purpose, audience, and occasion; occasionally distinctive in precision, economy, and the use of general English. Mechanics: Generally uses conventional English grammar, punctuation, and spelling; few, if any errors that detract from the overall quality of the essay as a whole. Fair essays – 5 – 84-80 Central Idea: is apparent but may be trite, trivial, general, or self-evident; the idea is supported with some concrete detail, but detail is occasionally repetitious, irrelevant, or sketchy. Organization/Development: Plan and method of the essay is apparent, but not consistently fulfilled; not as much support for the central idea than that found in 7-6 papers; contains some analysis, but rather simplistic. Some transitions are present, but they may be inappropriate or monotonous. Sentence Structure: is rather immature; generally correctly structured, but lacking in variety, economy, and/or forcefulness. Diction: is generally appropriate to the subject, purpose, audience, and occasion; generally the words are clear, but not distinctive; some misuse of words may appear. Mechanics: Generally uses conventional English grammar, punctuation, and spelling; some errors occur, but do not detract from the overall quality of the essay as a whole. Developing Essays – 4-3 – 79-70 Central Idea: is vague or confused or too large and general; unsupported by specific, concrete, relevant detail; unpersuasive, or answers only part of the prompt. Organization/Development: Plan and purpose of the essay is somewhat flawed; either the generalizations are left undeveloped, or they are developed by detail that is irrelevant, redundant, or inconsistent; paragraphs lack unity, coherence, or support; if there are transitions, they may be unclear, misleading, or ineffective; thought and planning may display illogic or insufficient effort. These essays may be either all assertions with no specific references, or plot summary and/or paraphrasing with no analysis. Some misinterpretations of the text may be present. Sentence Structure: Some sentences are lacking in unity or coherence; run-ons, comma splices, or fragments may appear; some expression is marked by awkwardness, incompleteness, ambiguity, redundancy, or immaturity. Diction: is sometimes inappropriate in being vague, imprecise, immature, too colloquial, or substandard; frequent misuse of words may appear. Mechanics: Clarity of meaning is obscured by some departures from conventional general English grammar, punctuation, and/or spelling. Poorly Written Essays – 2-1 – 69-50 Central Idea: is very vague or confused; unsupported by relevant detail; may address very little of the prompt. Organization/Development: Compounds the weaknesses of 4-3 papers and may be unacceptably brief; plan and purpose of the paper not apparent; little or no relevant detail is provided. Significant misinterpretations of the text may be present Sentence structure: Many sentences structure errors occur. The weaknesses of 4-3 papers is compounded. Diction: There is little clarity in either sentence structure or choice of diction. Mechanics: Clarity of meaning is seriously obscured by departures from conventional English grammar Essays that do not respond to prompt/Very little writing in evidence – 0 – <50