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The Learning Resource Center Presents:
Computer Science &
Electrical Engineering
What is
Deliberate Plagiarism
Copying or buying a paper
 Recycling one of your papers from
another class
 Presenting the words and ideas of
other writers as if they were your
Unintentional Plagiarism
Copying and pasting online sources
directly into your paper when taking
 Paraphrasing information when
taking notes, but forgetting to name
the source
 Paraphrasing that is too close to the
original (patchwriting), even when
you cite the source
What is a source?
Any print material: books, journals,
magazines, newspapers, ads, etc.
Any electronic or nonprint material:
online journals, web sites, email,
films, TV, plays, songs, speech,
lecture, etc.
What kind of
information isn’t
necessary to
Information that is found in 4-5
other sources without being cited
General common knowledge that your
readers will already know
George W. Bush was governor of
Texas before becoming president of
the United States.
Insider trading is illegal.
Common knowledge
in a specific field
 Depression is caused by biological factors
and psychological and social stresses.
(Common knowledge in psychology)
An ultrasound machine can be used to
treat a patient in both acute and chronic
phases of healing. (Common knowledge in
physical therapy)
Don’t cite facts that someone
could easily locate.
 Communication giants Viacom and
CBS merged in 1999.
Fr. Lawton has been president of LMU
since May 1999.
Don’t cite
Results from your own
research: interviews,
surveys, observations,
data, etc.
Your Personal Views
and Interpretations
What kind of
the source?
Summarized Information
that isn’t common knowledge
A shock model indicates that a shock occurrence
at a random time induces a random amount of
damage. There is a stream of papers concerning
shock models. Esary & Marshall [10] discuss the
properties of the survival function of a device….
Sobczyk [26] presents shock models to derive
the lifetime distributions for fatigue crack growth.
Example taken from
Min-Hsiung Hsieh & Shuen-Lin Jeng
“Accelerated Discrete Degradation Models for Leakage Current
of Ultra-Thin Gate Oxides”
Paraphrased information
The composition, shape, and size of
semiconductor nanostructures give a wide range
of nanoelectronic devices. Controlling these
factors by means of known semiconductor
technology opens up an opportunity to employ
quantum effects in different ways. For instance,
1-D or 2-D semiconductor structures are used
for resonant tunneling devices [2], 0-D quantum
dots for single-electron transistors [1], quantum
wells and dots for lasers [3], electron spin
operation in quantum dots, artificial molecules,
and rings for elements of quantum computers
Example taken from
Chun-Yen Chang, “ The Highlights in the Nano World”
Direct quotations
Incorporating another person’s ideas
exactly word for word into your paper.
Hsieh and Jeng’s [1] research attempts “to
provide a modeling & analysis procedure
for evaluating device reliability with
measurements from a discrete
degradation process.”
Ideas from others via personal
communication such as a professor,
friend, acquaintance.
According to Prof. Blystone from a
lecture on February 9, 2005, the
notion of the deity determines all
practices in the culture.
How do I avoid plagiarizing
Skillfully integrating sources into your writing is
not easy. Achieving a balance between
presenting the ideas of others and your own
interpretations is what academic writing is all
As you write more papers in your major, you
will become more knowledgeable in the subject
matter and better able to summarize and
restate others’ ideas.
In the meantime, follow some do’s and don’ts
and you won’t be guilty of plagiarism.
Pre-read before reading: Scan the
introduction, section headings &
conclusion before you start reading to get
an overview.
Take notes or highlight the thesis, main
ideas and interesting information
pertinent to your research.
Be sure to clearly indicate in your notetaking when you are adding your
comments of the material read.
Write a summary IN YOUR OWN WORDS
when finished reading and taking notes.
Copy direct quotations exactly from the
original source, word for word. Use
quotation marks.
Keep track of all bibliographic information:
Full name of author, title and subtitle,
journal, magazine, etc. and volume number,
dates of publication, webpage, database,
complete page numbers of journal articles
and the date you retrieved the information,
Copy a passage and change only an
occasional word here and there. This
is called patchwriting and qualifies as
plagiarism even if you cite the
 Cut and paste material directly into
your paper without summarizing,
paraphrasing, or quoting.
 Forget to cite!
What exactly is
Summarizing is….
Restating information in your own
words in a shortened version.
A summary includes the thesis or central
argument and supporting main ideas.
Do not add your opinions in the middle of
summarizing unless you have clearly marked
these ideas as yours and not the original
author’s. Reintroduce the author’s name to
clarify any ambiguity to the reader.
Paraphrasing is…
A restatement of the original
passage in your own words.
Only sentences or a paragraph are paraphrased.
More information should be summarized.
To avoid patchwriting, it is best to set the
original aside and then write your
understanding of the author’s ideas.
Always check your paraphrase against the
original for accuracy. You do not want to
misrepresent the author.
Example of a Paraphrase
(taken from the Purdue University Online Writing Lab.
The original passage:
• Students frequently overuse direct quotation in taking
notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the
final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your
final manuscript should appear as directly quoted
matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount
of exact transcribing of source materials while taking
notes. Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd
ed. (1976): 46-47.
A legitimate paraphrase:
• In research papers students often quote
excessively, failing to keep quoted material
down to a desirable level. Since the problem
usually originates during note taking, it is
essential to minimize the material recorded
verbatim (Lester 46-47).
For both paraphrasing and summarizing, it
is imperative that you understand
completely the material. It may take 2 or
3 readings to reach the point where you
can restate in your own words what was
meant in the original source.
Cite the source within the body of your
Still Confused?
Are you still a little confused about how to cite the
sources you used?
Various disciplines use their own style to
acknowledge sources, for example, MLA & APA
Engineering/Computer Science use a simplified
version of the Chicago Manual of Style (CMS).
It consists of numbering each source [1] within the
body of the paper.
Numbered references at end of paper contain all the
bibliographic information necessary for a reader to
locate the source.
Helpful Resources for Citation Styles
Library links to APA, MLA, and Chicago Manual
Style (CMS):
APA Online:
MLA Online:
CMS Online:
Writing tutors in the LRC
Call: 310-338-2847
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